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Reviews for Do You Love Her?

By : serialcabbit78
  • From fire4ashz on August 20, 2008
    wow wtf?
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  • From ANON - Megan Consoer on August 30, 2006
    I really like this story alot. Can you please write some more chapters?
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  • From ANON - naro\'s Girl on October 25, 2005
    don't know what the hell is going on but I like it so update soon.
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  • From ANON - Kioki on January 19, 2005
    No offense or anything; I am about to give you some very constructive criticism. You ready?
    Something is wrong with this story. Correction: someTHINGS.
    1) Typos. Hate em'; they make a fic hard to read. Get spellcheck or an editor.
    2) This plot is moving to fast. It was all find and dandy when he kidnapped her at the VERY beginning, and even sort of amusing when he said u r mommy. But then, later that night, she just wakes up and starts to kiss him, deciding to play along? Not that her playing along is a bad idea if she wants to know what is going on, but the kiss came before her decision to do that. So I am sure that there are people out there who read that and wondered about it, just as I did.
    3) What the hell is going on? The summary says that Sesshoumaru kidnaps her and InuYasha has to decide if he loves her or not. So what- does Sesshy love her himself? And if that is the case, then why did he have to try to fool her? I mean, I think she might know that he kidnapped her...
    All in all, your fic needs a little bit of work. I might be keeping up with this though, to see how it turns out. Do your best!
    I am rooting for you and this story's success, so don't be fooled by my harsh words. The plot rather intrigues me. Feel free to email me if you would like to reply, because maybe it's just me ot understanding... possibly, because I am often confused about the simplest things which I overanalyze. So then, yes, if you please, be a darling and write me back? Thanks a bunch!

    ~~Kioki
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  • From ANON - Tanya on April 11, 2004
    Okay i know that i have already reviewed. but i read the review's on this story and i have something to say. Anon if anyone sucks that would be YOU, and little john of locksland i dont know if you write but i'de love to know what name you go by on this site, i would LOVE read some of your work then diss you in a review. That would make my day. ^^ Okay im going to end this with a solem goodbye
    ja ne
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  • From ANON - Tanya AKA SpiritGoddess on April 11, 2004
    OMG, that was so good. You just have to have Inuyasha come for her. I have seen to many sesshomaru/kagome ones. anyway, ill love whatever you do with this story. ^^ please write another chapter. Im dieing to know what happens
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  • From ANON - moumowi the unvoicedsigner on February 17, 2004
    1 thing !!more plez!!

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  • From ANON - moumowi the unvoicedsigner on February 17, 2004
    1 thing !!more plez!!

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  • From ANON - shippoismine on January 18, 2004
    hey dude i like ur fic so far r u gonna continue or quit pleeeeeeeeeeeeease continue i need to see what happens or i shall slowly go insane, JA NE
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  • From ANON - 0X3~~~~~~ on December 29, 2003
    i want more put 2 up soon i'll find yea i got a shotgun *ch ch* and i'm ready to shot *bang* u better run gurl/boy or hurry with the chp!@_@

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  • From ANON - Marieka on December 26, 2003
    OH! Vast improvement! I'm realy getting into it now! Can't wait to read S'more!
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  • From ANON - yuki059 on December 26, 2003
    i like the story it start right off with her being in shesshomaru castle and having her memory lost and trying to remember
    but however the chapters are very short and that kind of throws it a bit off, but over all i like the story so far. keep it up.
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  • From ANON - sam on December 25, 2003
    great prologue please countine if you dont a lot of people are going to be sad. thanx.
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  • From ANON - Mija on December 24, 2003
    ooh oooh You have just GOT to update really really soon, why doesnt Kagome remember??? and whats Sesshy up to?? hmmmm must know, good start please please update soon K? ty ty ty huggles and smiles Mija..:-) btw have a great Holiday Season..
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  • From akumu on December 23, 2003
    good start, you've got me very intrigued! please update soon!
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