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Reviews for A Lifetime Loving You Part 2; The Path to Osaka

By : AlyssaW
  • From ANON - sparkmaster on March 18, 2004
    All I came say is please give us more of this wonderful story I love the fluff brtween inu/kag and kitzumi is real cute. UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE SOON!!!
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  • From ANON - Albino Elf on March 18, 2004
    Tough chapter to read I feel real bad for Kitzumi But maybe this is for the best Inuyasha can now be her father and take good care of Kagome and Kitzumi but I'm worried about this war that looks like it is bad. Hopefully Inuyasha & Kagome will make it through and they can live happily ever okay update real soon thanks bye.
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  • From ANON - lere on March 18, 2004
    WOOOhOOO!!!! And tha action begins!!!!! Wonderful chapter!!!! You know, now I see Inu's feelings for Kagome like I used to see her feelings for him before. It´s like when she was hiding her love, keeping it at bay afraid of rejection. But I really want to know about Kikyou and the mate issue. I think that was the final drop to Kagome when she refuses Inu.

    OH, and I love the fluff thing, too!!!! I want to read more and see if your evil treat is really cool, he he...

    Big hugs from Brazil, my friend!!!!
    Lere
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  • From ANON - Supercool on March 18, 2004
    I was hoping after Sesshomaru said all those things about Kitzumi that she would turn into the evil part of her a rip his balls off so he could not have pure blooded demon children down the road. GREAT STORY UPDATE SOON!!!
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  • From ANON - TLC on March 18, 2004
    Man Sesshomaru is such a bastard but maybe that is what people love about him personally if it was me I rather have a Hanyou with dirty blood over a cold demon lord because we all know who carries the bigger sword in the show. I hope Inuyasha & Kagome can realize feelings for each other soon! I hope you update soon!
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  • From ANON - Big Bad Wolf on March 18, 2004
    WOW!!! This story was referred to me by Ickabod and let just gorgeous. I wondered what Sesshomaru reaction would be to Kitzumi and I wish he would have been a little more supportive of the situation but that would be a an out of character Sesshomaru. GO Inuyasha & Kagome. Please Update soon!!!
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  • From ANON - Ickabod119 on March 18, 2004
    You jerked my heart with this chapter SDR. I was not surprised by Sesshomaru reaction to his child I thought you had him IC the whole time during the conservation between Kitzumi & Him. WOW! what can you say about Kitzumi being rejected by society is one thing but being rejected by flesh & blood is another But I glad in a way because She had a fire deep down in her alot like Inuyasha does and maybe he will just bring it out in her. Once again you prove with your wonderful writing skills how much I want to just grad Kitzumi and give her a big bear hug and tell everything is going to be alright. Well I think I ramble on enough please post more of this soon!!!
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  • From ANON - Andrew on March 17, 2004
    Damn Chapter 5 was awesome, so full of emotion but DAMN that Sesshoumaru, you just knew that bastard would do that. Anyway can't wait for the next chapter, keep up the good work and when ya get the chance post it! Also can't wait to see why you have such an evil grin on your face! :P
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  • From ANON - stella on March 17, 2004
    i waited so long for this story to continue and u delivered it very w can can't wait for the next chapter, keep up the good work
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  • From ANON - Andrew on March 12, 2004
    Awesome story, can't wait to read the next chapter but AH does Sesshoumaru really have to know? I sense complications coming..keep up the good work!
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  • From ANON - Ickabod119 on March 12, 2004
    It will be intersting to see what happens when Kitsumi is introduce to her father and if Sesshomaru will accept her and if she wiver ver consider Inuyasha her real father once she meets Seeshomaru. I hope you post more of this soon!!!
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  • From redk1 on March 12, 2004
    Another good chapter. Sorry about earlier, my AOL is giving me hell.
    Sexual tension is good. But we need more. We are hentai. OK I am hentai.
    I will make you a deal. Give me more sexual tension and I will give you a
    lemon soon. Ok I need more pain pills.


    Happy writing,

    youkai tsuki
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  • From ANON - lere on March 12, 2004
    Finally!!!! Finally!!!! Yesterday I almost send you a mesage asking "where the hell is MY new chapter??????????", but you made it today!!!! A fantastic chapter too, with Kitsumi's hanyou form and our favorite couple together again. And Sess??? Can't wait to read the next one. Pleeeeaseeeee!!!! Don't torture me anymore!!!!

    Big hugs from Brazil,
    Lere
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  • From ANON - RavenShadow on March 12, 2004
    This is such a cool story, I hoping you would update it soon. I am beginning to think that the people at FF.com are just to picky. I've heard from a lot of authors lately that there stories have been removed from the website, which is a shame because some of them are really good. I thought that site was a means of expression not censorship. But what can you do, I am glad that you are continueing with the story anyway. I hope you can update soon!
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  • From ANON - thoughts on February 19, 2004
    I'm looking forward to your new chapters.

    I have really enjoyed this story. I like your Inuyasha -- he is loyal and caring. He's not completely out of character since we have seen this side of him in the series.

    I love Kitsumi. She's wonderful.

    I must say that I feel like having a little chat with Kagome, but that is nothing new. I feel that way about her in the series too. :)

    I'm enjoying the pace of your story. It is very easy to read (that is a compliment by the way). It alllows the reader to get captured more by the story than by the words.

    Thanks for a very good read.
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