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By : LadyOrion
  • From ANON - Jen on October 11, 2004
    Don't stress it was great. Post more Soon!!!!!!!!!!!
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  • From ANON - jodibetz on October 10, 2004
    You know, this is a really good story. Even the style is good. Only thing is, its seems to progress too slowly. I'm just a poor reader who wants to help :)
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  • From ANON - szmadad on September 22, 2004
    What a wonderfully written chapter. The Miroku - Sango fluff was really quite sweet.

    I'll admit, I first became very excited that the firelight kisses might be shared b/w Inu-Kag - I'm a totally overzealous fan of that couple. But, sigh, it's TOO soon for that after such trauma involving resurrected Hojo...right? Right, aw shucks.

    I know things are going to be dark for a while for kagome...but I hope that she doesn't try to push Inu away and that Inu can control his temper with her for a bit....I really can't wait for something to happen between them...there's such sexual tension..
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  • From SilverFox on September 17, 2004
    O.o An evil Hojo? And not a dense as lead and brainless one? I don't know wheather to shake your hand or hug you! ( I think though I will just shake your hand ^_~ ) I have been waiting for someone to do an evil Hojo...make him return! Make him return! I love the idea! Heh heh...Its better than the same old same old Interfering Kikyo bit over and over again making me dizzy with its repetitivness...@_@ Heh heh....I vote for the Evil Interfering Hojo! I want that man to have some fucking brains for once. Though a dense as lead Hojo is hysterical, but a change of pace will be nice.

    I can't wait for the next chapter, this is going to be one great fan fic! Until next time! ^_^
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  • From ANON - szmadad on September 17, 2004
    Damn!

    Your Hojo version 2.0 was really evil! And I agree, it makes sense given that he'd be lacking the spiritual training and discipline that Kikyou had to temper even a bit of the pain and confusion of his death. But I'm glad you made him full of malice...it makes it easier to deal with him in a sense. Part of Inuyasha's problem with kikyo 2.0 is the fact that you can't tell if she really is trying to help or hurt the cause or a specific person. She has her own motives for doing things...and while it's convenient to hate her for interfering with Inu & Kag's romance...in truth she's an ambiguous sorta character. But Hojo on the other hand....he's Naraku's minion for sure.

    Hmmm....what if Hojo 2.0 and Kikyo 2.0 got together? What a truly evil couple that would make. Wow, so Kagome is going to have tons of issues over what's just happened - which is totally understandable.

    I mean, she's undeniably mutually attracted to Inuyasha but the man she was going to marry in her oime ime was recently murdered because of her. And while it's not her fault that he's dead - and she had no idea that she had any powers- Naraku just rubbed salt in all of the wounds by "resurrecting" him.

    I can't wait for the update b/c I really want to see how Inuyasha and kagome react to what just happened. This will definitely effect things between them., and definitely slow down the physical side of their relationship.=...but I can't see Kagome pulling away from Inuyasha - I think she needs him...her soul needs him too much for her to try avoiding him. She obviously feels safe and comforted by his presence. And she's going to need a lot of comforting now....
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  • From ANON - M on September 17, 2004
    This was great, I love it..please update again soon.
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  • From SilverFox on August 16, 2004
    ^_^ Great chapter! Tell your muse thanks for at least letting you write it before dragging you, uh elsewhere for other things! ^_~ Hee hee ^_^ But seriously great chapter. I didn't think the fight scene with Mistress Centipede was exceedingly long it fact it was just the right length in my opinion. And I have a good idea on who the voice is but I'm not going to say. Heh heh...Someone might read the reviews first! :-D Now only if my own muse was half as nice as yours...I think mines on strike! ( the littl bastard! )Anyhoo, until next time! ^_^
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  • From ANON - drake220 on August 05, 2004
    hey, i say listen to the muse man. he's sexy enough, he deserves it. damn, why can't mye loe look like that?!?!? mine's invisible! you know, i just cant catch a break! give a lime or something. not even between inu/kag. do someone else. anyways, great chapter, really enjoyed it.
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  • From SilverFox on July 25, 2004
    ^_^ I am so happy that you have finally been able to update! I was begining to wonder! I love the new chapters! They are great!

    * does a happy dance trips and falls * O.o! Anyhoo, I can't wait for the next chapter....* hops from one foot to the other in excitement * Until next time! ^_^
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  • From Precious on July 24, 2004
    So far I just love your story. The details are beautiful. The storyline is great. I kind of like some of the twists you added to make up for this being altered from it’s original storyboard. It’s still a bit strange havinuYasuYasha and Sesshomaru so close together and not trying to kill each other. And Jaken is living in a human village! The thought made me pause in reading! I do like how you acknowledge the fact that Kagome would have ended up with Hojo had she never met InuYasha. (I think some people tend to forget that…) I’m happy you kept InuYasha and Koga’s relationship the same. What is an InuYasha story without the dog vs. wolf battle! I loved how you tweaked the InuYasha/Kikyo betrayal. It was the same but different and it all made sense. I hope InuYasha has the brains to jump in after her. (Though I did crack up at his “helpess”ess”) And I’m going to keep the rest to myself, since I see you have banned someone from guessing. And I too am dyslexic. I know how hard it can be. And to boot you are in a foreign country. Hope that teaching job is going well. I have taken the time to beta chapters 1-9 since I know you don’t have the time. If things are still wrong I tried. Email me if you want the revised copy. Can’t wait for your next chapter!
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  • From ANON - Twilight on July 23, 2004
    I LOVE YOUR STORY!!! I can't wait for your next update! I'll be waiting...'til then...keep up the good work! ^^
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  • From ANON - amyfushigiyugi on July 23, 2004
    chapter 9 review

    omg inu yasha was stripping kagome ::falls in floor::
    i loved that chapter it was just too cool
    best fic writer award goes to "ORION" ^_^
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  • From ANON - amyfushigiyugi on July 23, 2004
    ch 8 review
    yummmmmmmmy kouga scene omg exstra yummmmmmy kouga scene
    i loved the heck out of that and so very badly want more
    does cooky little dance arouns computer
    i love this fic
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  • From ANON - amyfushigiyugi on July 23, 2004
    for ch 7 review
    yayyyyyyyy loved it loved it loved it i would say update buttttt i have 2 more chappies to read hehehe did i ever tell u i loved u ::oppps orion is blue again::
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  • From ANON - amyfushigiyugi on July 23, 2004
    yayyyyyyyyyy u updated yayyyyyyy hugs and does a danges ::noticeing she is hugging to tight:: orion? orion? why are u blue? starts danceing again with blur orion ^_^
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