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Reviews for the love never could be

By : DarkBreed
  • From ANON - Feryal on July 18, 2003
    It's called spelling. You might want to learn that, Oh, and all those a/ns all over the place really gets annoying. If you're going to post a fan fic, why don't you try not being such a fucking idiot about it.
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  • From ANON - MistressFluffy on July 18, 2003
    Great story,you have got to finish it,I love sess/kag pairings.All my fanfics I post are on MediaMiner.org,they are under the name of the author Sessieluv2,I would love for you check them out!I am thinking about posting some here,too.

    Also please update!!
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  • From ANON - kagomereborn on July 16, 2003
    never really could.....but i might like you better if you checked out my flic close encounters, or paradise hotel^_^ **nug**
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  • From ANON - animechick262003 on July 15, 2003
    Hello, I started your fic but ,I didn't get a chance to read all of it. I won't be as cold as some about your writing ,but I will say it it would be a good idea to find someone to review your work prior to posting. Don't be too hard on yourself or take others words to heart. We are all amatures here on this site unless someone has a pulitzer that the rest of us no nothing about ,but than that's another story all together. If you enjoy writing than do your thing, and continue to do so. I mean I have yet to meet a person who doesn't need some improvement, although some may think they don't. Hell even I can use the work my punctuation sucks. LOL Anywyas practice makes perfect, so just keep writing and believe me eventually everything will flow naturally.
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  • From Sei on July 15, 2003
    *shrug* Most writers who need help, want help. I merely gave you some advice on how to improve your writing. No one can or will force you to take the advice; I certainly won't. I understand that you are most likely young, and therefore a bit edgy when you receive a real review. That is normal. After you've been writing longer, however, you will grow to appreciate the reviews that don't say "OMG THiS IS GR8!!!!111" The reviewers who actually say something are the most honest, and one day, you will ize ize that.

    You have an interesting idea. What you do with it is, as always, your choice.
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  • From ANON - kagomeReborn on July 14, 2003
    i hate you, and i'm going to continue hating you till you update....just thought you should know that...
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  • From ANON - I LISTENED! on July 14, 2003
    OK, I LISTENED SO HURRY UP WITH THE NEXT FUCKING CHAPTER!
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  • From on July 12, 2003
    How did sesshomaru go through the well!?!?!?! please tell me!!!!!!!!! love the story, please continue!!!!!!!
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  • From ANON - Kat on July 12, 2003
    That was an evil cliffhanger!!!! Write more!! :)
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  • From Sei on July 12, 2003
    You need to do some major work on your grammar, spelling, and overall structure of your chapters. Also, you should leave out the author's comments that are throughout the chapters. Holy, ly, most of what you have written makes no sense.

    You should try to make your sentences flow, instead of being jumbled together. Imagine that you are reading a book, and try to pick out the mistakes you have made. Perhaps if you view it as something other than what you have written, you can see the errors. (
    Lad
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  • From ANON - Ennovymoon on July 12, 2003
    I loved it!!
    Hurry up and Update!
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  • From DarkBreed on July 12, 2003
    im good
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  • From ANON - Kurai on July 02, 2003
    its Kikyou, not Kikuyu ....
    hm...formatting was a bit messy but overall pretty good. Very OOC on Kagome's part, some OOC in everyone else ...
    well good luck writing more~
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  • From ANON - Ashleigh on July 01, 2003
    Finally Kagome becomes a hard ass! Update soon, This story is really good so far.
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  • From ANON - DarkBreed on June 29, 2003
    since im not getting many reviews i want it to look like i am so you guys will read. I'm going to kill Inu-Yasha in this story.....oooooooooppppppppsssssss!!!
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