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Reviews for The Spring and Brothers

By : YumeMaru
  • From ANON - nina on March 09, 2004
    Damn that was good. Sess is sooooo hot. Poor Inu puppy got left out. Oh well, maybe next ti Wha What's up with Kagura? I hate her. She's so nasty. So will Naraku take a turn with Kagome? Or Kagura? Please not Kagura, that's just wrong!!!!!! Can't wait for the next chapter. I'm glad you decided to continue this fic. It's great.
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  • From wyldwolfrose on March 09, 2004
    *pants* Damn that was HOT!!! I need go take a cold shower now.... Hmmmm, or.... I wonder if I could kidnap Sess for a few hours..... *runs off to hunt Sess* Please update soon!!!!
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  • From ANON - Shinna on March 09, 2004
    Can't wait for the next chapters. Keep up the good work. update soon
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  • From ANON - Helen on March 09, 2004
    Yeah Baby! That's what I'm talking about. Excellent chapter three. And what's this your bringing Naraku into the picture. ~squeals and jumps up and down~ I can't wait to see what plans he has for Kagome. ~starts to fantasize~ Anyway, can't wait for the follow-up. Until then Ja ne.
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  • From ANON - kagome barnett on March 07, 2004
    after seeing her pashinitly happy i wish inuyasa wolda left 00
    =
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  • From ANON - connie on March 02, 2004
    I can't waite to read more.
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  • From ANON - Saruko on February 28, 2004
    I enjoyed it very much, for your first you did a wonderful job!
    Review! plz
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  • From ANON - Aurora on February 25, 2004
    I love your story and i would love to read more. it usually takes alot to get me to like something, even more so a story, but you have mannaged to keep me interested and left me wanting more. i wish their were more authors like you out there. you said you would like some suggestions... well i'm not sure if i have much to offer but i can try. if you continue with this plot a) we all know Inuyasha won't go down without a fight, b) theres always Kouga to deal with. i personally love and thoroughly enjoy the Sessy+Kagome pairings, and i thank you for making a great one.

    P.S. you may also want to consider, if you put Naraku in itat hat his reaction will be. should he A) be the sneaky underhanded him and try to get them to betray eachother B) try to take Kagome away from them (to make her his own....hmmm i don't think Sessy would like that)

    i don't know if i helped any but i hope i did. i am begging you to continue. i will be checking regularly to see if you have updated. bye for now.
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  • From ANON - Angel on February 17, 2004
    OMG! You have to finish this! This is really awesome!
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  • From ANON - little_ol_me on February 16, 2004
    wow steamy
    for the rest of the plot dont drop of and make it mushy keep it romantic and steamy all the way through
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  • From ANON - vegetasgirl on February 16, 2004
    great story please keep writing and up date soon thanks later
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  • From ANON - jodibetz on February 16, 2004
    Hello. Just want to tell you that we are waiting patiently for the next chapter...
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  • From ANON - ANGELL1502 on February 16, 2004
    THEY CAN SHARE KAGOME FOREVER THAT IS A LIFE I WOULD LOVE TO HAVE TWO REALLY HOT GUYS TAKING TURNS TO PLEASURE ME. HEAVEN!!!!!

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  • From ANON - angell1502 on February 16, 2004
    This is one hoory.ory. You said you are looking for suggestions. OK. If Sessy takes Kagome then Inuyasha gets mad. I love Inuyasha, but he can be a jerk and he isn't fully demon so if Sessy dies he is heir. How about Kagome gets pregnant w/ Sessy a demon kills him. which leaves his brother to mate with Kagome and help raiis his heir b/c he would be a hanyou and not 3/4 human, but 1/2 and that way Sessy grows a heart and watches over them his 'family a s a spirt or ancestor. This is just suggestions, i have nothing concerning the Shikon no tama or Naraku, Kikyou might make a good 2nd prize to Inuyasha when Sessy takes Kagome though. Shippou should be adopted by Kagome though and raised along side Inuyasha/Kagome's kids and have one of the daughters fall in love w/ him and vise versa. If you didn't understand something email me or if you need any advise. OK UPDATE SOON I MIGHT BURST WITH CURIOUSITY IF I DON'T FIND OUT WHAT HAPPENS SOON OR I MIGHT JUST MAKE UP AND ENDING IN MY HEAD.
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  • From unokitsune on February 16, 2004
    poopy doopy! awwwwwwwwww come on, pwwwwwwwwwweeeeeeeeeeeeaaaaaaaaaaaaasssssssssssssssssssseeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee, twas evil cliffy, there is more, howz aboutz if sessy beats inuyasha to a pulp and steals kagome away anrks rks her? changes her to a demon so she will bear his pups.

    Damn this is fine good work for your first fic. pweaaaaaaaasssssssseeeeeeeeeeeee continue, pwease pwease pweeeeeeeeeeeeeeaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaassssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssseeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee

    *looks at you with begging kitsune eyes* *they are cutier than a puppy's begging eyes* pwwwwwwwwwwweeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeaaaaaaaaaaaaaaassssssssssssseeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee *whimpers*

    *transforms into her true 9-tails with goingsings fox form and pounces you, sending you to the ground and looks at you with begging eyes*
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