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Reviews for Between The Lines

By : inumag
  • From ANON - nohohon on August 10, 2005
    I'm probably going to be the only one to say this, but I think it's Kouga that comes for her. While was a Inu/Kago shipper in this story, I just felt like it was Kouga. This is because of chapter 25: "Coming inside of her was the sweetest thing he’d ever known. Filling her with his seed, knowing she’d come as well. He couldn’t have asked for more. And yet he could’ve… He just wouldn’t."

    It made me think that Inuyasha just didn't want to put her through so much anymore, that he had some kind of closure and that he could finally let her go. But if not that's not the way that was supposed to be taken, then oh well. :3


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  • From ANON - Anon on August 10, 2005
    I love the story but, who did she choose?
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  • From ANON - malice_babe on August 10, 2005
    So did Kagome end up with Inuyasha or Kouga 'cuz I'm still not sure who she's engaged to. You didn't say the guy's name? AWESOME story though!!!!
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  • From ANON - Laurell on August 10, 2005
    Oh hunny its the end of an amazing story! And I think you did a fabulous job. It was frustrating at first because I didn't want to have to choose who it would be either, but why should we expect you to? Heh if anything I see how it's even harder for you to choose a character after all you invested a lot into this story.
    But I have to go with my gut and think its Inu. I don't think Kouga would be able to go looking for her because he sent her away in the first place telling himself he would accept whatever she choose. Kouga would most likely think she knew what was best for herself and as much as he'd hate it respect her decision.
    Inu on the other hand is her lifelong friend with no problem to meddle and chase after her if he thinks she's doing something wrong, after all he did when she started to date Kouga. I don't think he would give up easily at all and wouldn't take no for an answering knowing she still loved him. He's pushy and so stubborn heh.
    So there's my PERSONAL theory on who that was! Oh the closure...hehe well I still love this story more than anything. So yay! BTL is over! Not sad but happy! It was a great ending. :]

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  • From ANON - chanda on August 09, 2005
    Oh man, I cannot believe you did not say who she ended up with... I hope it was Inuyasha, I think the song was the clue.. Not shure though.. I still love your story.... I do hope you fill us in because the last chapter was so supenseful.
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  • From ANON - Kit on August 09, 2005
    I love how you finished it, personally I want it to be inu because the whole childhood sweetheart thing really does it for me! You truely are my favorite author, I think i would have been disappointed in Kag if you had made her pick one directly, this way she gets who she wants and we, the readers, get who we want. ingenius.
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  • From ANON - yasha21 on August 09, 2005
    wow. i love how you leave it to the reader to decide who came after her, that was perfect. I am actually curious as to who you saw coming after her...just as the author I assume that you know who came after her, or at least who you wanted to go get her. that was amazing. truely amazing.
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  • From ANON - Cyber on August 09, 2005
    Oh come on! You have to tell us who she actually ended up with! I'd be glad to think it's Inuyasha but then there is also a part that says it might be Kouga and it drives me insane! Please, you should actually state who she ended up with because i need to know!
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  • From ANON - Kelly on August 09, 2005
    Maggz, that is so NOT fair. Leaving it up to the reader to decide? Ah, the angst! Okay, fine, only because I LOVE the pairing...it's Inuyasha.

    I love your stories; they are so well developed. With the emotion, the heartfelt emotion, you put into them. May I beg you to do a sequal to 'When He Was Mine'? What happened when they landed in Japan?
    I look forward to your next story!
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  • From ANON - bookreader9999 on August 09, 2005
    I love the story, but tell me: who did she end up with? Did you have a specific one in mind, or is it up to us to guess, or can it be who we just want it to be?
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  • From thecinnamonneko on July 12, 2005
    Yay! They finally hook up! That was such a sweet chapter! You are a great writer. Please publish a new chapter soon!!
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  • From ANON - Bookreader9999 on July 05, 2005
    Great chapter!! InuYasha finally got a chance!!! Keep up the good work!!
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  • From ANON - Anon on July 05, 2005
    Wow! I didn't really see that coming! I'm surprised Kouga would let her sleep with Inuyasha.It will be VERY interesting to see how this play out...either way I bet one of them ends up heartbroken :::sigh::: ...Excellent job!!!!!!!!
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  • From ANON - cyberdemon on July 05, 2005
    about damn time that we see them actually doing it. Kagome better not go back to koga. That would be just wrong after being with Inuyasha in such a way. great work and i can't wait for more.
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  • From ANON - Bianca on July 05, 2005
    I like the last sentece. It sounds catchy. YAY!!! INUYASHA AND KAGOME!!! YEAH BABY!!! WOO HOO!! I had to do that. I'm, so happy that Kags let him do that. I hope they end up together cuz they should cuz they make the cutest couples. I mean i tried t imagine kouga and kagome but it didn't work for me. either way if it does end up kouga and kagome (hopefully not) then i'll still love this story.^_^
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