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Reviews for Between The Lines

By : inumag
  • From ANON - Sara on May 18, 2005
    omg! this story is so frikin awesome! i mean wow lol you are a very talented author! man that plot twisting rrr i was actually mad at Kagome..Kouga doesnt deserve her! she needs to be with Inuyasha..great work keep it up
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  • From ANON - drake220 on May 18, 2005
    i feel like slapping inuyasha upside the head- ACT LIKE A MAN. wait a little, you impatient little puppy. You know, its weird but i'm such an inu/kag fan that the scene with kag/kouga did nothing for me. it was an excellent scene and did nothing. weird huh? nice chapter
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  • From ANON - Bianca on May 18, 2005
    Dang! You left us at a cliffie. Man, it was getting good too. Well I can't wait till you update because I want to know what happens next. Can I know who Kag is gonna stay with. I hope its Inuyasha but, well, its your story so you decide. Either way I'll be happy. But I would rather it be Inu. Well hope to hear from you soon. Bye!^_^
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  • From ANON - Ilidian on April 19, 2005
    Me agian, I meant to mention this in my last review. I kinda went off on a tangent and forgot. I like Inu and San getting closer because i think it would be realistic. I like your mention of jelosy in the last chapter not just for the romantic angle but for Sango slowly replacing Kagome in the best friend role. As he opens up to her he closes off to Kagome. Just thinking about the different directions that can go is exciting. Can't wait to see, never have I wanted an updated that gives me a pit in my stomache like this one.
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  • From ANON - Ilidian on April 19, 2005
    So its finally the weekend. Interested in seeing what happens. While I would like to see Inu/San, I atleast think that their relationship should develop a bit more. I mean poor Inu is all alone, nobody to talk to or do anything with. He is not only loosing the women he loves but he is loosing his best friend in the process. I would just like to see more of Inuyasha's interactions with other people. Most of the parts about him make him come off as whiny and clingy. I enjoyed the part with Sango not just because I like them together but because it showed a more mature and sensible side of Inuyasha. As for Kagome I did suport her in the beginning I don't really like her anymore. Her character is well written I must say, I just don't like her. As for Koga I'll just say I wouldn't mind a character death. Mostly because of how him and Kags are acting. They could atleast keep it down, for all kags worry over loosing Inu it seems he if far from her mind when she's shaggin Koga. (like you haven't heard that before.) I mostly say this just so you can see what this reader sees in you story. I allways enjoy an indepth reveiw of what people think of a story so I though I'd do one. Also I wouldn't mind a little extra detail about Inuyasha's weekend trip. ;) Anyway my own personal feelings about parings aside, I really enjoy this fic and wait for the next chapter. I never mind the wait when the quality is a good as yours has been.
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  • From fallenangel7583 on April 18, 2005
    oh god. poor group of people. LOL. every time i read this my heart aches (in good writer ways). very well done, as always, and very well portrayed. i love this story wtih all of my heart. so well put together. and everytime she gets near INu, i'm on the edge of my seat waiting to see if there is something...anything. but i'm never let down...it's always so well written. great job and keep it up!!!
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  • From ANON - drake220 on April 18, 2005
    update update update!!!! hurray!! a nothing-happens-here chapter but that's okay. its developing thier characters. what authors note? i didn't see one.
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  • From ANON - Cyber on April 18, 2005
    No little wolves EVER!!!!!!!!!!!! Do you got that? Hopefully kagome will see a new side to Kouga on this trip and not want to be with him anymore. Her and Inuyasha belong together and NO ONE ELSE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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  • From fallenangel7583 on April 10, 2005
    OHHH....the angst!!! ::sigh::soooo...sango huh? why do i see blood being spilt? she would be a 'let's get over kag' kick (or not...we'll see) and then she would maim him for thinking that! ::sigh:: i can't wait to se what happens!! still following...and still loving it!!!
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  • From ANON - :) on April 08, 2005
    I like it. You've made the whole situation very convoluted and tough to untangle. I'm anxious to see how it goes.

    Some punctuation and spelling issues should be resolved, either by you or a beta. For this chapter, I noticed offhand one misuse of an apostrophe ("morning's") and the unfortunate instance of chat/commercial spelling with "thru." Other than that, pretty problem-free. I must commend you on the avoidance of comma splice. That's the end of my nitpicking . . . I just thought you'd like to know.

    Keep the chapters coming!
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  • From ANON - Kat on April 08, 2005
    Continue!!! CONTINUE!!!! I really like Inu/Kag but Kouga is soooooo hot too....so hard to choose!!!
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  • From ANON - drake220 on April 04, 2005
    WHAT!??!!??! i wait, i look, i search, i ponder whether or not to harrass you to update and THIS TINY CHAPTER is all i get?!?!??!??!?!?!?
    come on!! this is one of the greatest and most convoluted ove triangles on this site and all we get to tide us over is THIS!!??!?!??!?!
    i sob in despair!!
    it was a great chapter, don't get me wonrg. but it was so short and i pine for more!!!! update sooner!!
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  • From ANON - Jordan on April 04, 2005
    Ok, when I first started reading the story, I wasn't sure if I was gonna like it becasue there are few fics i like which are set in the present, however, as I kept reading I found myself wishing you would update sooner!!! hint hint :::wink::: Anyway, I think the story is very original and VERY angsty... which is a good thing, ne? And I think it is one of the most intriguing love triangles, and I can't wait to see how you resovle it! Very good job!
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  • From ANON - Shadiyaray on April 04, 2005
    I like the way you are making Kagome feel indecisive of what she wants to do.
    I hope she ends up with Inuyasha though.
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  • From ANON - shadowtiger on March 11, 2005
    I really hope that this is a Inuyasha/ Kagome story. That is the catagory it is under on ff.net so i hope that that is correct becasue i hated seeing the Kouga/ Kagome stuff. They really freaked me out. Kouga doesn't seem right. he would fight Inuyasha to the death for Kagome but he is accepting things way too easily to be in character. It is obvious that Kagome actually loves Inuyasha so pleas elet them end up together it is driving me nuts to see her with Kouga.
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