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Reviews for Kagome! Where are you!

By : jeffshelton
  • From ANON - emerald dragon hanyou on December 30, 2003
    hmm. i just noticed something. i read your story on fanfiction.net, and btw, this is a GREAT story, i went 2 mediaminer, there 2, and now i came here, and its here. interesting. i'll have 2 remember 2 come back here again when it cotimetime 2 the lemon scene. cause fanfiction.net dont allow lemons, or even limes, *sigh* im such a pervert. i know! blame it on the monk! the hentai no baka! (stupid pervert) *sigh* i guess i have 2 go now. c u l8r, whether it b on 1 of the other sightes or not! ja ne.

    ~*~* EMERALD-
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  • From ANON - Naheta on December 30, 2003
    jeffs you have done it yet again lol, you have hooked me with your mix of fact and fantisy, i will be looking for the next chappy.


    Naheta Doe
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  • From ANON - snowcat on December 30, 2003
    HA, HA...button in fossilized dino-do! Oh and I suppose the dinosaurs went exstint due to a Pangea sized forest fire instead of an asteroid or meteoroid. "OOPS", said the raptors in unison. Fast updating for a great story!
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  • From ANON - MOFAF on December 30, 2003
    thoroughly love the story...can wait for the lemons...know that they will be worth the wait...you are doing a wonderful job with the story
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  • From ANON - Striking Falcon on December 30, 2003
    Oh goody, my first AFF review! I'm so excited! Um, anyway, I just wanted to say that I don't think you're going to fast at all. The worlds they're exploring are interesting and you should go slow. You're right about it not making sense for them to immediately sleep together. I bet you'd get complaints about that if you did. You just can't make some people happy! Oh well. Anyway, could you please let me know if you have an email schedule or something? And I'd love to recommend this story to a couple of my friends, but only if you say it's ok.

    Your Loyal Guardian,

    Striking Falcon
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  • From ANON - CM on December 30, 2003
    lol, your story just keeps getting better. I love how you keep slowly pulling Kag and Sess together. It's adorable! Update soon!
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  • From ANON - White Crystals on December 30, 2003
    your story is awesome ^-^ i enjoy reading it.. although it is sometimes hard to follow. anyway... it is still good update soon! ^-^
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  • From ANON - Shadow Wolf on December 29, 2003
    O_O
    Uh-oh. *points* Raptor with a lighter!! ahhh!! *chases after the raptor* You bring that back right now mister!!!
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  • From JOler on December 29, 2003
    love the story...can hardly wait for more...

    intellegent dinos that is gonna be a stressful one for Kagome. wonder how long before Ses and Kag have a lemon occur...they are certainly doing enough dancing around it...lol

    am sure the lemon is going to be well worth the wait...your lemons always. Mo.
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  • From ANON - snowcat on December 27, 2003
    Could the distraction of language be from neanderthals? As for the splash, the trees are too far from the river for a drop from above attack. Can't be quicksand, that wouldn't explain a splash. Maybe a snake, or a spear?
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  • From ANON - Zalphinian on December 27, 2003
    Just wanted to say thank you for taking your time with this story. It's so much more believable this way. I also appreaciate the research you put into your stories, it makes them that much more interesting to read.
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  • From ANON - snowcat on December 26, 2003
    WORTH the WAIT FOR YOUR UPDATES! Thanks for answering my question, too. Really enjoying your *STARGATE* world hopping idea as a story base. Can't help but second guess that there's more to Sessh's thinking about Kagome's cleanliness. It's a reasonable request, but also a convenient excuse, will it lend to undoing his self-control? By the way, next time I go river rafting, I'll be SURE to NOT use CLEAR plastic waterproof bags, incase someone gets any curious ideas ,*smirks*, thanks.

    On the dinosaur topic, go more on the lighter side, like you said you planned to. Sounds just fine.
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  • From ANON - psr on December 26, 2003
    Just have to say I'm loving the story. I've liked all your other ones as well. As for covering the dinos, lightly please.
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  • From ANON - tiffany(machiko) on December 26, 2003
    hey i like this story! its wicked dude!
    lol well i just wanted to say...CONTINUE!
    i have to go now but i hope to read more soon

    c-ya!
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  • From ANON - vampyrosa on December 26, 2003
    I really like your stories. My only suggestion; get a beta reader. Everything else is good. Your details and your style is great. Not only thut yut your well versed with japanese culture and history. I actually got that blacken teeth part and cracked a grin. :) Anyway as for the question. I think a paragraph of explanation would suffice. Nothing more, nothing less. I eagerly wait for more!

    vampyrosa
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