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Reviews for When all is Lost

By : vampire7princess
  • From ANON - Megan Consoer on June 14, 2004
    I really like this story alot. Can you write some more chrs?
    rs?
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  • From ANON - weijaa on November 22, 2003
    If you don't update.....soon......I will sic my army of killer ferrets on you!!!!
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  • From ANON - dreamer on July 23, 2003
    Hey, i really like your fic but i think something is wrong with ch.5. It starts off that theyre kissing and then screscreams shipo and then it ends? The next one is of her talking about her home. What happened? Anyway, can you try to fix it. I like it and update soon.
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  • From ANON - Ashleigh on July 07, 2003
    Update!!!!! This story is soooo good. ^___~
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  • From ANON - kagomereborn on July 06, 2003
    great! *waitng*
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  • From ANON - Ashley on July 06, 2003
    Dont listen to what people say.
    It's true that it does have some resemblence to ADSALAD, but you wrote it.
    You didn' steal it. Dont worry. Your doing fine with the story.
    Im also glad that Sesshy actually loves Kagome. and the same with Kag.
    Keep up th good work.
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  • From ANON - Ashley on July 05, 2003
    Thank you for spacing it out.
    Its a lot better to read now.
    Update soon please.
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  • From ANON - treuse on July 05, 2003
    sess was 2 cold 2 but i must say that he is not ooc. continue this story plz i like it.
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  • From ANON - kagomereborn on July 05, 2003
    can't wait , write more soon^_^

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  • From ANON - Ashleigh on July 04, 2003
    OMG!!!! Sesshy is such an ass! Update soon. This story is awesome so far.
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  • From ANON - Ashley on July 04, 2003
    Can you make the story a little neater.
    Like put spaces and give a seperate line for each saying, Like when they say someting.
    Its kinda hard to read it when it's all together like it is.
    But, the good thing is, is that I like your writing style. It's.... different to say the most.
    Keep up the good work.
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  • From ANON - Ashley on July 04, 2003
    Man.......... Sess is mean.
    But he's like that in general.
    But Kagome will change Sess.
    She will, at least I hope she does.
    Sess will learn to love Kag and hopefully treust her since she is going to be his mate soon.
    Well anyway keep up the good work.
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  • From ANON - lil weirdo... on July 04, 2003
    wow! really good so far...i like your writing style! its very unique ^_^ i...well i REALLY LIKE YOUR STORY! ITS SO KOOL! update soon ya? thanx a bunch!
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  • From ANON - Bsasami153 on July 03, 2003
    It looks interesting your story, but I think you should separate the quotes and thoughts. Its a little confusing when both are together.
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  • From ANON - lil weirdo... on July 02, 2003
    hey...nice story so far...great i..hm..hmm just try makin the chaps a lil longer for me eh? hehe i like reading...ya well keep it up! update soon!
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