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Reviews for Kagome! Where are you!

By : jeffshelton
  • From ANON - kanji on November 27, 2003
    this fic doesnt tie in with ur others right? b/c in ur others inu and kag are together. i dont think kagome and sess could have sex, then still have kag end up with inu. this fic is going to be a kag/sess right? and what about inuyasha, will u explain what happaned to him?
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  • From BlackRavenOfDeath on November 27, 2003
    Very interesting. I honestly haven't read any of your other fics, but this one really caught my eye. Your spelling and grammar are a bit off, nothing a good beta reader couldn't fix, and you tend to switch from present to past tense a lot. Once again, nothing a good beta reader couldn't fix. Oh, and just think of this as constructive criticism. I'm very big on spelling and grammar.
    As far as how you got Kagome and Sesshoumaru together, very interesting concept. I don't think I've ever read a fic where they are transported somewhere else where no one can get to them.
    Please, keep up the good work and update soon.
    Ja - Hell's Angel
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