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By : LadyoWestWestGate
  • From ElementalDemonessSorceress on April 25, 2007
    I really like this story alot. Can you please write some more chapters?
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  • From ElementalDemonessSorceress on April 24, 2007
    I really like this story alot. Can you please write some more chapters?
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  • From ANON - Megan Consoer on January 08, 2007
    I really like this story alot. Can you please write some more chapters?
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  • From ANON - Megan Consoer on August 29, 2006
    I really like this story alot. Can you please write some more chapters?
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  • From ANON - oy on February 02, 2006
    Kagomes mothers name is asami
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  • From ANON - kitsune_youkai_jade on April 29, 2005
    HEY LOVE YOUR STORY!! READ SOME OF YOUR OTHER FICS, YOUR A GREAT AUTHOR!! I LOVE KAG/SESS FICS
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  • From ANON - Anon on January 15, 2004
    that fucking grate
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  • From ANON - Mija on October 18, 2003
    ooh Ive waited a long time for an update to this story thank you soo much I love it..totally hot and totally great hope to read another update soon huggles and smiles Mija..:-)
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  • From ANON - MomOfFluffyAndFluffier on October 17, 2003
    hope your daughter is ok...that's what's important.
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  • From ANON - Eqlipse_Moon on October 09, 2003
    I've been waiting soooo long!!!
    Where's the next chappy!!!????
    *Laying on the floor crying in agony*
    I need the next chapter!!
    Review soon PLEASE!!
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  • From ANON - RekkaShinen on October 08, 2003
    Good to hear about your man!! YAY!! Please update soon! Please? And let Serena's pet be Darien...*sniff*

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  • From ANON - dragonflyelj on October 08, 2003
    Welcome Back! I loved this story when you started it, and am anxiously awaiting a new chapter. Update soon please.
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  • From ANON - Katalyst on October 05, 2003
    Okay... I'm sad this fic gets such good reviews and such a high rating.

    First of all... you seriously need to proofread. At one point, you're screwing up the -names-. (Who's Sierra? Because in the middle of sex, Kagome seems to have been transplanted!) Also, you leave sentances completely unfinished... I don't even know if you mean to or not, because there's simply no punctuation. And you have a big tendency to typo (to for do) and then not fix them. It's nonsensical, and makes this damned difficult to read.

    That might be bearable... but additionally, there's no real plot. Or if there is, we haven't seen it yet, and you're at chapter five. (By the way, your chapter names make me want to stab something. Pick a format and stick with it.) And youaracaracterization... have you -seen- the series or read it at all? Because only Sesshomaru has even the vaguest semblance of his original personality.... and that's stretching it. :/

    Add to that -- the sex isn't sexy, it's ludicrous. "almost swoon at the power mantingting between his legs?" o.o; Who almost passes out from seeing penis? I mean... god. It's almost like a parody. :/

    This isn't a flame, btw :P Flames are personal attacks on the writer, not critiques of the writing itself. You can feel free to delete this, if you want... however if you're at all serious about writing, I suggest that you start at -least- having someone beta-read your fics.
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  • From ANON - LKhushrenada on September 13, 2003
    Gurl, I'm behind u all the way!!

    I hope that the slut causing all this trouble would stop, cause it sounds like u and ur b/f are tight.

    Hope he's out soon....get a GOOD lawyer, if it gets down to going to court.

    I totally support u if they've got no evidence.......the INJUSTICE!

    And still he's in jail?
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  • From ANON - No One Know\'s on August 24, 2003
    Awesome story so far! and I really hope your b/f is gonna be ok, man; I would have kicked that bitch's ass!
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