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Reviews for A Lifetime Loving You Part 2; The Path to Osaka

By : AlyssaW
  • From ANON - chick on July 19, 2004
    i love yur story ,but why dont u update damn it grrrrrrrrrrrrrrr ???!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!?!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!?!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!?!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!?!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!?!!!!!!!!!!!!!!???
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  • From ANON - Liz on July 01, 2004
    OH MY GODS!! You still haven't updated?? GRR I've read what you have here like 3 times. Can you let me know when you update?? Do meh a favor... Can you send meh you DeviantART page. I have been looking for you but cant find ya :D Mine is... so you know.. or so you could log on and send me a message http://punkswitchsk8er3.deviantart.com/

    With Much Love
    Huggles
    ~Liz~
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  • From ANON - Anandria on June 15, 2004
    Aw! So sad! Poor them! Yesh, so close and yet so far. They're so close to each other, on a level they aren't even aware of, and yet their own inhibitiond fad false insecurities prevent anything from happening(so far at least). Ha! Tai! The poor baby! Nyeh, ...yeah....Continue, onegai!

    Ja ne, Ruby-chan!
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  • From ANON - treefrog on June 08, 2004
    *chants* UPDATE! UPDATE! UPDATE! pretty please?!
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  • From ANON - jessica on June 08, 2004
    ok, the first word that comes to mind is wow! what an amazing, detailed, descriptive, emotional, epic story! the unique, restrained, tense nature of inu and kag's relationship is flawless and the story itself draws you in. i like how the kid has a personality, i love it all!! i can't believe fanfiction kicked this story off their site, especially when other stories there have left bitter tastes in my mouth. i was recomended to read 'rider on a pale horse' which is a very interesting and complex story, but gives a detailed description of a murder, and gratuitous, tasteless sex scenes between inu and kag that were not forwarned. it makes me laugh at the hypocrasy of it all, but oh well, please continue this story, it is beautiful! i wanted to nominate it for the inu yasha fanguild but noms are closed until the fall. keep up the great work!!

    jess

    p.s. i have an original fiction going at fictionpress.com called journey, my pen name is mokusei. if you have time i'd love to hear your feedback!!
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  • From ANON - treefrog on May 30, 2004
    I've been reading this story since it was on FF.net and I can't get enough of it! Pls update soon!
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  • From ANON - mokusei on May 17, 2004
    i just finished reading ally parts 1 and 2 and all i have to say is wow. your grammar could use some work, and i see a lot of spelling errors, but your descriptions are incredible and the storyline is friggin great!! please keep up with this story! i found you through a recomendation on fanfiction.net where i have an account under mokusei. i am also writing my own original manga at ionpionpress.net under mokusei as well.

    jess
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  • From ANON - Liz on May 09, 2004
    *cries* Sooooo sad! *sniffle sniffle* You MUST email meh when the next chapter is up.... OMG!!! *is still crying* Email- Punkswitchsk8er3@aol.com

    With much Love
    Huggles
    ~Liz~
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  • From ANON - maria on May 09, 2004
    This chapter was sad. Why doesn't Inuyasha tell Kagome that he doesn't want Kikyo anymore? That would solve a lot of their problems. I hope they work things out soon.
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  • From ANON - GgBg on May 08, 2004
    That chapter was heart wrenching at most points, yet it was ecchi and filled with longing and sadness on both of their parts; but I felt so much more for Inuyasha than Kagome. Rejection hurts I admit but to not take a chance on yourself or your feelings with a person that’s been with you for years is just...idiocy. I couldn't go on with someone I loved like that, I would eventually break down (before eight to 10 years had passed) and confess my feelings for them and if they had no feelings in return ask that they understand the feelings and grief that were now present. They would need to spend time away from me so that I could deal with what I needed to and move on. But their relationship is almost a travesty in itself because they declare nothing for each other; it makes you wonder if they ever had any intentions of being together. They are supposed to be adults and I freely admiat Iat Inuyasha has not had the greatest of records when dealing with both Kikyou and Kagome, but Kagome also needs to understand that:

    1. Kikyou did come first.
    2. He has been by her side faithfully for the past eight to 10 years.
    3. He has never even mentioned Kikyou or any other women for that matter.
    4. She has yet to ask him about his feel or or relationship with Kitsumi or her.
    5. Once they get to safety what will become of them, she and Inuyasha.

    Kagome needs to be more of a woman and less of a child since she is raising one and take a chance on Inuyasha. On another note can you please loose Tai; he is only bringing Inuyasha’s insecurities to light and making him doubt himself even more. Great chapter and update soon with a little bump and grind action. ;-)

    GgBg
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  • From ANON - lere on May 07, 2004
    WOOOOOWWWWW!!!! A wonderful chapter! Poor Inu-chaagomagome must be blind! Well I can't blame her since she was going thru a lot, but I think she will allow him inside her walls. Love will find a way, right? And I hope it will be soon, right? RIGHT???????

    Please, make me happy again updating soon, ok?

    Big hugs from Brazil!

    Lere
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  • From ANON - Hot Otaku on May 03, 2004
    Well here's one more review! im dying to know what happened to tetsusaiga!!! btw, i saw you having more typos and stuff. . .if you need an editor let me know!
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  • From ANON - inuluvr99 on May 02, 2004
    i just love this story!!
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  • From ANON - p423 on May 01, 2004
    awsome story keep it going
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  • From ANON - broken arrow little rock on May 01, 2004
    hey, good stuff ,update quick k
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