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Reviews for Heart of Pain, Heart of Ice

By : Strawberries
  • From ANON - Laydhwk on February 16, 2004
    Your writing is exceptional, you have a wonderous talent. But.....Save her, please. This is breaking my heart.
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  • From ANON - yamsin on February 16, 2004
    OMG YES!! he found her !! cant wait for the next chapter!
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  • From ANON - Fantasy Cat on February 16, 2004
    YES! Now hurry with the next chap!!!
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  • From ANON - pallas on February 16, 2004
    They're so close... I really hope she'll be rescues in your next chapter! Please update soon, ok?!
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  • From ANON - nena on February 16, 2004
    wow, thanks for the quick update. I can't wait for the next chapter. I see the submisive thing, but a girl can hope. Though realistically, I understand that it will be years of therapy and care before she can be self confident enough to defend herself. Great job on the chapter! Can't wait to see how Sesshy defends his mate.
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  • From ANON - anhimals on February 16, 2004
    DAMN that bastard! He deserves to die! I hope yoou will give him a painful death. You should have Sess rip him a new whole or something much worst. I have never hated a character so much as how i hate him. I know he is a fictional character but I can't help it okie. He is soo evil and deserves to die...die i tell you! Now I sound all psycho and shit. The more hate I have for Naraku then that means you are doing a good job writing because he is becomin real. I am looking forward to the next chapter because that means Rin will be resecue soon(right?) I am very HAPPY that you did update so fast. I hope you will update soon. =] (its funny how i have such a psycho like review and end it with a happy face...what does that tell u about me...hehe)
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  • From ANON - Tori on February 16, 2004
    Yes! Another chapter! I was beginning to worry that you were bored with this. About the graphicness of this chapter, my advice would be don't let your writting be censored. Not everything is pretty. Child abuse is a dark and sad topic and this story should make everyone who reads it as uncomfortable and stunned as possible. I completely applaude your efforts. Give us another chapter soon.
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  • From ANON - Bsasami on February 15, 2004
    I hope Sesshomaru gets in there in time before Naraku do anything seriously to Rin, but I know your're going to make us suffer a little more before she's rescue. I hope Sesshomaru tortures Naraku little by little till he dies the youkai ways. I will be waiting for your next chapter.
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  • From ANON - Kae Noel on February 14, 2004
    *cries* I'm glad you're taking a really hard look at the reality of abuse, its a great feat to accomplish and you have done so marvelously, and in a way that captures the attention of your readers and the twisted sorrow on disease that abuse i soc society.
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  • From ANON - Anon on February 14, 2004
    Good story but I am waiting for Sess to find her. Enough with the ass of her father. Love your writing keep it up =)
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  • From ANON - leishkychan on February 14, 2004
    Hey great fic ok it was kindda dark but still was good
    Update soon ok me wanna know were sesshomaru is going to arive....
    And if shippo being frinds whit rin helps her a litlle bit...
    any way e-amil me when your next chapter is up please!!!!
    well till next time!!!
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  • From ANON - friendlyreader on February 14, 2004
    well its wellwell written. my imagination was running wild with all the thoughts of what horrible things he'll do to Rin. my plea is that sesshomaru saves the day so that she DOESNT have to go through all that............that would scar me for life all the way into complete insanity. i say BRING ON THE ROMANCE!!!! im ready for a good laugh and some sess/rin lovin'. keep up the good work!!
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  • From ANON - New Fan on February 14, 2004
    For m was was very racy. I understand what you were trying to express for this chapter, but I still
    found it to graphaic for me. I can not wait to see how you will write the next chapter
    (Shippo meeting the Inu brothers). That's the only way they will find her in time. I do not
    think that Rin will survive what he has in store for her in her room. I think that Naraku has felt what Sess
    was trying to doing (use Kanna to find Rin) and he is going to punished Rin for it. I believe this will be Rin's "final" time he
    will punished her. I hope that the next chapter will be the chapter she is rescued (maybe make it a long chapter, with some many
    possiblilities that can happen trust me a long chapter will not be boring). Update soon.
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  • From ANON - Ulla on February 14, 2004
    *grabs steering wheel from Sess and drives like a maniac towards the house* MOVE YOU BAKA AUTOMOBILE! *VROOM!* X[ I REALLY don't like Naraku now! You are so goo, leaving us cliffies like this! ~.^ Update soon!
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  • From ANON - Red Angel on February 14, 2004
    AAAAAH! I'm so glad you updated. ^^ I just reformatted my computer and lost all my bookmarks. So I've found your fic and bookmarked it again. POOR RIN. I will not be happy with this fic till I see Sesshoumaru soothing her and teaching her how to love. Grrrrr! Heh.. I love it. Please continue. ^^
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