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By : jeffshelton
  • From ANON - snowcat on January 17, 2004
    !!! WHOA !!! SESSH IS ELABORATING AND TELLS A STO I w I wonder if Rin gets any story telling from Sessh, but then again maybe that's what she likes about Sessh, once in the series-Jaken tried to tell Rin a story and she walked off..! Of course, who doesn't believe Jaken is much easier to be around when his mouth is shut? I so believe Sessh deserved more than a "sisterly peck", at least some hand contact on the sides of his face. It just didn't balance out - her arousal and being so appreciative of his selfcontrol and the outcome of the evening.
    Also, I hope to see more of Sessh testing Kagome into verbal admission of her changed and changing admiration and love for him. Like in CH 20, because they shared souls, he knew she cared for him, but still asked if their mating was to fulfill a promise and nothing more?

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  • From ANON - Striking Falcon on January 17, 2004
    I'm back! I've been a bad girl, I know, but I've been busy! Work is hell and whatnot! Oh, but anyway, Another great couple of chapters! Sesshoumaru and Kagome's friendship is working out perfectly! And if you want to hear something weird...{::glances around to see who's looking::} I'm a history buff myself. I've always wondered about other cultures and what would have been done in certain situations, so you would have been right up my alley if you would have chose to do that. But the will of the whole outweighs the will of just me. It's still great, and I can't wait for you to update again!
    You're the man Jeffs!
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  • From ANON - harlow on January 16, 2004
    this is a exellent sesshoumaru kagome story in my opinion........such a interesting situation........i dont think i have read any story with a plot like this (and im a rabid fan fic reader.....lol).......i look forward to reading more of your works
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  • From ANON - Shivawn on January 16, 2004
    good...please update soon...can't wait til the next chapter(s) and when Kagome and Lord Sessho-maru actually do get together, can't wait! I like your chapters too, long and detailed ^.^
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  • From ANON - Rose on January 16, 2004
    Hmmm...did anyone guess that planet from Alan Dean Foster's book Icerigger and its sequels for that ice planet? Those were definately Tran! I'm enjoying the story and I like the historical details, since I read a great deal of it myself. If you're interested in a world with vampires and don't want to use Buffy, how about the Anita Blake universe? They're by Laurell K. Hamilton and there are even some fanfictions on this site. Another choice if yout tot to stay with an anime is Hellsing. After all, Alucard has a demon-dog form himself, is as powerful as Sess and they both like a good bloody battle...I can see Kagome and Seras going off to commiserate while the boys have their little fight... ;)
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  • From ANON - Marieka on January 16, 2004
    Hey, great detail as always.

    Although, I think Kagome has altered the future by trying not to change it. Time paradoxes can be tricky things. It is your story. Im just happy to be able to read it.

    As for the guess on the origin of the sword I thought I had made an educated guess. I was thinking of Yetis and the Himalayan Mtsre mre my hubby grew up (missionary kid), and I ght ght the language sounded similar. Oh well. Next guess: wild stab in the dark Greenland.

    Cant wait to see what happens with the Vamps.
    As always can’t wait to read S’more
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  • From ANON - Shadiyaray on January 15, 2004
    I must say that I have learned a lot from this story(history wise).
    I am really enjoying it and I can't wait for the next chapter.




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  • From ANON - Heninu on January 15, 2004
    I have to say i love this story and have been reading it all the way since u started posting and i think its amazing. U seem to know ur history very well do u major in it or something or do u look it up specifically for the story. I luv the idea of them meeting vampires. i loved the aliens part too (i own all the movies). I have a request can u put them in the buffy world i luv buffy so muchand i always thought it would be a cool crossover. If u don't like the idea its fine with me though. No matter what u write i know i will like it. Keep up the good, excelent work. Please update soon. :)
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  • From ANON - Eqlipse_Moon on January 15, 2004
    Hi again!
    Very interesting chap Als Also it is very amusing how you put little bits of history after every chapter.
    Can't wait for the next exciting chapter of your story!!
    Update soon!
    Always your faithful reader so don't disappoint me!
    *Grins*
    Though I doubt ya will but there is no harm in sayin' it just to make sure. ne?

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  • From ANON - Eqlipse_Moon on January 14, 2004
    *Clapping*
    Impressive.
    Usually I am not this attentive to a story but I applaud you for capturing my interest long enough to make me reveiw so often.
    *Drools*
    Sesshoumaru in a loin cloth!!!!
    I can't believe it!!!!
    *Grins*
    Bring on the mostly naked gorgeous demon!!!!
    I am sooo jealous of Kagome!
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  • From ANON - Angel Lymisty on January 14, 2004
    Yet another great chapter. Really interested me on how they womewhat cleansed a woman back then. No offense or anything, but I thought you were a girl ^^() But it's even more interesting when it's written by a guy. And I see no probs in someone that is hentai. Anyhow, hope to see the next chapter soon. I wonder what else Sesshy-kun plans to do next...Please continue Jeffy-sama! *she clasps her hands together, giving off her puppy dog eyes*
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  • From MoodSightEyes on January 14, 2004
    Geez! you just get better and better! i love this fic and am glad you update so often!!!!!

    love you all^_^Mia blah FINALS highschool really sucks sometimes!
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  • From ANON - vampyrosa on January 13, 2004
    OMG, poor Kagome! Has to marry a short old man. *cracks up* Sesshoumaru is just loving this I bet. Anyway, love the story and I really appreciate your vast knowledge of Japanese history. The chapter was a little short, but still good. So did Kagome really get it burned off? (I'm hentai too and also sadistically curious >;)~ )


    ~V~
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  • From ANON - Marieka on January 12, 2004
    Sorry I have not R&R in awhile.
    You have come up with some of the most original ideas!

    My wild guess: is Jaa Kalpa from a dilect of India?
    The pace Sess and Kag are going at is just fine.

    I was wondering if I could get you to reconcider doing a chap on AnnMac's Pern. Even if I have to go to her site to read it.
    She dosn't totaly prohibit fanfic check out the fanfic forum at http://www.annemccaffrey.org/ scroll to the bottom of the pg.

    Can't wait for S'more!

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  • From ANON - dragonflyelj on January 12, 2004
    OMG that totally sux, cuz I would love to read a Pern Fanfic, the dragon in my name? it is because I feel so in love with the dragonrider series, and the first time I tried to use dragonrider, it was already taken, hence dragonfly instead. I have more than a shelf of my bookcase dedicated to only her books. Ah well. I really loved this chapter, especially since it was the first thing I got to see on my 17 inch moniter! I had a 13, BIG BIG difference. ok, anyway, I got sidetracked, as I often do. I really loved the convo between the two of them in this chapter, and especially when he offered her an out, and she was talking about not hurting him worse, with another betrayal, it was so poigniant. I love the emotion you put into it. Until the next update, Ja!
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