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Reviews for Between The Lines

By : inumag
  • From ANON - tokoharu on December 26, 2004
    First I want to thank you Maggz for the Christmas present of the next chapter. I don't really know why I feel disappointed that Kouga got Kagome other than I'm a traditionalist and I was really hoping Inuyasha would somehow make Kagome think more about how she felt about their relationship. It's got to be incredibly difficult to know that the woman you love is sleeping in the next room with your best friend, and in every sense of the words "sleeping with". I thought the love scene between Kouga and Kagome was perhaps a bit short, maybe that's just me hoping that it was more of a physical need between them than anything else. After all, it's one thing to love someone but quite another to be "in love" eh? As always the writing was impecable, leaving me wanting more, much more.
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  • From ANON - mofaf on December 25, 2004
    love the yummy lemon but poor Inu is going to be devistated.


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  • From ANON - Emerald*Dragon on December 24, 2004
    Errr! how could u just leave it like that? Please update soon!

    Emmy*D
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  • From ANON - Lisa on December 19, 2004
    Your story is awesome! I constantly check to see if it's updated.

    Can't wait for you to continue.


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  • From ANON - vashta on December 19, 2004
    I have decided that I definitely want her with IY, he loves her! Kouga just lusts her. I know, I know, I am not the author. Good show.
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  • From ANON - Shadiyaray on December 18, 2004
    And the Drama starts!
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  • From ANON - Tokoharu on December 12, 2004
    I so love Kouga angsty! Inuyasha is usually the one without much control over emotions, but Kouga's impatience and possesiveness seem to make his character quite needy. The fact that Inuyasha's feelings seem more guarded only adds to his appeal within this story. I'm really enjoying the way Kouga seems so vulnerable to everything Kagome does, it almost makes me wonder if he really feels love or lust. I don't know if Kagome will be able to remain her own woman once she gives into Kouga. I feel the frustration in both Inuyasha and Kouga but more so for Inuyasha. Admitting his love for Kagome to himself had to be quite an epiphany for him. Talk about loving someone so selflessly that your only concern is their happiness......heavy stuff!! Maggz your writing style just pulls me right in and I can never seem to get enough of your talent.
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  • From ANON - drake220 on December 12, 2004
    honest to god, and i know this sounds patheitc, but this chapter AFFECTED me! i feel so bad for inuyasha, my heart feels broken. i'm crying, i really am. i just want to take him in my arms and tell him it'll be all right but....i can't even hate kouga! he's so sweet and kagome likes him so much! its so hard! but poor inu's heart is broken! stupid kagome, i want to throttle her but then again, she's only human (sorta) and she can't help it! kouga's sweet and loveable and drawing her out of her shell and inu couldn't for some reason do that- i honestly don't know which guy i'm rooting for. i always love inu/kag and usually loathe kag/kouga fics but this triangle is so deep, i really can't just spit out which one i like...man, UPDATE!!! this is killing me!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
    poor inu baby. i just want him to be happy... However, i must stipulate for gods sake, don't make him be with kikyo!! i beg of you, that would be a coward's way out!! love the fic, i feel it, i really do.
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  • From ANON - drake220 on December 11, 2004
    brilliantly done!!!! BRAVO!!!! you avoided the cliche and made it into a plot development point! theres much more going on in kagome and you showed it through kouga's erection!! (jeex, was that dirty or was it DIRTY!?!!?!?!?! god, i love myself....) loved it!
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  • From ANON - drake220 on December 11, 2004
    ::stares at inuyasha:: has he LOST HIS MIND!?!?!?!??!?!
    holy shit, inu no baka.....good lord, the shit is gonna HIT the fan
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  • From ANON - vashta on December 11, 2004
    I like this story, but I still don't know if I even want her with Koga. Who is she going to end up with? Can't you give me a hint. I am sure it is far from over. I have never read a story where I actually didn't know who I preferred her to be with. You are doing a great job.
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  • From ANON - mel on December 11, 2004
    That was the most intense stuff I have ever read. I am nearly out of breath having just read it! I love how you have drawn the characters here. I am soooo jelous of Kagome, grrrrrrrr. Please update soon! Thanks a bunch.
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  • From on December 09, 2004
    Gosh it's getting intense >>; What's going to happen?? I hope you update soon, been really into this story and you're doing a magnificent job!n Til' next update.. Hope it's soon!
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  • From ANON - ivy on December 07, 2004
    great chapter, very interesting , finaly inuyasha and kouga confronted each other but i still want to knoe kagome's feelings about both of them . i really dont knoe who i want her to end up with cause i like them both. please update soon your killing me here(lol)
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  • From ANON - Lisa on November 29, 2004
    I really like this story.

    I like the interaction between the chracters, the progression of the story, and I like how Inuyasha realizes he might be missing something with Kagome.

    Can't wait for you to continue it.

    Hope you don't get writer's block!! Keep up the good work!!!
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