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Reviews for Heart of Pain, Heart of Ice

By : Strawberries
  • From ANON - flowrers on April 20, 2004
    Jesus.... I have yet to find a fanfic out there that makes me quiver with such anticipation!!! You are the BEST! I recomend you to everyone, pls pls, hurry with the sequel!!! I'm dying here!!!
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  • From ANON - Nena on April 20, 2004
    Wow! This has been an awesome story. I wasn't sure how I was going to take Sess showing emotions other than anger,
    but by the way you discribed it, I felt the power of the bond instead. I do agree that time has to pass for
    Rin to be able to trust Sess, and if you want to move years into the future, I can see that happening. Will Naraku be part
    of the sequel? Obviously, he will be a shadow, bull hll he still manage to hurt her. I hope you explain why Naraku kher her
    to begin with in the next story. I am very curious to why he would raise a little girl. After all, it took a few years before
    he could abuse her, and he did hire a therapist for her. Good luck on your next story, and if you do an email updatet alert,
    SIGN ME UP!!!!!!
    See you in the sequel.
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  • From ANON - dragonflyelj on April 20, 2004
    Hey scarecrow! I just loved how you finished this! I can't wait for the sequel, you can bet I will be all over that! hehe. My favorite part of this whole chapter was when Sess was kneeling before her, and her perspective on how he looked. Huggles!
    Fly
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  • From ANON - anhimals on April 20, 2004
    im glad it ended good. yay! she finally accepted him. your story was great! i enjoyed it so much!!! it was actually the story that got me into dark fics! i am looking forward to your sequel. update soon! =]
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  • From ANON - Lestatgurl on April 20, 2004
    God, you are so very talented at storytelling, I could cry. The is a wonderful story, even with it's darkness, which is something I have only seen once before. And, trust me, I have read a LOT of fanfics. Keep up the good work and post another couple of chapters soon, ok? you're killing me here!
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  • From ANON - Sesshomarusgirl56 on April 20, 2004
    you have a grstorstory!!! you said chapter 16 was going to be your last (aww) i was hoping you would cotinue the story after she got better and her life after that b/c your story can go far!! (not to say that its all ready good) well im just a silly reviewer and your the writer so whatever well i hope you make a sequal or somthing and i saw your fic on mm.org great!! well byes!!!
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  • From ANON - Kae Noel on April 18, 2004
    *sighs* such a beautiful story, you really should write a sequel, *sighs* leaves you with a bit of a hope, a warmfuzzy and a bit of sorrow, such a lovely tale, like a gorgeous painting with broad strokes of color and emotion
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  • From ANON - Gonew/thwind on April 17, 2004
    A very deep story. Would luv to read the rest!
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  • From on April 13, 2004
    I wonder what Sesshoumaru will think nuYanuYasha and Rin keep writing. I just now read these new chapters. I think Sesshoumaru will me inquiring on what his brother was doing with Rin, what youkai wouldn't? It is a good story, continue.
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  • From ANON - jctl on April 13, 2004
    hi I realy like read this story i hope put chapter 16 up so.
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  • From ANON - flowers on April 11, 2004
    Hey, I don't know how much longer I can wait! I'm going to bug you to death with reviews everyday until you update!!!! FEAR ME!! FEAR MY UPDATE POWER OVER YOU!!! HURRY HURRY HURRY! I'm know I'm speaking for a multitude of people! We LOVE YOU, UPDATE NOW!!!
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  • From ANON - animegirl007 on April 09, 2004
    I love your story...I adore Sess/Rin pairing so I was piss off at first, you created all these bad things that were happening to Rin. But, I felt happy when Sesshoumaru started to show feelings for her and, mark her to protect her even though she scare of him right now...The chapters that follow along after the first two only made me more interested in your story. I know you said that you wanted to keep the story dark..but, for my two cents .I hope you put in a spray of sunshine in there for Rin and Sesshoumaru...because life always have another turn in it even in the darkest of time..You are a very talent author and I hope to be reading more stuff from you in the future....Please if you can email me when you have the last chapter up...Take care...
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  • From ANON - Erin on April 08, 2004
    I love dark and angsty stories. I'm not morbid, or depressed. In fact these kind of stories seem to make me feel BETTER about the difficulties in my own life. This work WAS very graphic in nature and I know that this is disturbing to many but as you have said this is a reality in life and it would be hard to portray and accurate picture of your story setting without the painful details. I commend you on an excellent job in doing that and for what Il wal was a very tactful way of doing so at the same time as not leaving too much veg "leave the rest to your imagination" sections. it helps in keeping with the authors storyline when you do not have to spend time creating a scene that the author has left out the details about. thankyou for a very thought provoking and captivating tell. I look forward to a follow up and it would be a great idea if you used the lighter format you had suggested earlier. While this was as good a time as any to draw to a close, the story in whole does feel a bit incomplete with so many questions left up in the air. I'll be looking for it eagerly!!
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  • From ANON - koneko-neko on April 08, 2004
    YES,YES,YES!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! You updated i cant tell you how excited i about the new chapters. Like all the rest of your work they are nothing less than brilliant. you are my all-time favorite fan fiction author. Scratch that you ae my favorite author PERIOD! You are a beautiful genius sent to brighten our world. I cant speak for anyone else but i dont think i can be alone in this when i say that your gift for wri is is a gift to us all, and is for me the highpoint in an otherwise dismal and emotionally turbulent life. so thank you and yock sck serious ass!!!!!!!!!
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  • From ANON - flowers on April 08, 2004
    I'm sorry I didn't review every chapter. I am truly in love with your fairytale style, and yes, thi lik like a dark fairytale. Very captivating, you have truly kept Sesshoumaru in character and I really respect that. Most fanfics take him out of character as soon as they can, but I love him so much because of his nature. You have captured him and a wonderfully dark and angsty situation with a blinding light at the end of the tunnel. Shit...... this should be a movie. Wow, you have truln myn my respect. I put you up there with jrr and c.s. lewis, and c.s. is my favoriuthouthor. Let me know when your novel comes out, if you aren't writing one, feel ashamed, you should be. Don't keep your talent from the world!!!

    UPDATE OR FEEL THE WRAF GOF GOD!!!!!

    hehehehe intimidating aren't I?
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