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Reviews for Kagome! Where are you!

By : jeffshelton
  • From ANON - me on May 23, 2004
    hmm soooo whats goona happen when kagome and kagome meet hmmmmm?

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  • From ANON - Manda on May 23, 2004
    Great chapter, as usual. I always look forward to reading your updates and stories. This chapter was a little warped, what with Kagome's dad being around and selling her and her moms's bodies. Just the idea of Kagome being evil is twisted. Makes for a intersting twist in the plot, though. Keep up the good work!
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  • From ANON - sesshomarusgirl56 on May 21, 2004
    WOW................ (HEAD SPINNING IN CIRCLES) THAT.............. WAS JUST WOW!!!! I MEAN HENATI WORLD WOW!! GREAT FIC THOUGH (STILL IN DAZE)
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  • From ANON - Bill the surly. on May 21, 2004
    I didn't read all this.. in I s I started skipping chapters.. because they seemed to be an exercise in tedium. The force is strong with Kagome...o-kay. Good to know she'll use that power for evil..stealing. Dark side stuff there. Then again I have seen Kagome in this story yet. I've seen this trampy, in denial person that calls herself Kagome and thinks she's traveling with Sesshoumaru. Did the cube sap Sesshoumaru's brain cells as well as his true personality? It is possible to write a Sess/Kag romance in which the character's remain IC.

    Pise ise it was an interesting idea. Still..plotwise it's lacking. When one can skip 30 chapters straight and still know what's going on...there is a problem.
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  • From migele on May 21, 2004
    that was fun.

    I didn't like the hentai worl to much.
    well...
    being who I am I still read it all.
    Will kago be able to use the sexual magic? that could have some very funny effects in future worlds...

    looking forward to this world.
    (I didn't want to spoil myself anything.)

    migi
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  • From SilverFox on May 21, 2004
    That was an interesting two chapters I must say. I think the Good vs. Evil plot line is going to be mighty interesting indeed.... :-) Until next time! ^_^
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  • From ANON - Manda on May 20, 2004
    The heck?! Kagome, evil?? Man, that really took me by surprise. It's messed up. I love it. I can't wait to see what happens!!
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  • From ANON - KhellendrostheDragon on May 19, 2004
    Hi Jeff, Ok,first off I think the storylines and the sneak peeks at each was awesome.You have definately piqued my curiousity with the teasers you left. Loved the last chap...especially the part about the broken bed, the worn out cat and Sess claiming that he was 'just resting his eyes'...that was too funny! Looking forward to the next chapter. ^_^

    See you later;
    Khell
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  • From ANON - NekoVamp on May 19, 2004
    All those other world ideas are awesome, and frankly, I want to see all of them. But here's a quirky idea I got. Send them to The Pirates of the Carribean. What will Sess do when he can't kill them? When they want Kagome? I'm posting my own story soon too. I hope you might read and reveiw. I really love your writing. G2fly,

    ~Ana
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  • From ANON - blackshadowfox on May 19, 2004
    * sits shocked with mouth a gape * ... ... ... WOW ... ... ...

    that was... wow... but interesting, BTs ses sess gonna go full demon anytime soon???
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  • From ANON - snowcat on May 19, 2004
    *GASP* *GASP* Don't mind the cliffy this time *nearly passed out* need time to recover, so, if you'll excuse me, I need go up for air!.............. So , your going to let Sessh get off the hook from his conviction for dog demons not to degrade themselves by having 'recreational' sex with a human? Since you turned the secretary's group into demons, and sailor girls are unique humans with special powers such as Kagome, he therefore doesn't violate any of his integrity. With all that sex sure comes some gruff language. Thanks for your story..."Rocks My World"
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  • From SilverFox on May 19, 2004
    Oh my...! * tries to form cohernt thoughts and sentences * Oh...yeah! Whoa! Um yeah....* ahem *

    * blink blink * Untixt txt time? O.O
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  • From ANON - Tom Babb on May 19, 2004
    Good story, but kinda sucked with that tentacle chapter. other than that, pretty good
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  • From ANON - Lease on May 19, 2004
    You have some serious talent and the sheer enormity of this story leaves me in awe. The one piece of constructive criticism, I would like to give you is.......words like, "jaded gate," "flute," and "peepee" greatly reduce the eroticism in your lemons. If your not comftorable using more sexual terms.....for example, instead of "cock," you can just say, "You've never tasted a man before?" Anything but, "You've never sucked a man's flute........" Some terms, vulgar as they may be, in a lemon are sexy. I can't wait to see how you handle the love triangle when they finally get home, I can't see the whole "sharing Kagome," theory working. Personally I'd have to say adios to the dog-eared geek, lol, but that's just me.
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  • From ANON - gg on May 17, 2004
    IF you do decide to go into more detail about the other worlds could you do the american west? That one sounds the most interesting to me. I really love your plot and style of writing.
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