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Reviews for Aburana

By : DelKaidin
  • From ANON - drake220 on May 21, 2004
    i wasn't really interested in this it and then i was like 'oh, then it must be good' (said that just to make you happy and egotistical) i have to say, you do not dissapoint. great fic. i like the way you are handling this scenario. its much better then the usual ones, where 2 days after she's raped, Kagome gives it up to inu/sess/whoever. and i loathe that. i find it disturbing, too say the least. so, i like the way your writing this fic (as usual, beautifully done) and i like the way its progressing. have to say, my fav scene was miroku's reaction to inu's threat: 'rather face demon inuyasha then the hanyou just now'- so well done! in one little sentence, you totally established what inu looked like, his tone, miroku's face. i saw it all! amazing job there! but do you know, that when inu threatened miroku's balls, i tht, t, 'oh no! but what will sango do?' how terrible is that?
    BTB, can those boys start up with kagome again? i think some dick is in dire need of being severed, if you catch my oh so unsubtle drift.
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  • From ANON - Patricia on May 21, 2004
    Ah Good your back.
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  • From ANON - Fi-Fi on May 12, 2004
    I love the story and your other ones especially Broadway Baby. Beautifully written and this one is very accurate according to the whole rape situation. Keep it up, your writing style is remarkable and unfortunately for me, I can't write as well as you do. Perhaps as they say, practice makes perfect and hopefully I will be able to write halfway as well as you. The story line is great and hopefully it just gets better. Bye-bye!
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  • From ShaeyaSedjet on January 15, 2004
    I hope this isn't finished. I want more of this story. I don't know what there is about it that I like so much. I can't put my finger on it. All I know is that I have not diskliked any of your writings. I have really enjoyed this story!
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  • From on March 14, 2004
    NOOOO!!!! YOU CAN'T STOP THERE?!?!?!? please be nice and email me when you update it!! Del you are sooo evil!!!

    Luv ya much
    huggles
    ~Liz~
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  • From ANON - thoughts on March 08, 2004
    Thank you. You are right in your comments at the beginning of the story. Rape is often used as a plot devicd lid little is said about the impact of the event on the person's life. I have not had the misfortune of being raped myself but having known others who have been, I have seen some of the emotional devestation that it can reap. I hope you will continue this story. I hope you will continue to show how Kagome continues to work her way to living with the event. Thank you for taking the subject seriously.
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  • From ANON - heather on February 14, 2004
    You had a good story going here, you really should update again. I also wrote a fanfiction (not inuyasha) dealing with rape and I know how hard it is to write about. You're really doing a great job so please update soon.
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  • From ANON - Amy on February 03, 2004
    This is very powerful and well written. Please continue.
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  • From ANON - shaina on February 02, 2004
    Hey, i really loved your fic, but i'm dieing to know what happens next. I hope we get to see more of inuyasha and kagome together. ;) So, I really hope you update soon.
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  • From ANON - xXx on January 31, 2004
    I read several of your stories. While I liked all of them quiet well, in my opinion this is your best piece of writing by far. The characters aret rit right and their emotions are portrayed very intensely and realistically. For example I liked to see Inuyasha and Hojo not fighting, but actually working together for Kagome's sake. And I appreciate to finally read a story that treats rape as the crime it is, not some plot element to play with. Even though it's only fiction, it makes me swallow hard to see stories in which a person is rapedlls lls in love with her attacker the next day and they live happily ever after. You manage to show that it effects the victim deeply and not only her, but also the one's who care for her. Can't wait to read the next chapter!
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  • From ANON - AnimeHimeko on January 22, 2004
    Thank you. I'm glad someone has finally recognized how serious rape really is. I'm especially thankful that you put in Inuyasha's speech to Kagome's would-be second rapist, about how would he like it if it was his mother, or sister. Again, thank you.
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  • From ANON - Sara-sama on January 08, 2004
    I read this about a week ago, but the site wouldn't let me review it! Hope this one goes through! *Grrr...* Those boys.....glad both Hojo and Inuyasha were there to help out Kagome! I hope this doesn't affect her recovery too much, and she gets better with each passing day; and Inuyasha is there to help her - along with Hojo and her school friends and family! More soon! ^_^
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  • From ANON - Maria on December 30, 2003
    More please. Have him kill the rapist please.
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  • From ANON - ApriL on December 30, 2003
    Aw man, that's heLLa fucked
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  • From Strawberries on December 30, 2003
    Hiya! just read the last chap. It was exciting. I so love it when Inuyasha is the knight in shining armor. The scene with the
    bullys was tense. I could almost feel the tension, thinking they were going to have an all out fight. But hey, if that happened,
    Inu would take them down in a heartbeat. I almost expected Hojo to jump in there, but the guy does have sense. He would have probably got beaten to a pulp. Hojo is so...soft. (is that the right word?)at iat in character modes by the way. Hojo, Inu, Kag Kag. (for her situation). I especially like the part where Inuyasha was holding the guy up and shook him to emphasize *who* it was he was going to have a little talk with. excellent. ^_^. Till next update, Ras.
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