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Reviews for Kagome! Where are you!

By : jeffshelton
  • From ANON - scarredbride on December 24, 2003
    Hey there, just wanted to you you know that i enjoyed your story immensely. It was very unique compared to most that i read anymore. If you have an update list or something, please add me to it. i would like to know when your story has chapters added so i may follow it. Thanks and again, great job!

    ~scarredbride
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  • From akumu on December 24, 2003
    i wonder what the next planet will be like o.O...this is all getting pretty good and i cant wait for you next update! update soon please!
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  • From ANON - Rei on December 23, 2003
    Actually

    -san is equal to Mr. Ms. or sir
    -sama is equal to lord or lady
    -dono means basically the same as sama it's just much more archaic and very poliet.
    -chan is used for close female friends and small children.
    -kun is used for close male friends nearly exclusively.

    I do agree Sesshoumaru would not like being called Sesshoumaru-chan nor Sesshoumaru-kun
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  • From SpokenMist on December 23, 2003
    Wow, a very good story with a very nice plot. I'm glad that you're minimizing the lemons ^_^ for some reason, I think that when people only care about lemons and sex scenes, it kind of destroys the point of the story. I can't wait l yol your next chappie. Update Soon!
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  • From ANON - CM on December 23, 2003
    Update soon! I LOVE this story! It's wonderful!
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  • From ANON - vampyrosa on December 22, 2003
    Great story. Hell I like all your stories. I hope to see more soon. best wishes.

    ~V~

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  • From akumu on December 22, 2003
    good timing! i have been looking about for your story for 2 days now. i didnt even remember the title of it either, just what it was about. anywho, this is all very very interesting. i hope you update quicker then what it took for between chap 4 and 5!

    ps: if it turns out they are on planet Hoth as a Star Wars geek i wont know weither to piss myself laughing or groan...
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  • From ANON - kendo on December 18, 2003
    i love the storie so far and i've beaitiaiting for the next chap for a bit now so please update soon and i'm sure everyone can agree wuth me
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  • From ANON - Katie on December 08, 2003
    Hm... This is very interesting. I reallly love to see how this ends up. Please continue.
    Katie
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  • From ANON - snowcat on December 02, 2003
    ...MAKE ME PACE,...MAKE ME PACE! So far your story's pace is just fine, building heat (like in "Backdraft"), starving to explode upon the first waft of oxygen. Some peeps are asking for SEX already? They just don't know how to savor the tension in the story. Luv you having Kag admit she's not addressing Sessh's "pedigree" properly, according to the series in my book anyways. Your Sessh charaterization is holding my attention too; testing thoughts, becoming more vunerable to his mental ba tha than with his environmental one, and whom doesn't know that he's narrow minded and controlling. One question tho; Is this story following in a time line after your other story, "Spring Festival"? Cuz, with or without trust, it just isn't believable to me that a virgin would be as unerved as you have Kag as she's being massaged by someone whom she knows to be an agressor. Thanks for listening.
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  • From ANON - black Death Angel on December 01, 2003
    nice, touch of humor jeffs-sama, did I ever told you i'm one of your biggest fans, ( AKA NO_TAMA, or NEO QUEEN), it's a pitty, I'm not going to be able to read your work until january the 10th, but, until then I wish you farewell.

    Ja Ne
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  • From ANON - PARADISE KISS on November 29, 2003
    HEEEEELLLLLLOOOOOOO!!!!!!!!!!!!!
    by the way your fanfic is great keep up whit the good work....ok.....
    and keep writing more because mw wanna know more about sesshomaru and kagome ok.....
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  • From MoodSightEyes on November 28, 2003
    hi that was great this is my first reveiw!! ne wayz i loved it so far but i can't wait to see inu's face when he finds out. and question: are they going to fall in love? sounds as though they're having an akward time ajusting to one another, no?

    write soon
    ja nee ~*~Mia~*~
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  • From ANON - dragonflyelj on November 27, 2003
    OMG that is SOO good! I love it. but you are mean for stopping there! You have to update soon. As with your other stories that I have read, I jusn'tn't stop reading, you use the perfect blend, between the correct grammar and punctuation, your attention to detail, and the fact that you keep the characters in character, or at least believably so for the situation that they find themselves in, and you build up to that crucial moment, like the evil author you are! ok see you in reviews! dragonflyelj
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  • From ANON - kay on November 27, 2003
    well your fic is interesting , but your verb tenses are ....well ...bad . you REALLY need a beta reader. keep up the good work .it iis really interesting.
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