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Reviews for A Change In Pace

By : KILLFRENZY
  • From ANON - 198520 on June 27, 2004
    I think you should involve Sango with miroku kyoto that would be funny lol update soon plz before i die of curiousity.

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  • From ANON - inu/dbz fan on June 27, 2004
    i have read both of your dbz storys and 2 of the inuyasha ones and i think they are great and i think you should update 1 if not all of them soon.
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  • From ANON - Shadow Wolf on December 22, 2003
    Best inuyasha fic here.
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  • From ANON - sum gai on December 09, 2003
    they don't look like harpies to me. and they weren't called harpies origonally either. in the manga they were refered to as Gokuraku-chou which literally means paradise bird. i don't think they've ever called them harpies. in fact where did you get the thought of harpies from?
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  • From on December 09, 2003
    actually in the manga they refered to the monsters as Gokuraku-chou which translates into paradise birds. do your research kid.
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  • From ANON - Kyoto on November 27, 2003
    HAHAHAHAHAHA! Damn i laughed my ass off. that was so fucking funny. Kyoto jumping on miroku like that? So funny. Yet i would do the same thing. LOL. damn so fucking funny. please update soon! I am begging you! By the way the new story you sent me? Awesome!Please post it and update this and fresh start! Huggs:)Kyoto
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  • From ANON - Jack64 on November 26, 2003
    I LOVE YOU!!!!!!!!You are the BEST!!!!!!!!!!Update SOON!!!
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  • From ANON - emerald dragon hanyou on November 26, 2003
    oooooooooooooooooooooooooooooookkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkk, that was kinda weird, twas very confusing 2, but i liked once i got over my supreme shock/disbelief. sooooooooooooooooooooooo, update soon alright? ok! ja 4 now.

    ~*~*EMERALD-
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  • From ANON - Rachel on November 26, 2003
    "Fucking American censors?" Hmmm ... while I don't necessarily agree with all changes that arde, de, the "Birds of Paradise" bit I simply assumed was their OWN name for THEMSELVES. Icky creatures are known for giving themselves lavish, flowery names (the ickier, the flowerier). So they didn't call them harpies? So what! I'm more concerned about editing than I am about translation choices. What animation sequences were cut out? If little to none, then the bit about their name is simply irelevant.

    The story is an interesting concept, but I find the writing style to be somewhat monotonous. Just as an example, try reading "Captive Heart" and compare the writing style to your own. How are they different? How are they the same? What can you do to improve you writing to make it more interesting to read?

    The best plot in the world means nothing if the writing doesn't support it, just as you can be Shakespeare and be boring if you have no plot. You need both.

    I am interested in the plot, so keep writing. Practice is the best solution.
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  • From ANON - Kaye on November 26, 2003
    Two little hentais sitting in a tree. Oh that was priceless!!! I must have laughed so hard on so many occasions after Kyoto appeared. "Will you bare my child?" Oh that was priceless, keep it up!!
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  • From ANON - Kaye on October 31, 2003
    Pretty good, no I take that back, very good. I like, hope your life allows an update soon!
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  • From ANON - JC on October 24, 2003
    I LOVE IT!!!!!YOU HAVE TO UPDATE!!!!!!!!
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  • From ANON - One Star Critic on October 02, 2003
    Hmm Have you ever had a pet cat? If so, then you would know that a cat does NOT wag it's tail when it's content. That is a canine (A DOG) behavior. A Cat PURRS when it's con.

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    A cat swishes it's tail when it's aggitated, frustrated or angry NOT when it's happy -_-
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  • From ANON - No One Knows on October 02, 2003
    Awesome start!
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  • From ANON - Shala on October 02, 2003
    Ok I'll give you points for the mentionint of birth control, there are so many stories out there that never mention a word of it. It's good that someone thinks of it.

    But you've missed one point with Inuyasha saying he would simply withdraw before ejaculation. The docter should have told him that is not a good method either, due to the fact that males actually have pre-ejacultary(or however it's spelled -_-) that contains semen, so his partner can still get pregnat eve if he withdraws.
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