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Reviews for A Lifetime Loving You Part 2; The Path to Osaka

By : AlyssaW
  • From ANON - GgBg on March 22, 2004
    Great chapter as always but why did you kill off Kaede? Why couldn't it have been one of the unknown villagers instead? Oh well, Que Sara, Sara. I hope Kagome doesn't try to revert back to their old relationship, pre Kaede's death. What happened to Inuyasha chest? Update soon.
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  • From ANON - Fred on March 22, 2004
    That was so sweet! It's about damn time she got the ants out of her pants and made a play for him! Update, update, update.
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  • From ANON - Weesie on March 22, 2004
    Finally, Kagome is coming around. I was wondering when she would show him some affection! Great chapter, please update soon.
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  • From ANON - youkai tsuki on March 21, 2004
    Thanks for the email letting me know you updated
    Unfortunately I was so far in hell there was no computer,
    not even at their libary. UGH. But I am back now and I
    read your chapters. Great writing as usual. I was sorry to see
    you received a nicely worded 'bad' review but to each his own.
    See you on IM or in the reviews.


    youkai tsuki
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  • From ANON - Kim on March 20, 2004
    I really love these two stories. I read part 1 last night. It was beautifully written. I like the attention to detail and the way it flowed. I was sooo glad you DIDN'T put a lemon in that one. It would have been really cheap. Part 2 is building very nicely. I think you did Sesshoumaru's part just right. It's about what I'd expect him to do. Please update soon!!!
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  • From ANON - stella on March 19, 2004
    yeeeahh, there finally getting together again. slowly but surely. its so cute. can't wait to read more. keep it up
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  • From ANON - Adam on March 19, 2004
    Great chapter, grstorstory, keep up the good work.
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  • From ANON - lere on March 19, 2004
    WOOOHOOOO!!!! Inu and Kag fluff!!!!! Love it!!!! You are fantastic!!! Can't wait for the journey too.

    Big hugs from Brazil!!!

    Lere.
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  • From ANON - lere on March 19, 2004
    I just love the way you are making them loose the hold in their feelings. It's so beautiful!!! And Inu personality is more mature too. I like that. What about the girl and Kikyou??? I want to know more about that.

    Keep going soon!!!!

    Biiiiiiiiig hugs from Brazil!!!!

    Lere
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  • From ANON - Sendai. on March 19, 2004
    This is okay I suppose. I don't like the multy first person POV's but that's just me. Um Sorry Sesshoumaru wasn't just used he too was violated and raped. Sex without consent is rape, plain and simple. For someone like him such an tramua would likely be equal or greater than what Kagome is feeling. Though she seems to have recoverd. I doubt I'll read anymore of this. It simply conveys messages that I feel are inapporiate. Anyway best of luck too you. This is a fairly well written story, just not something that I'm willing to read for obvious reasons.
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  • From ANON - Miroku is a god on March 19, 2004
    I feel for Kitzumi and Inuyasha and Kagome I don't want any more bad things happen to them they all have suffered enough but it your writing that makes me feel for them you have a great talent I am so glad I found this fic it is to good to be true I see that their is a frist part ot this so I got to quite with my rambling and go read the first part Thank you for blessing us with this wonderful story.
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  • From ANON - Venus on March 19, 2004
    Sorry It actually cut off part of my review I was also wondering if Sesshomaru will be play a bigger part I Inuyasha is the father but a reconcle between Kitzumi and the demon would be cool to see.l thl that's all I wanted to ask you Thanks for listening to me ramble.
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  • From ANON - Venus on March 19, 2004
    I just got through reading your first part of the story and why didn't Inuyasha just stay in Owari were it would be safe for Kagome & Kitzumi I know they have friends and stuff but wouldnave ave been until Kitzumi turned like 12 or older before returning to Keade Village. Well anyway I just love the second part to the tension is so great between kag/inu and a five year old Kitzumi is cute I hope Naraku doesn't get his hands on her. I also hope Inuyasha doesn't get to hurt try to be the noble hero we all love him for. I love it Stone Dragon Ruby I look forward to more.
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  • From ANON - Kagome is #1 on March 19, 2004
    WOW WOW what an awesome story this is my first time aF anF and to find a story like yours is cool but i want to know when we might a little encounter between Inuyasha & Kagome I hope it is soon. But whenever it is I still love your story I wish I could be Kitzumi and hope Inuyasha was my dad Sigh.
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  • From ANON - Cold Demon Lord on March 19, 2004
    People should really check out your story it is one of the best ones here even if you made Sesshomaru Look Like a complete bastard but I love it anyway. I will try to catch all your updates whenever you post.
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