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Reviews for Kagome! Where are you!

By : jeffshelton
  • From ANON - Laydhwk on February 15, 2004
    You are an exceptionally fascinatining, and intriguing writer. I find your attention to detail to be pleasantly overwhelming. I am enjoying, and look forward to, reading your story very much. - At this time I also thank you for your regular and consistant updates, also for the length of your chapters, again I say, you are exceptional. As for your concern over the 'dialogue' between Kagome and Sesshomaru in your last chapter - I personally would have expected nothing less than this type of closeness/openness between them. It is, ater all, a known and documented FACT that intense situations can and do cause people to act outside of their normal personalities or behavoir, - Kind of a 'Truth' under 'Pressue', if you will. And with all that these two charactors have been through in such a relativlely short span of time, has without a doubt brought them closer simply by circumstance. I look forward to more from you. May I be so bold as to ask your age?
    Thank you for you time.
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  • From ANON - Kasey on February 15, 2004
    waaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaah! that was beautiful!!!! GOOD JOB!!!
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  • From ANON - leishkychan on February 14, 2004
    Hey great work!!! I LOVE IT !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
    Hey UPDATE soon please me wanna know!!!! more!!!
    ok calm down leishkychan -_- anyway just do your thing
    for the next chapter to be great like or the other ok!!!!
    TAKECARE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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  • From ANON - jackie on February 14, 2004
    WOW! I'm really enjoying your story! Please keep up the that great imagination of yours! Can't wait for the next chappie!!!!
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  • From ANON - holyDark on February 13, 2004
    hey great job. i love the LOTR arc. i read most of tolkiens stuff and i liked how u interpreted it into the story. Update soon ;)
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  • From ANON - Tomoe on February 13, 2004
    Wow! another wonderfull chapter, full of subtle details and giving a such a realistic insight on the characters!

    I laughed ad Sesshoumaru twitching at Kagome's description of Melkor as a self centered bully, that was so fitting also for him...

    I wonder how much Sess's curse on Sauron has to do with his loss in the next great battle and later on the destruction of the one ring... He did get seriously bad luck after all. That was a very nice touch!

    Just a little nitpick... Im confused as to why Kagome was envious of Sesshoumaru's clothes repairing themselves and wanting to know that trick? I had thought he already did that, as her school uniform were repairing itself until it died waking her in Sauron's tower. So why didin't she awaken the spirit in those new clothes also?

    Anyway, please keep up such wonderful work. I'm particularly eager to read the next chapter. Each time you made them talk was sooo instructive. Your view of their personnality is really captivating and so... I don't know... fitting? realistic? in tune with everything happening in the original work?

    And please find a little time from time to times for "A Shard in Kyoto" too. Such disturbingly realistic work, where our characters aren't almighty and have to compose with delicate situations are so rare!

    Thank you for giving us such enticing stories!
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  • From ANON - Shiro Ryu on February 13, 2004
    As usual you deliver a fantastic chapter! Please do not wait too long to update! I am dieing to read Kagome and Sesshoumaru's discussion.
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  • From ANON - dragonflyelj on February 13, 2004
    I admit, I was a little worried...I didn't think you would pull this chapter off without having to hack up a bunch of elves, but you did it! Bravo! I can't wait to hear the discussion about Inu Yasha.
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  • From ANON - snowcat on February 13, 2004
    *WHEW* fighting the good , the bad (and the ugly? Balrog?)!!! Having Kagome explain that she had a destiny to fight evil was good, but not too unexpected, but I really liked how you had her cleverly twist the situation so that Eonwe had to chose the lesser destruction of his two combat choices. Anxious just thinking about what Sessh will think up for Kagome's promise to him?...*meowpurr* Very relieved nothing awful happened to Sessh's "fluffy"! id Sid Sessh get his tiayoukai clothing retrived and Kagome didn't get her uniform? Thanks sooo much for such a great story! Will be anticipating S & K "together alone time".
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  • From unokitsune on February 12, 2004
    WOW, nicey chappy
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  • From ANON - Kasey on February 12, 2004
    awesome as usual! u are the best writer! when im ing ing your story i feel like i am really there an seeing whats going on!!! good job!!!
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  • From ANON - leishkychan on February 11, 2004
    ok whatever you what to do is ok by me but please dont let kagome atack
    sesshomaru they have gone true a lot i know but still is she atacks him and somehow
    make it out so they could be frinds again the trust they one had would never be the same...
    so please make it in some other way just don't put them to fiht under does circuntances...
    also even is kagome trust this guy she just recently met she knows sesshomaru longer...
    well any way is your fic so do as you like...but just keep what i just said in my if you what...
    well another great chapter you have there...and keep this story as interesting at it is ok....
    UPDATE SOON OK!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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  • From ANON - akuma_river on February 11, 2004
    I love it so far. Kagome can't attack him. It will do more harm than good same for here attacking the other side. I think she needs to tell them that they are trying to find their way home. And while these weapons and their stuff may cause more harm than good here it is needed on their quest and when they eventually fight Naraku. I think she needs to mentions something about Naraku and their battles so as to win their trust more because of thier common goals. Maybe she should just kiss Sess to shut him up and stop him and then after the kiss explain their circumstances to the elves. At least that is my opinion. I still love the story keep up the good work. You put so much work and effort and research in your stories that it makes it one of best that I have read.
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  • From ANON - Naheta on February 11, 2004
    i have to say this story has me in a trance lol i see a up date and bam i find the page open and i am reading it. lol nice job jeff


    Naheta
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  • From akumu on February 11, 2004
    poor kagome and sesshy...wonder if they could make a deal to just leave? lol, they might listen to her, she is the daughter of a goddess...
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