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Reviews for Desire, Love and Lust

By : Kindite
  • From Iyasu on November 30, 2006
    The second chapter was good, but the first chapter needs work. I mean seriously, why on earth would Inuyasha actually tell Shippou to get Kagome for him? Everyone knows the relationship between those two. He would have simply gotten her himself.
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  • From ANON - ja\'net on June 17, 2005
    I am waiting for more. Please more it's very good.
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  • From ANON - fihsy-chan on October 17, 2003
    PLEASE UPDATE SOON!!! I WIL LOOK FORWARD TO IT!!
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  • From ANON - Taiki on October 16, 2003
    hey! That was a nice start! The chapters are too short but if it's due the writers block (I'm not a writer at all *lol* not an english writer *g*) maybe some suggestions might help? Finish this scene - pleeeease. It sounds so promising. But besides the lemon - what kind of story will you write? If it's the fullmoon night - isn't it dangerous for them? Some Youkais may show off...

    And about Miroku and Sango - I would love to read about them ^^ They're such a nice - and hot - couple *g*
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  • From ANON - Mija on October 07, 2003
    hehe me soo likes it when Inu shreds things...specially Kagome's clothes, but oopsie no claws hehe...soo love it when he gets frustrated with her bra too..great chap luved it please update soon..:-) huggles and smiles Mija
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  • From ANON - stayingput29 on October 07, 2003
    OK now what was that...lol... I want more you could have finished the scene.... OH what a tease... lol... I think it is going great so far... Yes Chaps way to short... but I understand the collage thing and the writers block (bangs head on desk)... Collage however we need the damn writers block we do not...lol.. Buthoughought is waing ing good until I was abruptly cut off...lol... I want more.... GREAT JOB!!! keep going and good luck on the writers block... sighsssss.... I know it welll..... Mules
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  • From ANON - Jade Queen on October 07, 2003
    Mmmm....Now that I've finally seen Inuyasha, dear Kindite, I can better understand this story! Awesome! What happens next, I wonder? You must leave some for the imagination....
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  • From ANON - Can\'t Say on September 28, 2003
    If you don't write more, I wont be happy to say the least.
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  • From ANON - Youknowwho on September 22, 2003
    Oh, yay their going to have sex yay iam so happy, this just makes my frickin day. Wow, lets be more creative Cyndi....... other than that its nicely written.
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  • From ANON - ari on September 22, 2003
    Update soon!!!!!
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  • From ANON - bebejinx on September 17, 2003
    I will say that this is a promising strart. You have good grammar. I hope the chapters are longer though. The beginning is okay but could you add more description possibly? I know most people know what the cahracters look like but it never hurts to say what Inuyasha's or shippo's or anyone's hair feels like or explain the color differently. Like calling it ebony or midnight shade. What's the setting? What does the hot springs feel like? Is there a breeze, are there trees? Visuals are a great thing.

    Also I know this is an Inu/KAg fic but will Sango and miroku be showing up?


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  • From ANON - PsYcHoKeLl on September 16, 2003
    well i can't say if it was good or bad yet, but it seems to me like a promising start.
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  • From ANON - miko hanyou on September 16, 2003
    ah,you left me hanging.now i can`t wait for the next chapter,i`m all hyper up about the for the future chapters
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  • From ANON - Helen on September 16, 2003
    Okay, I'm guessing that the three forms of Inuyasha is one when he's a hanyou, two he's a human, and three he's a full demon. Am I correct? Anyway, I would like to comment that cha chapters need to be a little longer in length, but other than that you're off to a good start. So, please continue and update as soon as possible. Ja ne.
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  • From ANON - shadow demon on September 15, 2003
    ok im guessing that one of them is going to be his evil form but fo how is it for god sake keep write write i need mo plezzzzz keep going cause the title is even got me wornding so plezzz keep going
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