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Reviews for Betrayal

By : chickyMM
  • From fire4ashz on August 13, 2008
    please continue this soon its very interesting but you do have quite the bit of errors. make sure you proofread! plz update soon
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  • From Shwa on May 17, 2007
    I liked it a lot!!! Please continue :D:D

    ~Shwa'
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  • From ANON - kawaiikitsune on February 23, 2004
    LOVE IT! THIS IS A GREAT START!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! CONTINUE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!1
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  • From ANON - kawaiikitsune on February 22, 2004
    this sounds really kool, contniue!
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  • From ANON - me on February 15, 2004
    kool fic!!! another inu vs. kouga fic! i luv it!!! add another chappy soon!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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  • From ANON - clare on February 09, 2004
    Hey its cool, keep going.
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  • From ANON - Ugly on January 09, 2004
    Update please! I want to see what happends next^^
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  • From ANON - cleer on January 06, 2004
    that was really cool, continue it!
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  • From ANON - Kaye on January 05, 2004
    Goodness me, it's semi-orignal! Hehe, so Kag is the populor one. This sounds like it'll be fun. I'd like to see more!
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  • From ANON - sailorgirl on January 05, 2004
    I loved it and I hope you hurry up with the next chapter because I just can't wait to see what happens and what Kikyo does tgomegome.
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  • From ANON - KagomeKat15 on January 05, 2004
    Hola chica!!! Its good to see another latin american writting in here...not bad!! Could be more descriptive...but I sympathize for you, I know how it is with the 'language barrier', too. Good storyline, can't wait for more, update soon!!
    KagoKitty
    =^-.~^=
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  • From ANON - mariah on January 05, 2004
    great story so far*** it has a great plot too so upd8 it soon.
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  • From ANON - dragon fly on January 05, 2004
    hey that was pretty cand and it's refreshing to see Kag being the popular and not kikyou, hope to see more of ur work son and of course the next chapter.
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