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Reviews for Kagome! Where are you!

By : jeffshelton
  • From ANON - Striking Falcon on February 18, 2004
    {::grabs hold of J's pant leg::} Forgive me Jeff-sama! I'm so sorry! I've been so busy lately, I haven't had time for a decent meal, no less reviewing one of my fav authors! But I had a free moment (at 1:05 in the morning) to read the past 6 (?) chapters! I've missed a lot! But everything still flows! I personally don't understand why anyone would have been offended by chapter 31, but it was really nice of you to offer up the apology early. Once again, my apologies for being away for so long! I'll try really hard not to let it happen again. If it'll make you feel better, you can imagine me with ice cream on my head. That's kinda how I've been for the past month. Work is hell, what can I say?
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  • From ANON - Shiro Ryu on February 17, 2004
    In no way are you going to fast! I'd say you are going at just the right pace (even if it sometimes feels a little like a tease). Please continue as you see fit. Oh, and UPDATE SOOOOOON!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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  • From ANON - Blacka on February 17, 2004
    about your final question... HEll no!!! keep it up! your story only gets better and better!
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  • From ANON - grochek1 on February 17, 2004
    I think that you are going just fine with their relationship. Kagome is a young human, and at this time in her life, the urge to mate and procreate are rather strong. On top of that, she has been forced into a very stressful situation. However, I believe that her feelings for Sessomaru are real and not the result of her stress. I also like how you hae them bouncing back and forth through space and dimension and they do not loose their personalities.
    But the most enjoyable thing I find about this story is the fact that it is a plot-driven story. Most stories are just sub-text to the people getting it on. Your story makes what is happening believable. I can't wait for the two of them to finally get back home. When they do, will Kagome try to get Sessomaru thru the bone-eater's well so he can experience her world.
    One thing, have you thought of having the wanderers pop up in the DBZ universe. It would be interesting to see what they would do if they came across people who could destroy them without breaking a sweat. It might also be cool if they pick up a few tricks there to help them on their journey.
    The other place I would like to see them show up in is in the world of either Robert Jordan (Wheel of Time) or David Eddings (Belgariad/Mallorean or Elenian/Tamuli). If you plan on using these worlds, that would be great. If not, oh well, I can dream.
    Keep up the stupendus work.
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  • From ANON - dragonflyelj on February 17, 2004
    You big TEASE!!!! hehe. No, you are not going to fast, just post that damn lemon already would ya? (hehe, sorry, I just have to harass you a little, I wouldn't be me otherwise!) As I have told you from the start of this story, I love the way you write it, and I feel that the tempo that you have set for their relationship is just right, I personally lose interest in a story where they have sex in the first chapter, and then they are all lovey dovey for the rest of the story. ok, well, I will be watching on baited breath for that next update, hehe, yes, I am a bit of a hentai too! LMAO
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  • From ANON - cassie on February 17, 2004
    your story is great!! I can't wait for more chappies!! oh and you are DEFINATELY NOT going to slow. Its PERFECT. can't wait for more chappies, i'll be checking! laterz!! };->~
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  • From ANON - vampyrosa on February 17, 2004
    Another awesome chappie!!! Can't wait for more. I'm really looking forwto tto the next installment. I hope it has lots-o-action. peace!


    ~V~
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  • From ANON - Naheta on February 17, 2004
    i loved the up dates Jeff and i like the twist you have going

    Naheta
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  • From ANON - akuma_river on February 16, 2004
    I like it. You didn't upset me in the least. To be honest your stories are tame compared to others that I have read. They also don't have the same kind of historical feel to them as yours do. Keep up the good work.
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  • From ANON - Jade on February 16, 2004
    I understand building the relationship but let them have sex enjoy eachother. Inuyasha might love her but remember he loves Kikyou more so it's a perfect reason for inuyasha to leave kagome even though he loves her. and kagome needs to give up on inu let sesshoumaru be happy for once me saying that he's never and only has rin and that stupid toad jaken.
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  • From ANON - sa on February 16, 2004
    Aww that was soo cute of Sesshoumaru to tell Kagome how he loved her. I hope she can return his feelings back to him. Update soon!
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  • From ANON - Black Lotus on February 16, 2004
    Thats so cool, I didn't know you wrote other stories that linked to this one. I'll be sure to read them, behind my parents back! (Turn on James Bond music)
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  • From ANON - Tomoe on February 16, 2004
    Waaaaiii... That was simply perfect! Such sweet romantic moments... but to stop right after his confession was harsh, now I'm eagerly waiting for the next chapter.
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  • From ANON - Levii on February 15, 2004
    I love this fic! This is one of the best Sess/Kag fics i've ever read! i love that ending scene too... *sigh* so romantic... (hopeless romantic here)... I can't wait to read your next chapter! Update soon! ^_^
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  • From ANON - unokitsune on February 15, 2004
    damn you, just when it was beggining to get SAPPY!!!! you have to go and END IT!!!!!!!!! grrrrrrr *curses you*
    Oh well, update soon yah hear?!? because if you don't, you'll have a very mad fox on your heels until ye do.
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