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Reviews for Kagome! Where are you!

By : jeffshelton
  • From ANON - me on April 08, 2004
    i have 3 ideas for what kag could call sesshomaru 1)lover 2)she could explain what boyfriend means 3)fiance
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  • From ANON - Chipmunk on April 06, 2004
    Dude! You gotta write another chapter before I go bonkers!
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  • From ANON - no need to know on April 06, 2004
    You did NOT put them on gilligan's isle! Oh god, you couldn't be that cruel! *DIES* Oh, what is sesshoumaru gonna do when Gilligan comes stumbling across them? :P LOL.
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  • From ANON - DANIELLE B. on April 03, 2004
    WHEN I FIRST STARTED TO READ YOUR STORY IT WAS A LITTLE BORING, BUT AS I READ MORE AND MORE I GOT CAUGHT UP IN THE WORLD THAT YOU CREATED. IF THIS FANFICTION WAS A BOOK I WOULD NOT BE ABLE TO PUT IT DOWN UNTIL I WAS DONE WITH IT AND WOULD BE BEGGING FOR MORE. PLEASE WRITE MORE SOON, AND BRING THEM CLOSER TOGETHER BECAUSE I WANT LEMON AND LOTS OF IT.
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  • From ANON - Kaida on April 03, 2004
    You should do a world that.. hmm.. How do I word this? The world is one with Kagome's or Sesshomaru's past, hopefully Kagome's since Kagome has some of Sesshomaru's memories of when he was younger and such, and Sesshomaru wants to get to know Kagome better. Yeah.. uh.. that's all. Hope you understand what I'm saying.
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  • From on March 28, 2004
    HIYA! i've finally caught up with your stories, I've printed out from "jealousy" to chapter 44! It took about 300 pages roughly! But i'm back! and I'd like to tell you that your very creative and are hitting right on the spots on historic events. I really like how you have the whole story plot down, and I LOVE LOVE LOVE LOVE this story, I'm very happy that your not like most authors.. *points to herself* ^^' that leave the readers hanging for a month or so.

    I really like this story because of it's detail, I enjoy reading this type of stuff too! Erotic erotic erotic!!! haha^^
    I also like how you portray Sesshomaru's persona' it's very cool, Kagome's such a sexy cutey pie! >,< It makes me like this couple more. And I think that you really do touch on the right issues on how Kagome doens't want fights and how Sesshomaru wants to win her over the right way and make her love him more than Inuyasha. I just think it's awfully noble and well... to be truthfull I really cried when he told her he's willing tore hre her with his brother.

    It really gives true name to "The heart of a dog" If ya get me. And I also think it's SO SO SO SO Kawaii that he plays around with her and doens't show his childhood with anyone else but with Kagome. Also with his past. I think it is sweet as well.

    I just really like reading this story so much and even though i know I might have you sickened to deatth tth this long review, I do wish you'd update again! It found this a real treat, you should be proud of yourself for being such a good writter. It makes me realize how much help I need as a writer, you make a very good roll-mode to follow!^,^ *nods*

    I look forward to see what happends next in this wonderful saga, I do I do I do!!*jumps around* haha
    Well, I guess i'll shut up and let you continue. *takes out a whip* C'mon Jeff! *clashes her whip* UPDATE! UPDAOW!!OW!! :D

    Plz update soon!! PLZ PLZ PLZ PLZ PLZ! *jumps around with pompoms* plz plz plz! ^^
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  • From unokitsune on March 27, 2004
    I wonder if these html tags work for the font besides bold, underline, and italics I shall experement on jeffs page b/c i love him so much for the fanfics that he writes. HmmI wonder let's see, if it doesn't work then that's ok, b/c it probably wouldn't anyway. Neways, jeff, marvalous story, and, if you put gilligan in there *tries to reframe from laughing, failing misrably* I'de die. HAHAHAHA, he screws everything up so bad. My favorite episode was with that one indian girl, the fat one, who wanted to marry gilligan and everyone thought it was the old dude she wanted to marry. SHE ATE the lipstick. lol. rofl. lhao. anyways, catch yah later. chao

    ~unokitsune
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  • From ANON - Marieka on March 26, 2004
    Where would we be without Shippo and Rin.
    sad, cute and sweet momment with those two.

    Thank you for sharing, I look forward to reading S'more.
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  • From ANON - snowcat on March 26, 2004
    RED hair , RED hair, Ginger's not a blonde. Well, this ought to prove interesting, having one cold lord among a group of imbeciles. I could picture him just killing them to have them out of the way, and then revive them when it's time to touch the cube, much like you commented on what he'd do with Kagome in this story of yours, were Sessh to act true to the series character. I smirked with agreement on your comment of the professor, but that's what allowed it to go on. Really enjoyed Shippo and Rin in this chapter, and even Jaken's lines. Until April, thanks
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  • From ANON - Rem on March 26, 2004
    oh wow gillagans island this is gonna be rich
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  • From ANON - bettychan on March 25, 2004
    I love this story. The way you tell a story is exquisite. I've read almost all of your stories, and have yet to find one I didn't like. Just one thing though. Please let Sesshoumaru kill Gilligan. Please, oh please.
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  • From ANON - fluffy sama 13 on March 25, 2004
    Update update update!!!!!!!!! Thanks.

    Ja Ne
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  • From ANON - Saruko on March 25, 2004
    My GOD! I love your story! Keep goin!
    Kagome and Sesshomaru need to get closer!!!
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  • From on March 24, 2004
    Quote: “U S S M I N N O W”


    Oh, you SO did not go there!!! ACK! ACKKK!
    (Still, love the fic!)
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  • From ANON - Reiku on March 24, 2004
    I do appericate the extra detail you put into this chapter. Action is important but so is the settinghen hen the characters are walking through the forest, I like reading/seeing there are leaves on the trees. I can actually understand the reviewer's concern about Sesshoumaru being too dog like... Seriously for a while there I thought he was going to start humping a leg or something. No offense.. I'm glad his canine nature was mentioned less in this chapter. A thing I would sugest anu mau may take this advice or no. Ever see Sliders? This is sort of what this story reminds me of. Every once in a while they would slide through worlds that were not on camera. The viewer simply knows they went there, but nothing important happened during the time. I would, so that you're not writing a 100 chapter fic.. which is there is nothing wrong with that mind you, is to have them do likewise. Briefly mention.. that they were in a world in which bunnies were the dominate life form.. okay nothing that silly...but you get the drift. It would allow some time to realistically pass.
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