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Reviews for Between The Lines

By : inumag
  • From ANON - cm on March 11, 2005
    I don't like the Kouga Kagome stuff. but this is a good story. Please let something happen between Inuyasha and Kagome soon. Not just a dream lemon, something real. Those two belong together. Please let Inuyasha and Kagome be togteher in the end or i will be haunted by any K/K lemons you put in this fic.
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  • From ANON - Anon on March 10, 2005
    whoa... sango huh? i could go w/ a kag/inu/kog myself, but inu/san is fine...
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  • From ANON - Ilidian on March 09, 2005
    Like the story, I know its gonna be a sad ending for somebody. If you do have Inu get with someone other than kagome I like Sango but thats just me (Maybe hint at it at least). I don't really think that this should end up an Inu/Kag. I just can't see that big a change in there relationship. Anyway what ever you do I think it will be as good as the rest of the story.
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  • From ANON - drake220 on March 09, 2005
    i'm dying here. i absolutely love this fic. i have to skip all the lemons b/c they're all kag/kouga sothat sort of sucks but beyond that, this fic is amazing. deep and complicated, it's a REAL story. i get the feeling of watching tv or a movie when i read this b/c everything is so articulately spelled out so that, in my minds eye, i can see what's happening. you kick ass. i just hope inu starts taking this as a man. setting some rules (such as no living togather! BAD!) but accepting everyone's advice and temporarily moving on. i want to see inu as slightly more noble then he seems here. basically, he comes off as a whiny baby and kouga's perfect. perhaps you could shake it up a little? but you got kag in a nutshell- very anti-confrontation. nicely done!
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  • From ANON - drake220 on March 09, 2005
    YES!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! THATS WHAT I WANTED!!! (though i do feel bad for kouga. i don't WANT to feel bad for him. i just do.)
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  • From ANON - drake220 on March 09, 2005
    kudos for not having them duke it out with fists. that would have been substandard
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  • From ANON - drake220 on March 09, 2005
    i am torn. on one hand, it's like "inu, just let the bitch LEAVE. this isn't healthy!" i just want him to be gracious about this whole thing but that's just not inu's style. one thing i have noticed it that Inu is in character and kuga is very much not. that's just the feeling i get from this. i swear, i have to skip parts when kouga nad kag get all lovey. it's just unpalatable for me. this fic is like a car wreck. horrible but facinating.
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  • From ANON - drake220 on March 09, 2005
    i know your going to think this odd but i have been waiting for the story to come back b/c i didn't realize the title change. SO now i found this awesome story again but after reading this chapter, my heart is broken. honest to god, i am crying over this. poor poor inuyasha... i am crying for him. those two selfish bastards. kagome promised to not do anything and then she sleeps with kouga when inuyasha is DOWN THE HALL. that bitch. i am so dissapointed in her. vile.
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  • From ANON - Anon on March 09, 2005
    O.O EWWW. Don't even think about turning this into an Inuyasha/Sango thing. That's even worse than Inuyasha/Kagome. Please.
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  • From ANON - Anon on February 20, 2005
    whoa! i really like this fic. is it really going to be inu/kag/kog? cause...inu and kog are starting to hate each other. but i want it to be all three of them. someone'll really get hurt otherwise! can't wait for the next update!!!
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  • From on February 18, 2005
    So far I have to say that I really enjoy this story. Great characterization and interation between the characters. At this point in the story I have to say that I really feel bad for both of the men in this story. There are never truely happy endings when it comes to love triangles (at least in my opinion) and I do believe that one of them is going to get really hurt by the end of this (I feel bad for Kagome as well, having to make the choice of this magnitude, but in the end unless this turns out to be a YAOI story she'll have someone). I compliment you on making me care about the characters in the story . I am also happy that this story is not cluttered with all the other characters, which at times welcomed, gives plenty of time to work with the main characters and for that I thank you. I am curious about how this will end, because it's not only about who Kagome will choose, it's also what happens to the other person. It wouldn't be believable to have the other character fade into the background or simply accept it so I look forward to seeing how the rest of this story turns out, so if you have the time please continue and update this story.
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  • From ANON - Kari on February 15, 2005
    OMFG!!!!! i want to read more right now SO UPDATE!!!!
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  • From ANON - Bookreader9999 on February 13, 2005
    Keep the chapters comin'. Great story!!!

    [Maybe InuYasha will get his chance?]
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  • From ANON - KogasAngel on February 13, 2005
    NOOOOOOO!!!! Please don't let Kagome leave Kouga. He is so good for her. *pant, pant* There, I got that out of my system. I really hope that you keep Kagome with Kouga. I do like Inu Yasha, but she is just so good with Kouga. Can you tell I am a huge Kouga fan yet? Anyways, update soon. Thanks :o)
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  • From ANON - KogasAngel on February 13, 2005
    Wow. What a great chapter. I am hoping for some Kag/Kouga sweetness in the next chapter. You have done such a wonderful job. I hope that you keep it Kouga/Kag. It is an excellent story.
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