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Reviews for Dreams Of Tease

By : EchoedDreams
  • From ANON - anonymous on October 16, 2003
    Wow i really like plotplot of this story. It's very very good. One suggestion though... please think about your words alot more before you use them. As an example you used the word Facade for Face.. But facade is more like a fake face. Also watch out for clinical terms.. Kissing stops being romantic and intriguing when you describe their mouths as "oriffices". I dunno if you're using a thesaurus or what but just watch out more about the words you use. Also watch out for your decriptions, simesimes they are really confusing, such as "he turned into a night's being human" I don't understand that sentence at all, but that may just be me.

    In anycase i must say again that it is a wonderful story and I hope you don't take the critisicm personally. i can't wait to read the next chapter!
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  • From ANON - toosexyformyclothes on September 04, 2003
    Alright I'm ready for more of course. So update as soon as possible thanx you!
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  • From ANON - Cecilia on August 31, 2003
    BlueSaiyanChick,


    All 3 chapters were very well written, addictive, and of course I think extra lemony. please continue dont leave us hanging at the end. peace.
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  • From ANON - hakuryuu on August 30, 2003
    Awesome story!!! You really have a very nice, vivid writing style! A few errors, just typos and such, but none that really stood out... anyway, can't wait to read more!
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  • From ANON - Videl on August 30, 2003
    u should make the next chapter because the 3rd one was the bombs the foreplay was exiciting and the Sango and Miroku thing is funny make the next chapter more enticing put something very hmmm let me c intriguing in the ritual evil there we go

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  • From ANON - Kat on August 30, 2003
    AWWWWWWWWW......What a EVIL cliffy!!!! :)
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  • From animechick262003 on August 29, 2003
    I liked this chapter.u tou totally caught me off guard with the hair changing thing. Not to mention the under water cave. I really like this fic! keep going!
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  • From ANON - eternally inu-chan\'s on August 29, 2003
    Wahhhh!
    The lemon! The lemon!
    Update soon, please.
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  • From ANON - Videl on August 25, 2003
    Read the second chapter. I can't wait for the next chapter. This was exciting, excillerating, .........I can;t even explain it. Great fic and write chapter 3!! Go!
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  • From ANON - Soudesuka_Shurikens on August 24, 2003
    maybe you can work on writing a nar/kag/inu
    lemon. because i don't see any of those out
    there. at first i thought you were headed in that direction when
    naraku showed up. but i didn't expect all that other stuff.
    wow..big shockers.
    very cool.
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  • From ANON - Mija on August 23, 2003
    damn that was just priceless..lol...Inu crying out that hes blind because he sees Kikyo naked..dang that was just too darn funny..loved the chap and cant wait to read the next,,sooo update really really soon K?? ty ty ty
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  • From EchoedDreams on August 22, 2003
    To LemonFreak/Animegirl -------


    My bust! Inuyasha owns the Tetsusaiga and Sesshomaru owns the Tetsaiga thingy. Sorry, my spelling error ^_______^;;

    To #1Kikyohater

    It's not the end of the fanfic yet! I'm ending that part of the story in the next chapter. It will be filled with lemony goodness! Yey! *throws confetti all over aff.net*

    *cough*
    Well Those are my responses.

    BlueSaiyanChick
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  • From ANON - #1kikyohater on August 22, 2003
    Nice ending.I suggest you make more fafic.You've got natural talent for this.
    Later!
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  • From ANON - animechick262003/LemonFreak on August 22, 2003
    Hey it's me animechick262003 aka LemonFreak. Anyways I loved this! I think you are doing and excellent Job. I got a tad bit confused with who had Tenseiga. Did Inu have Tenseiga or did Sess? Not sure but I am sure you'll let me know. Anyways like I said exceelt work and thanks for reviewing my fic Ode To Lemon!! And Yes I will continue to review as long as you post.


    Kiea
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  • From ANON - foof 76 on August 22, 2003
    Very good opening! Ie ite it when Inu has naughty dreams:) Please update, and more I/K!
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