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Reviews for What Goes Up, Stays Up

By : BlackRavenOfDeath
  • From ShewolfBrisa on May 25, 2009
    hehehe i really like this story ^_~ its awsome not many people actuly give inuyasha dog like items other than his ears and as far as the "candy" awsome little plot twist lol ive actully sliped one of those to my bf befor and the results were OMFG funny. im happy someone actully put something like that in to a fic.
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  • From gokusgirl on May 11, 2008
    Okay...

    This was a good read; but I have to tell you about some of the things that didn't work for this story.

    Good explanation about Inyuasha calling Kagome a bitch. I can understand the reference it meant by him being a 'dog' and all... but I felt it was used too much and it kinda killed his personality. I can see him saying it once (in the heat of passion), but he said it well over three times... it was really out of character.

    Overall, seven out of 10 stars. You did well.

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  • From ANON - Jennifer on November 08, 2004
    Absolutely loved it!! I don't get it when everyone complains about Inuyasha calling Kagome 'his' bitch. I kinda think it's fun...I wouldn't mind it. It is different when he calls her 'a' bitch...but that didn't happen in this story. Loved it! Loved it! Loved it! Still can't stop smiling!!
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  • From ANON - Zelinko on August 16, 2004
    Well written story and the point about the knot was a unique turn and something I've thought about recently myself. Maybe write a sequel to this story in the future.
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  • From ANON - Hillary on March 09, 2004
    wow very good
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  • From ANON - bb on March 08, 2004
    you sd cod continue!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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  • From ANON - Nina on March 02, 2004
    That was a wonderful story. And I understand very well how you were using the word "bitch" in your fic. It was appropriate, especially since you did the whole dog mating thing. I found the entire story extremely erotic. Great job.
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  • From ANON - Gilaria on March 02, 2004
    True Inuyasha is a Dog hanyou, but he was also raised by a human woman. At least for the first 6-10 years of life. He knows little to nothing of youkai culture so it's highly unlikely that his use of bitch is innocent.
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  • From ANON - Kai on March 02, 2004
    Nice...... really nice....I liked the length of it.. i find to many lemons short..a d to quick happening between characters. I speically like the Anime side of Inu.. some people seem to forget hes half demon.... The bitch comments were a little tense .. but very approprite i would say
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  • From ANON - LYW on February 24, 2004
    An interesting peice of work. I never read a lemon before where Inuyasha knots. Interesting and well done. I hope you write more.
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  • From MelMuff on February 23, 2004
    Kiss ass fic! Really good! I luv it.
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  • From ANON - no need to know on February 22, 2004
    Ok, can I mention how disturbing it is to know that the old guy uses Viagra? TMI! @_@ Especally knowing what it is used for! *turns a soft shade of green*
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  • From ANON - DuosAngel on February 22, 2004
    oh that was so sweet and lustful. i loved it.
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  • From ANON - Melissa on February 21, 2004
    Didn't like the language, but enjoyed the rest of the story
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  • From Descendant on January 15, 2004
    This is great! It's so funny and dirty at the same time. It was really good. -Descendant
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