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Reviews for Heart of Pain, Heart of Ice

By : Strawberries
  • From Taiki on October 06, 2003
    I'm speechless. It was so dark and animalistic...wow. You're kind of Storytelling is fantastic! ^^ *waits for the next chapter*
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  • From ANON - MomOfFluffyAndFluffier on October 06, 2003
    This story is wonderfully well written and entertaining though distressing in ways (I expected that when I realized daddy was Naraku). Please let this be a dark fic only because of Naraku...let Ses be the hero behind his cold mask...Rin doesn't deserve to be so badly treated without any kind of hope for happiness (even if Ses just rescues her from Naraku he will be a definite hero). Hope to see an update soon.
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  • From ANON - stayingput29 on October 06, 2003
    Hey (waves) me again... About the bite... I didn't take it as him marking her the way I was reading it I took it as her being prey Like as in a meal or a foe that needed to be taken down... The bite thing I think is taken way out of perportion on a mating ritural... I could be wronge but now I am very curious to find out... He didn't bite her in the heat of passion he bit her in a heat of rage... Anyway I was reading the reviews and they got me thinking... Damn don't you just hate that...lol... anyway I guess we whavehave to wait untill the next update that hopefuly (fingers crossed) won't be to long... I love this fic so much I love the darkness of it... Oh and about what the father (Naraku) was doing to Rin I thought that also came across very clear... I thought there were plenty of details to lead the reader in right direction... OH MY am I rambaling... I just can't help myself it is hard to find dark fics and believe me you I Love them... Does that say something bad about me... I wonder... OH Well ... I love my lemmons too... anyway please please please update this and the courting of Rin as soon as life permits.... thanks again for listening to me ramble.... your faithful fan... Love and :)'s .... Mules
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  • From ANON - Nekiochan on October 06, 2003

    So what Sess did was make the Rin his mate/property? Or did he turn her into a half-demon?

    || blinks ||

    Oh well. At least there was another wonderful chapter, but also sad.
    But it was still good.

    You dont have to worry about my earlier question.
    My mind was on overload when I tried to figure it out. [ :sigh: ]

    Keep up on those chapters and don't you dare forget about your other story(s)....I love them too ya know!!

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  • From ANON - Pallas on October 06, 2003
    Well, that wasn't exactly what I was expecting... I like it thouSo, So, Sesshomaru is feeling sorry, but did he just mark ar as his? If he did so, what will he do next about her? What will he do about Naraku? Please update soon!
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  • From ANON - faerie on October 06, 2003
    you are doing a wonderful job with this storyline and I can't wait to see what you do next with this. This is a difficult subject to deal with and you are handling it very well. My ocompcomplaint is the speed of updates, I'm so impatient to find out what happens next.
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  • From ANON - stayingput29 on October 06, 2003
    OH My... I just can't explain in mere words how much I truely enjoy this story. I Hold my breath every time I need to scroll down and as for stop writing it I hope that thought never crosses your mind again.. This was the best Chap yet... your words flow like magic and keep me pinned to the edge of my seat. Wanting and Needing more... The chapters always seem to end at the right time too... that Cliffy moment with the last few words spoken... OH MY!!! you always leave me with a pounding heart... Please do continue with this story... You have a great talent and I wish you all the luck in the world to take it beyound fan fic's but only after you complete the one's your writing....LOL... Mules


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  • From ANON - DelKaidin on October 06, 2003
    Oh don't worry I'll hang around to find out... you've got me hooked now. Sesshomaru!!! Bad puppy.
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  • From ANON - stayingput29 on October 06, 2003
    I haven't read Chapter three yet I just wanted to say THANK YOU THANK YOU THANK YOU FOR UPDATING!!! It seems I have been waiting for ever for this update... He He... Just want to get the excitment out of way... I sure hope that tells you how much I LOVE THIS fic.... Mules
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  • From ANON - Seth on October 06, 2003
    Another fantastic story. THis is by far the best chapter so far, if you ask me. You also have amazing talent - almost inhuman - that I had to stop many times during this chapter... I had to stop and just take a deep _long_ breath, followed by a mental 'Wow' before continuing to the next part. And your ability to pay attention to emotemotion and create such depth blows me completely away. Truly a breath-taking chap. The part where Sesshoumaru lost control was written so wonderfully and it's what has me loving this chapter so much.

    All in all, beautiful detail, amazing twists, wonderful character protrayals and great writing... 10/10 Later...
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  • From ANON - Seth on October 04, 2003
    OMG... This was so sad... But this was such an engrossing chapter... You had me on the edge of my seat! I can't wait for the next chapter... This is such an amazing story! Excellent writing.

    Later...
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  • From ANON - Lisa on September 30, 2003
    OHHHH MYYYY GODDDD!!! I absolutely loveeeee this story. I can see what you are writing. If you can catch me on the first few words then I am hooked and I am definetly hooked !! Please please please let me know when you update this story. I cannot wait to see what you are going to do next. I felt Rin's pain and I felt Shesshomaru's disgust. Keep up the great work !!!!
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  • From ANON - Bsasami on September 29, 2003
    This Naraku guy should get his ass-whipped by Sesshomauro several times over.
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  • From ANON - nena on September 29, 2003
    This is a very interesting story. I love the way it is heading, can't wait for the update. Keep up the good work!!!
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  • From ANON - Beruda on September 28, 2003
    This story is very disturbing obviously, even though it's about fictional characters, it really upsets me. I guess that speaks to your writing abilities. The story is very well written. I haven't read about a character this creepy in a long time.Looking forward to more, please save Rin as soon as possible though.
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