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Reviews for Kagome! Where are you!

By : jeffshelton
  • From ANON - Kentucky Fried Chipmunk on April 20, 2004
    Great chapter! Write another soon^_^ *hands jeffs a cookie and trots off*
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  • From ANON - me on April 19, 2004
    hurry up what will kagomes respnse be
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  • From ANON - unokitsune on April 19, 2004
    jeff...your cliffhangers are starting to piss me off! You always leave off on a very interesting part dammit! *head starts to go red* You're an awesome writer but, like I did with my first fanfic, you have to split your chapters into segments. *Eyes go large and start popping out of head* You write your chapter and build up an addrenaline rush, with some spelling errors here and there *steam starts shooting from ears, you hear a train hoot* And then...*she's gonna explode! RUN!* YOU LEAVE OFF *BOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOM!*

    *starts throwing a hissy fit at poor, defensless jeffy* and what's even worse is kagome is starting to sound ooc, I'm trying to picture ever saying stuff like that, *roots for sesshomaru throwing up Mr. Howle or whatever-his-name-was.

    StartWritingStartWriting, continuecontinuecontinue! I'mgoingnutsojustwaitingforyoutofinishyourstoryinsteadofleavingoffallthedamntime!
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  • From ANON - Lighteningdawn1 on April 18, 2004
    I love every part of this story it is so good. I would like to tell u something though since u r so good at going into detailnce nce you mentioned something like this in the story. Hunting dogs when they kkill something smaller then them they will threw their prey straight up into the air, witch causes the prey to be stunned and will either catch them or once they hit the ground they will shak the prey trying to break the neck. this is what most dogs will do. I wasn't sure if u knew that or not but its just a small bit of info if u wanted to use that or not.
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  • From ANON - vampyrosa on April 16, 2004
    whoooooo damn. Another good one! (It was spread over 3 chapters! oh my god! and that's exactly how many times I had to change!!! J/k) Oh I can't wait to read Kagome's reaction to being refered to as the third wife. ( I was hoping someone would write about him having a wife too) hehe hehe. As for your challenge, if no one else has went a head with it, Iup fup for it! As always looking forward to the next chapter.

    ~V~
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  • From ANON - Kasey on April 16, 2004
    ieeeeeee! does this mean he has children with there supposed other wives? and does he possible love them? does this mean kagome will have to share? GOOD CHAPPY!
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  • From ANON - snowcat on April 16, 2004
    Who could ask for a better ending to a tropical vacation, than to get home and have THREE "de ja vu"(only thank goodness without the castaways) chapters to read, sunburns and all, and two of them being full erotic ones! Many bows of admiration on your lemon! But, instead of changing my underwear, I have the urge to go out and sunbathe, "in private". How's that for a compliment? A question crossed my mind - couldn't Sessh have used his sword and put up a barrier to keep from being interupted? and at the same time wouldn't it also keep Gilligan away from the cube? Many thanks for your story jeffs!!!!
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  • From ANON - Bob the surly. on April 16, 2004
    The whole knot on the penis thing was amusing/interesting/different the first time I read it waay back in a story called "The Bath"...but now after it's been stolen by numerous would be lemon writers is boring, cliche and in poor taste.


    Sesshoumaru and Kagome are horridly ooc. You've written Sesshoumaru as an idiot and Kagome as a tramp.. Then have the gall to have her insist over and over she's not a whore. I want my first kiss to be with Inuyasha...but I'll gladly screw you Sesshoumaru. *right*

    For PWP this isn't bad. But, it could use some work. I know a woman's cycle is a part of life..but really do we have to hear about it?
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  • From ANON - yasmin on April 16, 2004
    oooooooooooooh! das messed up!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! he's freakin married!!!!!!!!! aaaaaaaaaahhh! shes gonna be maaaaaaaaaaadddd! lol lord ,t wat wait for the next chappy !!
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  • From ANON - Aira^o^ on April 15, 2004
    Hey!!! what kagome reaction will be after the third wive part? But it good!! I mean the next world .. for your Sess/Kagome to meet with other Sess/Kagome pairing was well!!! How bout the one were Sess only have Kagome as his only mate??

    Some really nice fic to fit your story line are a few i guess..
    Voiat Mat Midnight? by Meamiko
    Dreams/Vengences by nefra
    etc.. etc.. etc..?

    Anyway please update soon!!!

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  • From ANON - Naheta on April 15, 2004
    OMH jeff i can not wate to see Kagome's reaction to that bit of info. lol any way nice chap


    Later

    Naheta
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  • From ANON - velvetbird on April 15, 2004
    uum, wouldn't the other women all confined in around the same space for a while experience the "roommate syndrome" where everyone's cycles align? unless they're dog demon wives in which case i'm not too sure about the biology of mythological creatures. :)
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  • From ANON - unokitsune on April 15, 2004
    JEFF! OMG You are so evil! Geesh It was just getting good too. Uh oh, spelling error. How can kagome enter herself with the weapon if you catch my drift. Anyways, write more soon.

    chao

    ~unokitsune
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  • From ANON - Kentucky Fried Chipmunk on April 15, 2004
    EVIL! I hate you...no I don't but your evil. Please get another chappy up soon! ^_^
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  • From ANON - NiteShadow on April 14, 2004
    EVIL!!! giligan AND ginger are going there?!? i can't believ! se! sesshy has to strangle them both!! wel....can't wait to see wut happens!
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