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Reviews for A Bet With In A Deal

By : peachgirl21
  • From ANON - zeek on November 22, 2003
    hey great fic i can't wait for the next one and the lemon you will put SOME up right? well I hope so anyway update soon
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  • From ANON - Taiki on November 22, 2003
    Cool! What an interesting bet *g* Sounds good to me *frown* But I need more chapters ^_~ Please update soon!! Taiki
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  • From ANON - Warmlight on November 22, 2003
    This is great! In fact this is the frist time i've ever reveiwed something on this sight! Please keep it up.
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  • From ANON - jazzybabe on November 20, 2003
    IT'S GOOD!!!! IT'S REALLY REALLY GOOD!!!! it's sexy, exciting, thrilling, mysterious, sexy, captivating...omg!!! it's just a really awesome plot. i love how you use details. omg, you described them kissing so well. gah!!! need more....PLEASE!!!! i love it
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  • From ANON - BMW on November 20, 2003
    Wow. This looks like this is gonna be a great read! Keep it up. I really enjoy your creativity and style. I will most certainly keep tabs on this story. Update as soon as possible! Thanks!
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  • From ANON - Laurachan (to lazy to login) on November 20, 2003
    Interesting ^^ I like it so far... quite original plot and it seems fun ^^ Please, update a.s.a.p.!
    Inu/Kag 4ever!
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  • From ANON - Mija on November 20, 2003
    oooh I like this story alot it sounds great!...cant wait till Kouga gets all pissed and stuff..ooh please update soon k?? pretty please??? ty ty ty huggles and smiles Mija..:-)
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  • From ANON - CybrEmly01 on November 20, 2003
    A 5'5" hazel eyed brunette in a General's uniform is pacing back
    and forth in front of a desk with her hands clasped tightly behind
    her back. She impatientosseosses her head, throwing her just past
    shoulder length hair back over her shoulders.

    An aide rushes into the office and salutes. "At ease, Corperal. What
    news?" she asks curtly.

    The aide clears his throat nervously. "Well, Ma'am, there has not yet
    been an update of 'A Bet With In A Deal'. We have, however, found
    many other stories you can use to entertain yourself with, Ma'am."

    She glares coldly at the poor, poor man. "Did I ask for updates on other
    stories Corperal?"

    He stutters, "N-n-no ma'am."

    She turns her back on the hapless aide. "That's right. dismissed," she
    waves him away. And he wastes no time in leaving the General to her
    solitude.

    She sighs despondently. "Is it too much to ask to get more of a good thing?
    Oh, well. I guess I'll just have to look at it as an exercise in patience. I've been
    told it's a virtue."

    ----------The End-----------

    => How's that for a review? ;)

    Ja Ne,
    CybrEmly01
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  • From ANON - YELLY on November 19, 2003
    SO SO FUNNY
    HURRY WRITE THE NEXT CHAPTER
    IT'S SO FUNNY
    I LOVE IT
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  • From ANON - Kaye on November 19, 2003
    Oh, yeah she's a prude. Definatly a prude, you know with the drawings and the accepting so soon, very prude thing to do. Awesome start, you must continue!!!!!!
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  • From ANON - Lullaby2021 on November 19, 2003
    Very funny, very funny. I like it. It is like nothing that I have read before. I look forward to reading the next chapter.
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  • From ANON - rei on November 19, 2003
    dam this is a great story u must update soon i love this story!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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  • From ANON - No One Knows on November 19, 2003
    This looks really, really good! I hope you write more soon! oh and you spell it "Miroku and Sango"
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  • From ANON - DelKaidin on November 19, 2003
    Think I'm gonna like this story!!! And I don't like High school fics... OK correction I don't like poorly written High School Fics.... Cause this is gonna be good!!!
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  • From ANON - KILLFRENZY on November 19, 2003
    Hmmm. . . THIS IS HOW TO EMBARASS KOGA!!! HAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHA!!!!!! Oh, this has so much promiss. I will be happy to beta-read it for you, if you want. By the way, I bet Koga has crabs, herppies, the clap and more. *looks around nervously*
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