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Reviews for Between The Lines

By : inumag
  • From ANON - eagy on September 16, 2006
    I think it's Kouga. The song at the end makes me think so
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  • From ANON - kio-chan on January 08, 2006
    konnichiwa! i'm just curious, who the hell did Kagome end up with? sorry for swearing but it's killing me to not know who it was even though i already have an idea who.. =p please, post your note asap because i'm dying here... i'm just very, very intrigued... by the way, i loved your story and i can well relate to it because i have a boyfriend now that i really love so much (who is my childhood friend until he became my boyfriend) but i also made a new friend that i began to like... but eventually, i decided not to dwell with my feelings for my new friend though i know and feel that he also has feelings for me.. because it's not right and because i know should stop it before we developed deeper feelings for each other... the other twist is, he also has a girlfriend who i know was jealous of me and asked this new friend of mine who is her boyfriend to stop being friends with and eventually, our friendship dissolved or you can say, was gone... i will not lie by saying i missed him, our talks, laughs, ang the teasing we got when our classmates from school thought that we are together.. but i can say that what happened between us was dor the beast though i feel slightly regretful that our friendship did not develop for a good cause... i'm sorry for telling my story to you but i would just like to share how i was able to relate with your story.. though my story had a different ending compared to yours because i'm still a teener at the age of 16.. i can't imagine myself being married now!!! i will laugh if that happens.. but i'm still deeply inlove with my boyfriend who stayed patient with me evn with all the problems we faced.. can you really please post your not asap? onegai? ican't help thinking though i think i know who it is already.. arigatou... and, your good!
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  • From ANON - Confused on November 23, 2005
    wait who'd she end up with?
    soo confused!
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  • From ANON - Anon on November 21, 2005
    uh
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  • From thecinnamonneko on September 08, 2005
    I'm going to miss reading this one. Great story.
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  • From ANON - Britt on August 23, 2005
    I loved that ending! holy shit it was awsome, it lets the reader think who they want it to be and holy crap i loved it! i cant wait till your next fic, and if there isnt one i'll definatly remember this one for a while
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  • From ANON - Kagome obessed on August 22, 2005
    This had better have a new ending aftre that lame excuse for one you made. Make it an Inuyasha/ Kagome ending. I'll be pretty pissed if Inuyasha went through all that trouble to get her and she still ended up with Kouga. Inuyasha was patient enough and had better get the girl in the end.
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  • From ANON - shadow on August 22, 2005
    OH COME ON! How can you just leave us with that type of ending. It's driving me nuts not knowing who she actually ended up with. Can you please email me and tell me who she actually ended up with or maybe redo the chapter and have it actually stated who she ended up with. It's driving me nuts and I have to know. I want it to be Inuyasha though. Please make it Inuyasha. Kouga doesn't deserve Kagome after what he pulled. Never wanted Kouga to have Kagome in the first place. Please just give us readers some sort of finality to who she ends up with.
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  • From ANON - theresa_lynne on August 20, 2005
    Am I missing something? Was it Kouga, or Inuyasha? Ahh... I don't know!!!!!!
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  • From ANON - KCC1234 on August 13, 2005
    please please tell me who it is. i can't go on not knowing. please let it be inuyasha.
    awesome story by the way- could have done with a little more inuyasha/kagome fluff but incredible never the less
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  • From drake220 on August 11, 2005
    Maggz- you're a great author. i love your lemons and the way you write in general. However, with that said, I must confess:
    That ending was a total cop out.
    It was taking the easy way out of having Kagome choose and I hated it. I feel like the whole issue is unresolved and i am just totally NOT satisifed. Now, I'm not saying the story wasn't wonderful. the fact that i'm so upset is proof right there that it was amazing. I'm just really...dissapointed.
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  • From on August 11, 2005
    P.S. I hope it was Kouga.. I believe if I had to guess, I think it was.
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  • From on August 11, 2005
    I loved this, loved this whole story, all of the chapters, but it's driving me mad.. you never said who she ended up with.
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  • From ANON - Caitriona on August 10, 2005
    Well, I just finished reading the epilogue.....for the second time. It's almost 5 pm here. I started around 2. I have come to an interesting realization....I think I may hate you.
    Now before you delete this, or throw it aside as a flame, understand that hate and love are kin. I have spent the last 3 hours sympathizing first with InuYasha, then with Kouga, for a few minutes with Sango even, and then repeated it all again. I have cursed the very ground that Kagome walked on, forgiven her, and then cursed her again. I don't think I even left out her art teacher on that particular set of rantings.
    When I started reading this I thought it was going to be a nice little AU lemon with K/IY or perhaps K/K. I knew when you put K/I/K that you didn't really mean a threesome, but a triangle. I was cool with that. But as the chapters moved on, and the sorrow increased and the sexual tension flared, I wondered if perhaps it would be a threesome. 'herm... ok... The writing style is good, the storyline is good and it flows, the characters are believeable as she has written them...I'll keep reading just until something resolves...' I thought. FOOLISH ME! It didn't resolve. By Chapter 20 I was fairly indignant with myself for this torture I was putting myself through. I will admit, I cheated. I read the epilogue. I thought, 'I see Kagome. I can't tell who HE is. DAMN!' So I went back to chapter 21 and decided that I would read the rest and find out who HE was. First I thought IY, then Kouga, then IY, then Kouga. Will this author quit tortureing me?
    I think I understand what you did. Don't give a name. Let the reader decide, in their own little hentai hearts, which of your suitors traveled the world to find his lady love. Let the reader decide which ship he or she wants to ride in? Was it Kouga, who has already shown himself to be a traveler, and who wanted find out what she really wanted? Was it InuYasha, who had known her every day for the previous 12+ years and finally snapped when he had lost her for a year? Was it Kouga, who was her passion, her awakening into the raw sensuality of womanhood and for whom she was healing? Was it InuYasha, who was her soul, her foundation during the storms of her life and for whom she had been a rock?
    Arggghhh! Foiled. Foiled again by the author! Should I damn her to the pits of hell or should I write an essay in the review on why she has tortured me. (can you guess which I picked?)

    Well, if you can't tell, I really did enjoy the piece. Well thought out and tempting. There were a few times where your spell checker/beta pulled a homonym on you, but all in all the grammar and spelling were good.

    Thank you for taking the time to write this piece for my (and others) enjoyment!

    Caitriona

    p.s. My little hentai heart says the he was InuYasha. Care to drop me a line and let me know which one your hentai heart picked and why?

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  • From ANON - topaz on August 10, 2005
    OMG!!
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