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Reviews for Kagome! Where are you!

By : jeffshelton
  • From ANON - D on May 24, 2005
    I Love your stories they are so much more detailed than mine and you do reserch! If you ever write a book I know you'll win alot of prizes for it. keep up the good work
    -D
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  • From ANON - Princess on May 23, 2005
    DAMN!!! I FUCKING LOVE THIS CHAPTER!!! THIS CHAPTER ROCKS!!!
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  • From ANON - Rinseternalsoul on February 15, 2005
    Addictive. This damn story is addictive. While not eloquently written, it has such imagination that I am highly impressed. I can't believe there's 25 more chapters! Whew... I almost thought I was there... Oh well... here goes 25 more chapters....On to Kagome Returns...
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  • From ANON - FudgePuppy on January 16, 2005
    Love Your Story. Its Insane. Very Adorable the way they keep slowly comming together. well ta ta for now. keep up the good work
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  • From ANON - Natsumi on December 31, 2004
    I've read this on another site. I think it was a single spark. I am so glad this has so many more chapters that one. Although the story is great, I think you should go over it because you have alot of spelling mistakes.
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  • From ANON - Natsumi on December 31, 2004
    I've read this on another site. I think it was a single spark. I am so glad this has so many more chapters that one. Although the story is great, I think you should go over it because you have alot of spelling mistakes.
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  • From ANON - snowcat on March 22, 2004
    This review is bit late...I know, but hope Kagome fights. Maybe Kagome could use her robe to cover the head of one as a distraction long enough to kill the other and still catch the second one by surprise. A good self defense move is an upward open palm butt to the nose. Thanks for the great story, too
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  • From ANON - daysleeper on November 05, 2004
    This is the worst story I've ever read. Ever. Horrible premise, ridiculous plot, terrible grammar and spelling and punctuation and formatting. The characterization, too, is the pits. Your revolting and slanderous version of Sesshoumaru makes me weep bitter tears of sorrow. The sex scenes are tragically, horrifically bad, using prose I never even dreamt could be so stilted and ridiculous. Surely there's a reward out there, somewhere, for managing to create such an enormous steaming pile of shite.

    The badness of this fic goes beyond bad to funny, and beyond funny to bad again. Points for consistency, though. It was terrible all the way through-- no shining moments that made me think, "well, there's talent there, if only he can find a way to access it." That you managed to write 66 chapters of it, and yet have it suck just as badly at the end as it did at the beginning (in other words, that after all that practice, you still didn't get any closer to mastering the art of writing) amazes me on a level usually reserved for things witnessed in Ripley's Believe It Or Not, or the book of world records. I feel like I've been through a train wreck. I need my mommy.

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  • From ANON - nikki on June 23, 2004
    Kagome where are you is one of the best sess/kag fanfictions iv ever read please email me when you update again please i cant wait till you update.
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  • From ANON - tueesday on June 10, 2004
    okay I really don't like the sesshoumaru and kagome pairing but you are a good writter that even I am having a hard time disliking it. I still feel like she should be somewhat put in her place. I mean come on she gets everything. NO WAY? right???Poor Inuyasha. Maybe kagome should realize that she feed inuyasha too. That is maybe why he loves her. Other then that I regret to say I like it.
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  • From ANON - Liz on June 08, 2004
    That was a great story. i can't wait to read Kagome's Return! XD

    With Much Love
    Huggles
    ~Liz~

    Jan! ^_^
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  • From ANON - snowcat on June 08, 2004
    YEOWZA!....They made it! Whew! Three chapters to catchup to after returning from my vacation, and finding the story ended too, while I was away. I think a "Sessh in the City" (yes, play on words intended, lol) could make for some funny side story chapter about Sessh exposed to technology and modern living. Thanks jeffs that was a great roller coaster adventure! Antisipating "Kagome's Return"!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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  • From ANON - me on June 05, 2004
    wow america lets see what happens
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  • From ANON - sesshomarusgirl56 on June 05, 2004
    awwwwwwwwwww im so sad its over but i cant wait for the sequal i need to know what happens and i will look forward to when uyou fill in the chapters you talked about but didnt do yet Yea im so excited your story is great and i enjoyed reading it!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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  • From ANON - alaina on June 05, 2004
    hey jeffs i love ya for makin this story so long so try to post the sequel asap please
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