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Reviews for A Lifetime Loving You Part 2; The Path to Osaka

By : AlyssaW
  • From ANON - Liz on March 26, 2004
    ::claps:: YAY!! Wonderful chappie! I wish to see the next one! I hope that you write it up soon. Once again... please email me the link when your next chappie is up!

    With much love
    Huggles
    ~Liz~
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  • From ANON - StoneDragonRuby on March 26, 2004
    Dear Anon,

    SESSHOUMARU IS NOT DEAD! He was attacked when Kagura turned him down, but he didn't die. Yes he was ready to accept death but he was still scared about it, it was to show that he was afriad of something for the first time. And yes even if he wante die die Tensseiga whould have saved him.

    And no, Sesshoumaru is not being taken out of the story in order to promote an Inu/kag romance. He's going to be in the story up into the very end.

    You should read the chapter over again, please. Mari-na saved his ass when he >>fainted
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  • From ANON - Anon on March 26, 2004
    hm.. Why do I get the impression that the only reason Sesshoumaru was killed was that there is no obstacle for Inu/Kag's romance? No one to claim the child as his even should he want too. Bad story telling on your part if that is the case. There is a spiffy thing called the Tenseiga that prevents Sesshoumaru's death.
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  • From ANON - Kim on March 26, 2004
    Wonderful 9th chapter!! The story is building really well. Waiting with baited breathe for next chapter!!
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  • From ANON - Creativity on March 26, 2004
    Dude, you have NO IDEA what I have been through trying to find this story since it was removed from FF.net. I've searched, I've e-mailed old reviewers of my story, and I even posted an announcement asking what happened! A bunch of people told me that it had been removed, but no one could tell me why or wheru'du'd moved it too, and for some reason I couldn't find your bio page. Finally, before the administrators removed my announcement, someone told me to to try typing in your name with no spaces and without the "ruby", and, lo and behold, here I am! I used to sit in school and wonder if you'd updated (I know, you think I'm pathetic, but to each her own!), and when I couldn't find the story it bothered me for a long time. I really love your story and I think it'ildiilding up to great things. Please keep updating. I'm not asking for a really quick chapter, or anything, but just knowing that your updating will keep me sane knowing I have something to do other than study for finals. Sorry that your story was removed, by the way, considering there are full out lemons still on there. Can't wait for next chapter! See ya.
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  • From ANON - Liz on March 26, 2004
    Great! I need more! You must email me when the next chappie is up! Email me at Punkswitchsk8er3@aol.com A.S.A.P or i'll be mad!!! Great picks by the way i'll put up a deviant watch on ya!

    With much love
    Huggles
    ~Liz~
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  • From ANON - Tinuviel IG on March 25, 2004
    Ha ha! Go Tai! Royallt yot yourself, that's definately the way to fair lady's heart! *eherm* typos, saw a lot of 'em. Sorry! How often do you proofread? Just curious! I loved it all. It was great how you handled things, but I didn't think Kaede would die! Wah! Did Kikyo's sash awaken Hanna? So the star charm keeps Ura locked away and all, but what about Hanna? Does she get awakened on Kit's human night? Wouldn't that be kind of weird...a different person on that night than is present the entire month...hmmm...what was the scream that Kit heard and the pain, how did Kaede react to that if Kit actually doubled over or showed the pain that she was feeling? Oh, and I STILL can't get over Inu's goatee. Would his facial hair actually be black? I mean really....Oh well. It's good though, and I like the one pic with Inu and Kit when she's older. It's sweet. Continue, onegai!

    Ja ne, Ruby-san!
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  • From ANON - Waruagaki on March 24, 2004
    Loved Chapter 8. It was very cute. Can't wait for chapter 9!!!
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  • From ANON - stella on March 24, 2004
    that was so cute at the end, please send us more. i really love this story
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  • From ANON - Fred on March 24, 2004
    Gees, what a wimp! I mean he woke up and peed himself at almost the same time! Not the kind of guy you want to take home to mother Ha, ha. Update soon, please. Oh, excellent chapter as always!
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  • From ANON - Weesie on March 24, 2004
    A great chapter, where is it going with Tai? Please update.
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  • From ANON - sparkmaster on March 24, 2004
    An update with two new chapters of SDR awesome story my only comment in this review Kawainess I love both cahpters to death I was sadden to see Keade die but you gave a awesome moment between Kag and Inu and then in the next it was nothing Inuyasha & Kitzumi Kawainess. I just hope the Fool Tai don't get any idea's about Kaqome. Well I hope you update soon See ya soon!!!
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  • From ANON - Miroku igodxgod on March 24, 2004
    I can't believe I got to see 2 new chapters of a awesome Inuyasha Fanfiction and let me compliment you on how you ahndle Keade death and the Fluff between Inuyasha & Kagome, Inuyasha & Kitzumi it was the perfect balance between angst & fluff. Absolutely a beauiful story and your writing is gorgeous. I just hope you can give us longer chapters in the future.
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  • From ANON - Smack on March 24, 2004
    You got to be kidding me a new guy trying to steals Kagome attention I hope we see a really jealious Hanyou. Wow I just can't get enough of your writing style these to stories you have posted here at Aff are some of the best and now all I ask is that i get more of this wonderful story soon.
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  • From ANON - M Dog on March 24, 2004
    Go Inuyasha & Kitzumi they make the cutest daughter/father combo out their in fanfiction today I just hope Inuyasha and Kagome can become the cpule to raise her.
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