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Reviews for Torn

By : Riomi
  • From ANON - Faith on October 12, 2003
    Good to hear from you again! Interesting chapter. I'm curious as to what Rin picked up...the rosary maybe? Anyway...don't keep us in suspense too long with the update.
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  • From Fuzzy on October 11, 2003
    Wait so does that mean Sess is gonna take the Tessiga?.................
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  • From ANON - avanhorn on October 11, 2003
    Hey, really liking the story! Can't wait for next chapter!
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  • From ANON - Crash, a.k.a. broken_angel on October 10, 2003
    I like it. Not as heart wrenching emotional as the first chapter, which is what I think made it so good, but Sesshoumaru is a lot of things, but emotional he is not. You were still quite descriptin thn this chapter, but I did catch a few spelling and grammar mistakes.
    Later - Crash, a.k.a. broken_angel
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  • From ANON - Mija on October 10, 2003
    lmaooo ok i was mistaken, I re read the reviews and apperantly I first read it here..lol..my mind is not quite right, right now, head cold and all, no excuse I know since Im like that always..anyhow great story..huggles Mija
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  • From ANON - Mija on October 10, 2003
    ooh I like this story sooooooo much, I think I read the first chap on MM but I like reading them here more..I think the chap with Sesshy's thoughts was soo good, it is dark and I wants to cry that my Inu is dead..and m whm what Rin picked up...hoping its Inu's bead necklace, the subduing one, and I hope when Kagome finds it she puts it on Sess and makes him sit..hehe that would be sooooo cool..anyway cant wait till your next chap..huggles and smiles Mija..:-)
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  • From ANON - GreaterBeast_Xellas on October 10, 2003
    Intersting,I bet I know what Rin picked up, the rosery. update soon.
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  • From ANON - nightmareofcat on October 10, 2003
    i love it please update soon
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  • From ANON - Lady Knightstar on October 10, 2003
    YAY another chapter. I like it. I really do. Please keep writting it is quite good.
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  • From ANON - lil ol\' me on October 08, 2003
    I like the slow flow, the dramatics it causes. You must be talented or be enrolled in a very good class. Keep it up!
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  • From ANON - Queen of the storms on October 08, 2003
    I think you should continue the fic. Cause I don't think it should end there. Well anyway thats my thoughts not yours, but please do continue it!
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  • From ANON - veggie on October 08, 2003
    you must continue this i have to find out what happens
    i thought it was very well written except with a few very few spelling errors here and there but none the less you did a good job hope you continue it
    veggie
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  • From ANON - Pallas on October 08, 2003
    I like this one very much! Lots of angst possible! Please update soon!
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  • From ANON - Mija on October 08, 2003
    omg are you kidding?? should you continue??? heck ya!!!!!!!...ok ok Im calm...this is good, very dark and totally interesting, great start I soooo cant wait to read more soo please continue ok?? pretty please??? will share my cookies wif ya??? hehe huggles and smiles Mija..:-)
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  • From ANON - faith on October 07, 2003
    I'm only going to say one thing...please give us another chapter this looks very promising.
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