Click Here!

Reviews for Kagome! Where are you!

By : jeffshelton
  • From ANON - Eqlipse_Moon on February 07, 2004
    OMG!!!! I am so upset that I haven't kept up with your story!!! (Internet problems)
    I have to say I LOVED the chapters!!! ^.^ Update soon!!!
    Report Review

  • From ANON - Snowfall on February 07, 2004
    The story line is excellent. But, as in the past reviews, you desperatly need an editor that can clean it up.
    Report Review

  • From ANON - MorningBird aka Aiwe on February 07, 2004
    Hey, I've been reading your story for a while now, and it's about time I told you how much I enjoy it. You do a great job keeping the plot light and entertaining.

    When you included all the Silmarillion stuff, the fangirl in me grinned like mad. Thus the Tolkien geeks are lured from their dark nerdly shadows. Ugh... I've been programming for hours and English no lo mak makes sense. I can't be held accountable for any errors or insanity in this review. Anywho, nice characterizations, dev development, and really creative work.

    Thanks, and keep it up
    Report Review

  • From ANON - HI! on February 06, 2004
    wow...i really like this story...it is really really good!!

    BUT i do desperately want some kad/sesh action to go on! when is that gonna happen?

    cant wait for the next chapter!!!

    have fun writing it!!

    BYE
    Report Review

  • From ANON - tito on February 06, 2004
    i love your story a lot pls pls update sooooooon
    Report Review

  • From ANON - dragonflyelj on February 05, 2004
    You just keep doing it Jeff! I must read the next chapter! I want to read it NOW!!! but I must be a good little reader, and be patient, luckily, you are a nice author and update 3x a week, Domo arigato gozimas!!! That preview just teased me SO bad! I gotta know what Sess is doing with those werewolves! Can't wait til Sunday.
    Report Review

  • From ANON - Angel Lymisty on February 04, 2004
    Dear Jeffy-kun,
    Heya again!. *she looks over the story as could only help but smile* Lord of the Rings...that's a damn good addition, and who knows Kagome may meet a certain famous elven! *she lowers her head snickering a bit* Kagome and Legolas...that would be an interesting happening. Bet lots of fan girls of Legolas will be SO jealous of her then! Also her comes Sesshoumaru becoming all jealous over another white haired cutie pie getting the attention of Kagome =P Too bad that won't happen, but I couldn't help but think about Legolas then Lady Kagome together. *she looks off to the side whispering to herself* For the moment being. *she loup, up, clasping her hands together letting a sigh escape her lips* That would be just amazing...Legolas falling for Kagome...Kagome finding a bit more interest the longer she knows Legolas. I mean who wouldn't? -^^-()...And no doubt Sesshoumaru-sama will surely not approve of their courting together. Anyhow, enough about my fantasies of you later chapters but...KAGOME HERE'S YOUR CHANCE TO BE WITH LEGOLAS!! *she feels a sudden chill up her spine as she stops cheerior tor the elven and miko. Hearing a sudden growling, she lowers her head feg sog someone glaring at her from behind. A sweatdrop() forming at the side as she smiles nervously* I mean...SESSHOUMARU AND KAGOME! CHEERS! ^^() Anyhow I would be SO gratified if you have your next chapters done soon! *she sniffles as her thoughts about Legolas and Kagome being together just fly off with their lives with a certain taiyoukai chasing the idea away* And it was a good idea too...*she grabs a tissue, dabbing the sides of her face as she waves weakingly to her thought* Good bye dearest fantasy, I wouldn't doubt that Kagome would of fallen for Legolas or the other way around. *she jumps immediatly when she heard another sudden growl, but much more deadly* Well, gotta go now Jeffy-kun! ^^() I got to run for my life on this account. *she dashes off waving as Sesshoumaru chases after her with poisonous claws* LOVE YA JEFFY-KUN!!

    Lots and lots of love,
    Angel Lymisty
    Report Review

  • From ANON - megh on February 04, 2004
    You have no idea how much I am enjoying this story. Keep going, please! :P
    Report Review

  • From ANON - Rin on February 04, 2004
    You'll write more soon, right?

    Report Review

  • From ANON - dragonflyelj on February 04, 2004
    I can't wait for the next chapter, I wanna see Kagome's perspective! I want to see her be a badass like i know she can! I loved the latest chapter! It is cool to see Sauron before he became just the eye. update soon! Huggles,
    Your friend n fan,
    dragonflyelj
    Report Review

  • From akumu on February 04, 2004
    oh gods in christ, cue the dramatic music! this ones going to give me an ulcer with the suspence and such...update soon/rar/war/whatever so i dont get too gapinga hoa hole in my inards! lol. tasty as of yet...
    Report Review

  • From ANON - snowcat on February 03, 2004
    Exceptional intermission chapter! Lots to think over - like; How well did you keep yourself from chuckling while writing the "panties" paragraphs!coulcouldn't keep a straight face, even when I felt sad for Inu Yasha! And why wasn't Jaken (Cuz Rin is too young to understand) question the group that their plan only focused on Kagome and not Sesshoumaru? Where will that leave Sessh if Kagome gets returned by the shards? Why didn't Jaken leave with Inu & co.? Wouldn't Jaken be of some power against Naraku, he hasn't always had to babysit Rin("Swords of Destiny"-DVD). You don't need to answer I'm just babbling for review sake! ^_^
    Report Review

  • From ANON - Rin on February 02, 2004
    Will you write more soon? Please?
    Report Review

  • From ANON - psr on February 02, 2004
    Yes, new chapters. That was a great synopses of the Silmarillion. I can't wait to see where you go with the story. It would be great to see Sess kick Sauron's sorry ass.
    Report Review

  • From unokitsune on February 01, 2004
    update update update, awesome story, i speoursours reading it while writing my own fanfic. Awesome story! ;) keep up the good work.
    Report Review

T.O.S. | Content Guidelines | DMCA Info | F.A.Q. | Facebook | Tumblr | Abuse | Support | Contact | Donate

Click Here!