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Reviews for A Lifetime Loving You Part 2; The Path to Osaka

By : AlyssaW
  • From ANON - Mischief on May 01, 2004
    Beautiful! I really love this story. Please update soon.
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  • From ANON - Weesie on May 01, 2004
    My friend gave me the 2 new chapters of your fanfic and I thought that they were awesome! Inu and Kag have had to deal with so much crap in their young lives, it would be hard for me to even imagine a life somewhat like that, but real people go through something that almost parallels their life (without the demons) daily. You do such a good job of writing, I hope that's what your undertaking in school, you would be a fantastic writer!! Keep up the good work and update soon! I can't wait for the upcoming lime chapter, it's about time for some hentainess (new word, do you like?)!

    Weesie
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  • From ANON - Fred on May 01, 2004
    This is my review for chapter 11:

    Hey don't do that ever again, you had me scared for Inuyasha (just kidding). I think that the moral of this story is never get too Complacent in your ability or stop practicing, you might just get it in the end...and the front too. :-o Wow Kagome didn't believe in him for that short span of time, that must really sting, she shoulde moe more faith in Inuyasha...you never let the hero die (unless your ending the story or your trying to pair her off with someone else - and I'm sorry to all of you other author's out there but that just doesn't work and I don't read fics like those). So good save and I can't wait for the lime content of the next chapter! can you please, please, please make it lemony-lime or lime-lemony, let Inuyasha get some kind of action, I mean it's been five almost six years and that's not normal for a healthy male.;-) Until next update...Hurry!!

    Fred
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  • From ANON - Fred on May 01, 2004
    This is my review for chapter 10:

    I haven't been here to this website for a while due to none of my favorite author's updating their fics, so imagine to my surprise to find I had two new chapters from you to read. I would have paid good money to see Inuyasha carry Kitsumi in his mouth, too funny! I felt so sorry for Polaris for loosing her son like that and for Inuyasha to cry is unheard of. Kagome can so destroy a moment, can't she...she had to bring Sesshoumaru into their talk regarding Kitsumi. So a new set of clothes for our hero, I hope it protects against poison say like...Sesshoumaru's brand! Inuyasha gonna whip some butt, you go boy.

    Fred
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  • From ANON - maria on May 01, 2004
    This is a really good story, and I can't wait to see how you bring Kagome & Inuyasha together. I hope it's soon & that they end up happy.
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  • From ANON - Anandria on May 01, 2004
    At first I thought that it was Inu-Taisho, but then Kitsume said what she did. Although, i might not be entirely wrong. I know that it has something to do with the star charm. Ha, clever with the moon. I wonder when Jinenji's is...(the hanyou they met when they needed to get herbs for Kirara) Fluff, can't wait! Continue, onegai!

    Ja ne, Ruby-san!
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  • From ANON - Lynn on May 01, 2004
    OMG! I love it! I want more! So mean of you to put in there that you wont update unless you get 10 reviews! Well, I hope you get them soon, because I don't want to wait to long!
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  • From ANON - Ronna on May 01, 2004
    I wanted you to know that I love your stories! I have read A Lifetime Loving You twice now. I wanted to thank you for the time you spend on these. I look forward to a new chapter! Thank you again! Ronna
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  • From ANON - GgBg on May 01, 2004
    How could you put poor Inu through that? How many more times will he have to prove himself to get the respect that he deserves? He seemed more relieved after Tetsusaiga transformed for him, but I was wondering why he wouldn't have kept practicing with it? I mean Naraku hadn't been destroyed yet and he had lost the ability to have the sword transform as soon as it is pulled from the scabbard? That's not like Inuyasha; Sesshoumaru or Naraku could have shown up at any time during those five years and he would have been out of sync and ended up dead within the first couplesecoseconds when pitted against either one of them. After all, we women know, a man is nothing without his fully transformed "sword" (ha, ha)! On another note: I am so glad that you kept the inept idiot (Tai) asleep in his tent, leave his sorry butt their for as long as possible! Loved the chapter as always and I can't wait for the next installment.
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  • From ANON - nia-chan on May 01, 2004
    wow the last chapter (11) was kind od intense... I tell you i so feel inu, and kag's pain but my god, a misunderstanding and communication has led to so many lost and sad years... And little kitsumi i swear i just want to hug and squeeze her to death......
    anyways, well see see the aura on inu's fabbled sword wanicenice little suprise plotst..st.... Nice job.

    I am so wanting to know what is up with that now lol ... and the fight was good in this chapter as well. Keep up the good work.

    Nia-chan~~
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  • From ANON - lere on May 01, 2004
    The girl gave power to Inu? What exactly is the little one? I'm dying to know. And I'm dying to read about Kagome opening her heart to Inu agai! Ca! Can't wait to read the next chapter. But I'm still troubled about the mate thing between kikyou and Inu from the first part. If Inu youkai mate for life, how Inu will be with kagome since Kikyou is around? Please, be fast and update soon!!!!

    Big hugs from Brazil!

    Lere
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  • From ANON - youkai tsuki on May 01, 2004
    Thanks for the email letting me know once again. As I predicted, InuYasha won.
    A shame it was so short but I understand. A few spelling errors but I will overlook them.
    Seu neu next chapter.

    youkai tsuki
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  • From ANON - GgBg on April 29, 2004
    I was never so happy to get your email regarding the new chapter for this storWhenWhen I saw this chapter I was like an addict getting their next fix, I did four things to this chapter before I settled on readit ant and body was it good. I drank, smoked, injected, and inhaled it to get enough of it into my system to hold me until your next installment. By the way this was a fantastic chapter, let me know when you post the next one. Thank you!
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  • From ANON - Anandria on April 28, 2004
    You update when you don't get any more reviews? So, in theory, if a lot of people don't review than you'll update sooner? Quick! Everyone! Don't review so we can get a new chapter! Maybe I shouldn't say that, people might actually take me seriously...Lord knows that some of them are stupid enough to...coolness though! It's sad that he died, but I think it's kinda cool that Inu mourned his death. I don't know where I got the idea that he wouldn't, but it still shows that he isn't heartless(not that I ever had a doubt...) I'm using elipses a lot, aren't I? Ah well! Speaking of punctuation and things related, I caught some stuff! For instance, you've used the wrong form of words like "to" "two" and "too" and the different "your" and "you're" stuff like that. but I can't condemn ya, that stuff's easy enough to overlook! Continue, onegai!

    Ja ne, Ruby-san!
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  • From ANON - Anon on April 28, 2004
    well I went thru and read all the chapters for part two again just to refresh myself up to date and make sure nothing had changed in the earlier chapters since it was on ff.net. and once again your writting skills arezingzing....

    nia-chan~~~
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