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Reviews for Heart of Pain, Heart of Ice

By : Strawberries
  • From ANON - Sesshomarusgirl56 on April 21, 2004
    YES!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! YES!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! YES!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! SEQUAL YEA!!!!!!!!!!!!! IM SO HAPPY YOUR SUCH A GREAT WRITER AND SOME SEENS MAKE ME WANT TO CRY CAN YOU E MAIL ME THE TITLE OF YOU SEQUAL WHEN YOU GET TO IT!!!!!!!!!!!! I LOVE IT SO MUCH YOU SHOULD BE VERY PROUD OF YOURSELF AND YOUR WRITING TALENT!! IT INSPIERS ME TO BECOME A BETTER WRITER!!!!!!!!!!!! THANK YOU!!!!!!!!!!YES!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! YES!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! YES!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! SEQUAL YEA!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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  • From ANON - MistressAlf on April 21, 2004
    -Claps happily- Another wonderful chapter! I know you probably don't think as highly of your work as your fans do... But, yes, I loved this chapter. It was intense chapter thatwas,was, such fear and other delicate emotions are hard to express in words sometimes... Either a story will go beautifully at a chapter such as this, or it will go horribly cheesy and wrong. But, you pulled it off nicely. Short, sweet, and incredibly touching... It's very, very OOC of Sessh, but it was a great touch to see someone like the mighty Inu youkai of the Western Lands, Sesshomaru on his knees beside his human mate's bed, weak and wrought with despair, all over a bond focused on soley on joining a pair forever, in sync in mind, body and soul... It's touching in the extreme. -Sighs- I can't wait for the sequel or next, chapter, which ever you're doing. Read you later!
    -Ashley
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  • From ANON - theMaven on April 21, 2004
    Well done :)
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  • From ANON - Someone Out There on April 21, 2004
    Great, great chapter! Is this really the end or was that just for this chapter? I lhow how you have done this whole story, and glad you wrote so much in this last chapter. But I still want more from you -- and I hope that your still intending to do more!
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  • From on April 21, 2004
    I hope to be able to read the next fic you write. You write some of the best inuyasha fanfic the there. Keep up the good work.
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  • From ANON - Tori on April 21, 2004
    I have to admite I was somewhat worried at how you were going to handle the first meeting between Sess and Rin. I'm terrible at serious dialouge and that seemed hard to get through, but you pulled it off beautifully. This was my favorite chapter in the whole story, and the there is of course still some fun to be had! I can't wait for the sequal!
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  • From ANON - No One Knows on April 21, 2004
    Holy crap!! O.O! I can't wait for the sequel, you are such an amazing writer!!
    I loved the story and I'm not really even into angsty stories! It was just simple wonderful
    and I know the sequel will be just as grand. I'd love to read your novel if you do compleat one.
    I bet it'd be totally kick ass! ^^
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  • From ANON - Moon Dog on April 21, 2004
    *sighs* I am so glad when I saw another chapter for your story. I started dancing for joy when I read that you would indeed do a sequel. I love reading your stories, so plz never stop writing them. Also you should mention where Shippo is at this point of time. All the readers know is that he was with Inuyasha last. But since Inuyasha been keeping Rin company, what did he do with Shippo?
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  • From ANON - stella on April 20, 2004
    ok atleast u said there was a sequel coming. b/c i really want to know what happens next.can't wait.
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  • From ANON - New Fan on April 20, 2004
    You are done with story and you are writing a sequel yyiiiipppee!!! I can not wait till it is posted. Will this
    continue to be an angst or will some romance be in this sequel (in much later chapters). Be looking for
    that sequel. ^_^
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  • From ANON - Red Angel on April 20, 2004
    AHAHHGHGHHAAA!!! *clap clap clap clap clap!!!* Beautiful ending! And there better be a sequel!!!
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  • From ANON - Crystalia on April 20, 2004
    I have to say, that I was a little leery of this story, when I first started reading. With such dark subject matter, I was worried about how well it would be pulled off. It could not have been a story where Sesshoumaru marches in, kills the bad guy, and runs off with Rin..happily ever after--at least not that quickly. You did an absolutely beautiful job with this story. Everything is handled realistically, and even though this is an AU, you did an excellent job at keeping the cast in character. The final chapter really moved me. I was nearly in tears, and I am not a cryer. I can tell you put a lot of effort into your writing, and it really shows. I am thoroughly looking forward to the sequel.
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  • From ANON - friendlyreader on April 20, 2004
    *claps* very nice, exceptionally beautiful. i'm so glad they are on the road to acceptance - and i love the warmth rin feels in her heart. BEGININGS OF LOVE!!!!!!! oh, i'm so happy i might just break out into song. wonderful job and i'm glad your writing a sequel - this is definately a sequel story. there's soooooo much left to be said and i know i'm not alone in saying we all want to see the love and soulmate completion finally come together. your a brilliant writer with a true gift. give urself a pat on the back for a job well done! can't wait to read ur sequel!!!
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  • From ANON - blu on April 20, 2004
    NOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO!!!!!!! PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE WRITE SOME MORE CHAPTERS!! PLEASE THIS STORY IS MY FAVORITE OF ALL TIME I SWEAR ... CAN U DO A EPILOGUE OR SOMETHING THIS STORY ROCKS MY GREEN SOKS!!!!!

    bLu
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  • From ANON - animegirl007 on April 20, 2004
    I like to say," DAM THAT WAS EXCELLENT!!!!!!!!!"....This story is so powerful, and emotional ...I was crying so much ..when Rin final decide to see Sesshoumaru , I was screaming "YES"....you are the only authour who ever brought Sess to his knees.....That was a nice touch!!...to see Sesshoumaru showing hardcore emotions..I was shock.......I can not wait for the sequel..PLEASE DON'T MAKE IT AS DARK!!!!...I'm begging you....let them have a happy ever after ending......I also hope you are sending some of your work off to writing contests.....you are way to good not too.....Well, that it for now, I'll be waiting for the sequel........
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