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By : Riomi

From Strawberries on October 24, 2003
Oh yea I am back! Love the imagry. I feel as if I am there with them. You describe the scene so well. Well, Sess is the regular
pain in the arse. I can picture him being like that. Cold, curious, calculating to get what he wants. I would like to see what he
has got in mind for Kagome. Probably nothing good. Ha! Kagome wanted to spit in his face! Ha. you go girl. to bad her mouth
was dry. I will wait to see how you get these to together (if that is what you are planning). Good chap. Till next update. Ras.
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From Strawberries on October 24, 2003
Oh yea I am back! Love the imagry. I feel as if I am there with them. You describe the scene so well. Well, Sess is the regular
pain in the arse. I can picture him being like that. Cold, curious, calculating to get what he wants. I would like to see what he
has got in mind for Kagome. Probably nothing good. Ha! Kagome wanted to spit in his face! Ha. you go girl. to bad her mouth
was dry. I will wait to see how you get these to together (if that is what you are planning). Good chap. Till next update. Ras.
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From ANON - Fish-chan on October 24, 2003
UPDATE!!!
Please update real soon!! I'll lok forward to the next chapter!

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From ANON - Mistress Sakura on October 24, 2003
Since there's another Amanda I'll use this name! This new chapter was oaky! It's not really pointless, it shows ho things are between Sess/Kag
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From ANON - Emerald Night on October 24, 2003
I greatly enjoyed your fic...at least what you have written so far. Sesshoumaru is a cold, vicious, and icy demon. You portay him perfectly. I always thought that Sess/Kag stories should start out with intense hate...and slight curiosity. Yoe a e a wonderful writer, continue the story. I cannot wait to see how the relationship progresses and how it ends.
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From ANON - Blue Saiyan Angel on October 24, 2003
sniff, sniff, Must have more soon! This is just way to good to tease us like this. I can't imagine how Kagome is going to have a change of heart after witnessing Inu Yasha's murder by Sesshoumaru no less. Updas sos soon as you can, TTFN!
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From Strawberries on October 23, 2003
Great story so far. I loved the line where he she retaliated. 'when did life become so meaningful to you.' genius.
Got to wonder what the great lord of the westernlands is up to. Kagome seems quite heartbroken and lost. I think you
are portraying her well for the situation. Sesshoumaru is very 'in' character. Will watch for the update.

the one and only scarecrow in the field of Inuyasha.
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From ANON - Sailor Star Bravery on October 23, 2003
Story's great so far. Looking forward to the next chapter.
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From ANON - ReddAlice on October 22, 2003
It has possibilities and my interfullfully. Please e-mail me if you continue, I'd love to review when there is more of a story to do so on. ^-~ I'll be back.
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From Strawberries on October 22, 2003
Great story so far. ^_^. I like it. Quite true to their characters. I am interested by what Rin picked up and what relevance it
has in the future. What is Sesshoumaru going to do with Kagome? I thought it funny how Sesshoumaru thinks he will mold
Rin into what he wants her to be. All in all good concept, original style of writing, great characterization, and smooth flow.
Till next update. Ras.
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From ANON - amanda on October 21, 2003
i enjoyed torn , i think u should finish it . it sounds so good and u did a great job on getting into sesshoumarus mind. that was deep!!! its veary good u should be proud .i could never make something like that. it was so cool!!! i want u to make more , please , its so intresting . u can really get into it. its better than some of that other stuff they have on there. its very deep and intresting and i want to read more . thats a big complament comingfrom some one that hates reading.:D expacely because im asking for more. that was really asome so please make more ..:D:D:D:D:D:D ^_^ *_*:] thanx

amanda
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From ANON - Ivan\'s Kitsune on October 19, 2003
How nice! Keep it up!
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From ANON - Naheta on October 14, 2003
So far so good, i like the tone you are working with keep up the good work. and please try to post soon

Naheta
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From ANON - Amanda on October 12, 2003
Great! Hope you update soon!
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From ANON - fyyrrose on October 12, 2003
I loved it! I think you did a great job at Sess' character! I also saw the foreshadowing with Rin, and the imagery was superb! If you don't get an A+ for your course, I don't know what will ^_~ please continue, I think this has the potential for so much more. Keep developing the characters! I love the dark mood, that should NEVER change ^___^ it'll give me inspiration of my own twisted and sadistic writing! Looking for updates!
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