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Reviews for Mind Games

By : Clockworkknight
  • From YoukaiObsessed on March 05, 2005
    *Blink blink stare* Holy living hell!! Damn that was dark!! Then it was hot, then it was dark!! I love it!! I read all 14 chapters in one sitting. I couldn’t leave the story.. I would walk away for a few minutes, and like a drug it called to me. Definitely going on recommended reading!! The story flowed beautifully!! Good job!! You inspired me to go back to work on my own dark fic...I feel the need to hurt something...hahaha!! o,0'
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  • From ANON - meggie on December 10, 2004
    i love this one! gloomy nad sinister and equally full of rape, anyway i'm glad Kagome and Inuyasha are finally together.hope you'll continue
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  • From ANON - sisana on September 29, 2004
    Hey, it's me again. I'm so in love with this story that I decided to review it here too. If I haven't told you before it rocks! I really love dark fics but I also am crazy about Inuyasha and Kagome. So, please, make things good for them in the end. I beg you! You do whatever you want with them, especiallth Ith Inuyasha ;), but please let them be together in the end. Update soon!
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  • From ANON - tigers_eye on May 27, 2004
    What do you mean TBC?! I was hoping for a new chapter NOW! :) Anyway, read the teaser for Arrows Will Fall (think that was the title) & have just a couple of things to watch out for, because they are annoying, and please understand, it isn't just you; I've seen this problem w/ other fics on this site, as well: "bound" is when you tie or restrain someone/thing; "bonds" is another way to refer to the restraints used. Also, watch the tense used, as I've seen you switching between past (ex: he was) & present (ex: he is) within the same paragraph. Sorry if I'm being a pain, but these little things affect the flow of a story, acting like potholes in a road. Anyway, can't wait for that new chapter; you are driving me nuts with this. :)
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  • From ANON - Beth on May 24, 2004
    Hi, CK! You know I love your story. I haven't disappeared - I've tried to e-mail you several times and I get it back as undeliverable. This is the only way I know to get in touch with you!

    Beth
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  • From ANON - Spike of doom on May 15, 2004
    ok the story was great at first but now the gay things is getting a bit otta hand..... like come on ewwww... but you write well just try and not go in that direction....
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  • From ANON - tigers_eye on April 18, 2004
    It's been quite a while since you updated. Really need a new chapter. Don't think that just because there have been no reviews since Feb., no one is reading this. I know I, myself, read quite a few stories w/o leaving a review, sometimes because of time constraints; sometimes, just forgetful. Anyway, this ne one of the best stories on this site, so I'd desperately like to see if continued. Thanks.
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  • From ANON - Ron on February 20, 2004
    Hey I like to see a scene in which Naraku has Kanna pleasure him
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  • From ANON - tigers_eye on February 20, 2004
    Another nice chapter. The love scene between IY & Kagome was so beautiful, I nearly cried. Just a couple of criticisms, nothing major: watch you spelling & grammer. While reading, I ran across a couple of spelling and/or grammer errors. Also, I wouldn't use "as" so much as a sentence connector. It leads to run-on sentences. It's better just to break what you're trying to say into smaller sentences. That way, I think you'll have a better flow to the story. If you're not sure what I'm talking about, read some books you enjoy & watch how the paragraphs & sentences are actually written. You'll kind of feel a flow to the words.
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  • From ANON - Alijandrah on February 10, 2004
    *bows to the author* Wonderful story! What an interesting departure from the usual Inu-gumi fiction. I think people can easily forget that
    a strong male character can just as easily be a victim as a female one. We all have our flaws, weaknesses, drives, obsessions, and strengths, including Inu Yasha. Its nice too see him portrayed as less...indestructable. Thank you again for your wonderful story,
    and I hope to see more in the future!
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  • From ANON - Mija on January 24, 2004
    ooh your latest chap was soooooo good..he told her he loves her..and it must mean he doesnt hate her or feel bitterness towards her like he had earlier, I hope he heard her own vows oflove as well..and feels them deep in his heart..oooh again this was an awsome chapter I soo love your writing and your detail your a wondefull writer..hope to see anohter update soon much huggles adn smiles your fan Mija..:)
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  • From ANON - nokomarie on January 23, 2004
    Yea! Finally something's going in the right direction. A bit of fully consentual sex between lovers would be a nice switch from all the hanyou abuse. Poor thing.
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  • From ANON - tigers_eye on January 23, 2004
    That was so sweet. I could kiss you for updating; I was starting to get worried you'd abandoned this story. Can't wait till you get to the point where Naraku gets IY (that's where this is heading, right?). Have read your other stories, as well. I think this &, consequently Missing by association, are the best, followed by that new one, Shattered. The ones w/ Miroku are not my forte, so I refrain from commenting. Anyway, look forwardnextnext update.
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  • From ANON - tigers_eye on January 05, 2004
    What is going thru Naraku's mind, hm? While Naraku is a sadistic bastard, in this case, I'd give him a Bronze Star for strangling that rogue exterminator. Asshole deserved it!
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  • From ANON - kenji on December 31, 2003
    that demon exterminator should have gotten it worse. narkau should of brought him back to life with a shard and make him his slave, ala kohaku, and rape him. great fic.
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