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Reviews for Heart of Pain, Heart of Ice

By : Strawberries
  • From ANON - SP777 on March 31, 2004
    Well, after looking at this like 'a deer in headlights' and watching this drama unfold like ' horrible accident on the freeway and STILL look at it like a deer in headlights'....I gotta say you wrote one hell of a story.

    Can't wait to see how this ends, so I can breathe again.
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  • From ANON - Tori on March 31, 2004
    I've loved every second of this story and I'm very interested to see how you intend to handle the after-math. Thanks for the update! I can't wait to hear from you again (maybe soon?)!
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  • From ANON - Someone Out There on March 30, 2004
    Yeap. I thought you had ended it in the last chapter, cause it read as it did. Anyway I did (doke tke this story even as dark as it's been. Poor Rin, she's really had it bad. I'm glad the Sess has even seem to have gotten more attached to her (I know, I know, even though she's still so young). I will be looking for any other additions that you might make.....
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  • From ANON - anhimals on March 30, 2004
    you made my day today by updating your story again! it was a brief chapter but yet had so much emotions in it. i thought it was sweet how sess can be so overprotective of rin even though he doesn't really know her that well. i hope naraku will get the death sentence with a horrible horrible way of dying. i can't wait to see how rin's reaction will be like seeing sess saving her. i remember the first time she ran away from he but then he also attacked her so i don't know. im all excited about how you will end the story. will there be a lemon between the two of them? can i request one between the two of them? well updat soon! =]
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  • From ANON - shaid on March 30, 2004
    knowing that she's being tortured makes this hard to read, but I'm kinda drwan to it. I've loved reading this. I can't wait to read the rest.
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  • From ANON - friendlyreader on March 30, 2004
    WOOO HOOOO shes alive and writing in style!!! man, i love this story. i almost wet myself when i saw that u updated. *dances* u are just so good and im glad ur back. rin and sesshomaru are in great need of some mental healing and love. i believe ur great skills that everything will turn out beautifully. enjoy urself and keep writing!
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  • From ANON - New Fan on March 30, 2004
    I can understand perfectly why this chapter was hard for you to write. Is it because of the circumstances that
    has happen to Rin or was it something else? I do not know if you are going to focus the next chapter on
    the hospital scence between Rin and Sess or will you push the timeline into the future when Rin is trying to heal and she finally realize her conection to Sess.
    I hope that when this story end you may think of doing auel.uel. Just think about it and I hope that you will update soon.
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  • From ANON - dragonflyelj on March 30, 2004
    You mean I get to be review 300? Woo HOOOO!!! hehe. Yes!!!!! She is in the hospital, the fucker is mutilated, Sessy is by her side, and poor little Shippo looks like he found a home too! Can't wait to read the next chapter.
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  • From ANON - Sess\'sBewitchingBabe on March 30, 2004
    R U GOING @ UPDATE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
    PLZ Say YES!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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  • From ANON - theMaven on March 27, 2004
    You've already got the set-up for the continuation with the help Sango's caretaker could provide Rin, so you have to follow through. And after everything Naraku has done, he's gotta pay the price; it's the law of Karma ^__^ Yes, this is a dark fic, but not as bleak as some I've read. It's well-written and evenly paced, and the characterizations are fairly accurate. I'll have to keep my eyes open for your updates--theMaven :)
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  • From on March 06, 2004
    Sesshomaru could slowly rip out the hanyous fingernails and then burn his hair before hanging him by his balls from the house. Naraku needs a slow painful death or slow painful life. You do good with descriptions and scenes continue you should.
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  • From ANON - Beruda on February 29, 2004
    Oh happy day! Is Naraku finally going to get some of his own back? I hope so, I hope so. killing's to good for that so and so. Put him in a room with a bunch of men with huge penises (is that spelled right?) and then well you know, and then dismemberment, he he he. :0
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  • From ANON - Kae N¨ µ on January 09, 2004
    Mwahahahahahahahahahahahahahaha die you sick bastard die! mwahahahaha(notices the mas of people staring at her in fright*..ha...........ha.......................... *cough* ahem none of you saw that............
    Anyways, great ficcy, wonderfully dark. Oh and a continuation, ooooooooohhhhhhh sounds good to me!
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  • From ANON - Evelyn on February 28, 2004
    Yeah! Finally that bastard Naraku is getting what he deserves! Great Chapter, update soon.
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  • From ANON - liz on February 28, 2004
    I really liked this chapter, and i really like your story in general.
    Please please make a continuation of it! I think a lighter sequal fic will really balance this one out.
    You're a great writ I I really like your style!
    Revenge is so sweet!
    liz
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