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Reviews for Kagome! Where are you!

By : jeffshelton
  • From ANON - sylvannastar on February 11, 2004
    I just wanted to say that i love this story and keep up with it with a passion i did not know i had in me! The way that the characters grow and develope over time and through the different worlds that they encounter is a wonderful way to let us get to know them and their growing relationship! Also, Bravo! in picking the stories that you have used to intertwine with the Inuyasha Universe! I am especially fond of Tolkiens work and am glad that you did not use the trilogy. The time period you choose was perfect for the story as it is going...As for guessing what will get them out of the mess they have landed in...well, they have their possesions...they have two obvious options...fight their way out...or relent and hope for the best...the idea i would have in mind would be to do neither. they already have their things (which includes the very item they would need to get out of there to begin with) so...they could just leave! Kag and Sess activate the cube and POOF! no more arrogant elves....solution simplified, no blood shed! both Kagome and Sesshoumaru should be able to live with that without causing a rift in their struggling relationship. I wonder if that is something like what you have in mind...anyway, I'll be waiting for the next updat

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    Sylvannastar
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  • From ANON - blackshadowfox on February 10, 2004
    have kagome help sessru kru kill the gods... dumb mother fuckers..
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  • From ANON - dragonflyelj on February 10, 2004
    another great chapter! Ok, so I think that Kagome should try to pacify him somehow... hmmm. There is no way in hell Sess, prideful lord of the western lands will allow someone to take what is his a second time, but shy bey be able to reason with him... nah, he is too damn hard headed. ok, so Sess will allow for the god to examine his swords, only if they are still in his possesion. maybe that would work, a compromise of sorts. Or Sess could just tell them to go to hell, they are no gods of his, hehe. Well, I can't wait to see what your mind comes up with!
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  • From unokitsune on February 10, 2004
    That was the most evilest cliffy i have ever read.

    Please write more soon, I love this
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  • From ANON - kasey on February 10, 2004
    nonononononononononono! no fight between them! i will be sad and distraught pleaassssseeeee let there be peace!
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  • From ANON - megami on February 10, 2004
    I have a request/sugestion on where they should go next, send them to the world of Dragonball Z, or kenshins time that would be fun, hehe or even send them to nerima and see what happens. this is a great fic can't wait for the next chapter
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  • From ANON - Keiko Yuki on February 10, 2004
    This fanfic is soooooo awesom lov love you for creating this story! You are now officially one of my favorite authors. *If not my only favorite* I love the story line and I've never read anything like it. You are truly a good writer. I dunno if you already have someone to edit your work *not that your grammar and spelling is that bad, personally I've seen worse* but if you don't I am more than willing to edit it if you'd email it to me. If not then that's ok. *So long as you continue writing* I totally respect you for not having them jump into bed together right away. ^.^ Ja ne!

    My email: animekayneko@msn.com
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  • From ANON - psr on February 10, 2004
    Great chapter! I really like your spin on Tolkien's works. I completely agree with your views of the romance issue in his works, but it doen't stop me from loving his stories. Can't wait for the next chapter.
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  • From ANON - Kitsune Firerose on February 09, 2004
    I have been reading your fic for a while now but I figured I when I started reading would wait a while before reviewiWellWell its been
    a while so here I am reviewing you have an interesting writting style and I have read a couple of your fics and I like them and I
    like this the most.

    You said something about how you were interested in putting vampires in to see how Tenseiga would work on them so maybe you
    could go with Hellsing (And if you don't know what Hellsing is its an anime/ manga ^_^ about a vampire or vampires one named
    Alucard "Dracula" and then there's Ceres Victoria Flegeling he made at the beginning of the series)
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  • From ANON - blacka on February 09, 2004
    Oh my god!
    Your story is so cool! I absolutely love it! man... I'm all hiper right now... I want to know what happens next!
    The relations, plot, narration, everything is excellent.
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  • From ANON - Eqlipse_Moon on February 08, 2004
    *Grins* OMG I LOVED IT!!!
    NOOOOOOOOO!!!! Why did you stop there?!?!?!

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  • From ANON - A Critic on February 08, 2004
    *sigh* I agree that old JRR couldn't write a romance to save his ass, partly because he had no insight whatsoever into women. I find many things about you and himself similar. Of course the temtation is to print your Homage to Tolkien section out of this fic and mail it to Christopher. What would he make of it?

    So far as Inuyasha goes if you hate the guy that much why not put him up for being tortured to death alockwockworkknights little stories. Essentiially you left the poor guy having totally debased himself with dirty, squishy pants, revealed in front of all his companions.

    As for Kagome? This is a major sticking point! Honestly sir, you also have also have little insight into the workings of a female mind. She would never act like that as the moral person that you present her to be. You speak of her as a moral person and yet you give her the character of a cold-hearted slut. It is one or the other. CHOOSE ONE AND STICK TO IT! Women in their hearts don't really vacillate so much.

    Sesshoumaru would simply flay you. 'Nuff said.

    ~A critic

    P.S. Stop puffing off your damned education, or lack there of! Nobody likes a pendant!
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  • From unokitsune on February 08, 2004
    wow, nice chapter. Update soon, please. pwease. update update update. Ooh, fluffy-sama loves kagome, as she him, yelp. UGLY TROLL, UGLY UGLY DIE DIE DIE.

    Spiders are very evil. ewwwwwwwwww
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  • From ANON - dragonflyelj on February 08, 2004
    Nakie Sessy? O.O
    This chapter was awesome! I love how powerful Kagome is! She is actually more powerful than Sess in this chapter, with him being locked int that room and all. Now my question is - A fully healed and restored Kagome, a fully healed and restored Sesshoumaru... which is more powerful on Middle Earth? It would be interesting to see something happen where they were somehow turned against one another and went head to head in a battle. I agree with you about Tolkien and not enough romance, although I have only read the three main books plus the Hobbit, I did have that same feeling from reading.
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  • From ANON - Angel Lymisty on February 08, 2004
    Dear Jeffy-kun,
    Heya there jeffy-kun! ^^ Well I was thinking about what you sent me in that e-mail. The idea with Kagome and Eleron, sorry can't spell, well it sounds good to my opinion. Though it would of been more interesting if it were the one and only Legolas, but then again not me fanficcy =P But that certain elvan she helps out of that prison, that was what really caught my attention in the twenty-seventh chapter. If he has white hair as well, if would be some competition if that certain elvan falls for Kagome. For Sesshoumaru...hmm...not sure but him being adorn by other women is off the balance for the moment, but Kagome needs to have her points of jealousy for Sesshoumaru too. But Sesshoumaru and Kagome should stay together nonetheless. But competition always make the story more interesting at a high level. Not quite sure how far this story will be going, but I hope it'll be a while. *she smiles* I just Love it too much. Well, gotta go. LOVE YA JEFFY-KUN! ^^ *Dashes, GONE*

    Lots and lots of love,
    Angel Lymisty
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