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Reviews for Heart of Pain, Heart of Ice

By : Strawberries
  • From ANON - Pallas on February 14, 2004
    As an answer to your question, I think it was very descriptive. I think it only makes the story that much more realistic. I don't really know if Rin, even if she's rescued by Sesshoumaru, ever be able to get over this trauma. I hope you continue soon!
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  • From ANON - nena on February 14, 2004
    Yeah the chapter was graphic, but it was called for. It was worth the wait, and I can't wait until Sesshoumaru makes his entrence, though I would like to see if Rin would end up defending herself...though she is pretty submissive. You have weeved this story very well, but please update a bit sooner next time.
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  • From ANON - shaid on February 14, 2004
    it hurts to read, but finish it, please.
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  • From ANON - No One Knows on February 14, 2004
    Best damn story on the entire site
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  • From ANON - InuYoukaiOtaku on February 14, 2004
    Naw. Don't even think to delete anything from this story. You're right, it's called ADULTfanfiction, you arn't forcing people to read this story. If they don't like it..they don't have to read it. ^-^ Me on the other hand...I like this story..not..that I'm into dark stuff..really I'm not, the whole time I'm reading this, I'm hoping it turns out good in the end ^_^'' You're a great author, and don't let anyone make you think this is to graphic for even a 'adult' fiction website. If they have a problem with it, maybe they need to grow up. ^-^ Like I said, great job, keep up the good work.

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  • From fantasycat on February 14, 2004
    chapter 10 was well worth the wait, OMG what a chapter. i could really feel that moment when Rin heard Naraku coming back into the house. Freaky! but you have the NC17 rating already so that's fine, graphic stuff doesnt bother me

    but for the love of god update again and soon!!!!
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  • From ANON - anhimals on February 14, 2004
    this chapter made me sad reading. im almost in tears to read how much pain and abuse someone like rin can take. i am very glad that this is just a fanfic not real. im glad my dad doesn't treat me like that. i hope sess will find her soon. i usually don't read dark stories just they just distrub me but your story is good though. i hope you will update soon.
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  • From ANON - Sesshomaru\'s Lady on February 14, 2004
    Oh THANK YOU THANK YOU!!! I absolutely love this story. I have been looking forward to the next chapter!!! I do not believe that your story is graphic. You are trying to convey something dark and you are doing a darn good job. I thought that you had curled up and died until I saw the new chappie up tonight. You have made myningning. I hope that you continue this story...and update a little more often. I am on pins and needles here waiting to see what happens next. Keep up the EXCELLENT work and DO NOT let anyone tell you that your story is too dark. You do have warnings up as you said totheother reviewer. If one does not like to read dark fics then one should not. Until next time!!!!

    Sesshomaru's Lady :o)
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  • From ANON - Fantasy Cat on February 06, 2004
    MAN! you need to update. this fic is awesome!!!
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  • From ANON - blu on January 28, 2004
    blu here and i SERIOUSLY wish that this aff.net had author alert system. when you get anew chap or decide to discontinue (knok on weed) please leme kno so i dont keep comn bak only to go into a deep depression of finding no new chapter!!
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  • From ANON - Evelyn on January 28, 2004
    Geat, Great, Great! Loved it , Loved it, Loved it. Oooh! That bastard, Naraku!
    I can't wait till Sesshoumaru kicks his fat ugly butt! Anyway, update soon.
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  • From ANON - Anon on January 28, 2004
    nother chapte another review, we as fic writers live for them, ne?Owari
    ~KazeShinai
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  • From ANON - KazeShinai on January 28, 2004
    So far, this story has done nothing but intirgue me. You have a gift. I hope you keep writing.Owari
    ~KazeShinai
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  • From ANON - Nikki on January 26, 2004
    Dear god that was sick. Some of yall should check in to a mental hospital. Where do you think up these things? Were you having a bad day? Jesus. You make a person hate Sess/Rin.
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  • From ANON - Shivawn on January 25, 2004
    very good story...how many chapters do you think there will be left? Please update soon, can't wait for the next chapters!
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