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Reviews for Kagome! Where are you!

By : jeffshelton
  • From ANON - Shiro Ryu on March 07, 2004
    Very good! I'm all for destroying the curse. Keeping it would seriously reek havoc with her purity (at least with the form of vampire you are using in this story). She would be better off becoming a japanese youkai, in their mythology they don't seem to be essentially evil. Besides, he rhe really wants to be immortal, I would think she could use the shikon no tama. Anyway, thank you for your recent update! I look forward to reading more!
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  • From ANON - kaa on March 07, 2004
    Did I sense a little bit of Beavis and Butthead in the fire spirit? hehehehe!
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  • From ANON - blackshadowfox on March 07, 2004
    well, as i had asked this question to you :P. i think she should stay vampire... because if gets to bad couldnt she just destroy it anytime??

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  • From ANON - Shinna on March 07, 2004
    Can't wait for the next chapters. Keep up the good work. update soon
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  • From ANON - blackshadowfox on March 05, 2004
    hey another awesome chapter my freind, i was just curiouskagokagome ever gonna change back to a human???
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  • From ANON - Lindari on March 03, 2004
    This is a neat idea, but in chapter 34 I would haatheather read what they spoke about rather than wor words "they talk." There emotional relationship and communtication should be developed.. Unless this is justna bna be a quick roll in the hay and when they're free they go on their merry ways. To me it seems that now it's just a count down to the lemon, which is a shame to what is supposed to be a plot, rather than hentai driven story. Okay, you've heard this already but I'll add my comment your verb tenses and spelling are bad. It's nothing a good beta can't fix. You switch from past to present often and without warning. Things like that cause stories to lose their apprathrather quickly.
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  • From ANON - Rose on March 03, 2004
    You still need a beta to catch those spelling errors, but I'm enjoying the story anyway! There is a vampire series where Dracula took power in England in the Victorian era, Anno Dracula, which might interest you even though it's different than the set up you're using. I actually prefer the sequel The Bloody Red Baron even if it doesn't have Dracula in it.

    I don't think Kagome is being easy...personally, I think she's showing amazing restraint! I'm hoping that your final pairing is Sess/Kagome. I do like how you've made him fall in love with her but remain prickly and proud and prone to temper. I can never see why writers feel the need to change a good snarky bad boy into a love besotted wimp. If that's what they wanted, why not use a character that's more like that to begin with, like Hojo? They only like Sess's good looks, but can't deal with the whole demon-aspect. I'm looking forward to the true lemon after this long wait... ;)
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  • From ANON - Rem9 on March 02, 2004
    this is one of the best stories i have ever had the privaledge to read it is number one on my top ten list ^_*
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  • From ANON - Anon on March 01, 2004
    love the story ^_^
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  • From ANON - Inu\'sLilKitten on February 26, 2004
    OMG! i am totally addicted, i read all and try to update asap! I luv it!!
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  • From ANON - Fanny on February 23, 2004
    Hi there
    i realy like your story , pretty good with the alternate universes, don't worry about your spelling mine is worse. Anyways i was wondering if you were going to do a chapter on Salem? think about it the Miko and the demon in Salem could be quite a witch hunt or have you ever read a Terry Goodkind book sesshomorou againt Darken Rahl or Emperoggenggen would be cool they are pretty cruel caracters. Anyway who am i to tell you what to write, my point was to tell you i liked your stuff and keep it up and i'll keep reading.
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  • From ANON - Lovelylioness57 on February 23, 2004
    wow that was good... cept i think yur putting too many worlds in... i thin k maybe they should be getting back to inuyasha soon, cuz that's when the real action will start.. well you should update ASAP! please?
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  • From ANON - Lisa on February 22, 2004
    Don't you just wish girls were that easy. :P
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  • From ANON - blackshadowfox on February 22, 2004
    hey that was a very intresting chapter, cant wait for the update man
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  • From ANON - kenji on February 22, 2004
    as long as the FINAL pairing overall in your universe is inu/kag, im happy. Inu and sess cant share her forever, and kikyo and kagome cant share inuy for forever, soon they will have to choose. i wouldnt feel too bad about kag sleeping with sess, if u maybe did a scene with inuyasha and kikyo, during the time kag and sess are together. He is obviously going through alot of sexual frustration, (the wet dream, the jerking off scene with kagome's panties) and it would be plausible for him to go to kikyo, his first love, for relief. In When Friends Find Out, it seems as though kagome finally chooses inuyasha over sesshoumaru. (When sesshoumaru comes for her, she kicks him in the nuts, and she states that she will ask inuyasha to marry her if he doesnt ask her after naraku is dead) and i like that. I, personally, think inuyasha should activate that Boon of strength he was given in Spring Fertility Festival, and kill sesshoumaru. but thats me!
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