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Reviews for A Bus Stoirytirytale

By : Sabichan
  • From DyslexicSquirrel on March 16, 2004
    Guess who? Seriously if you don't know who this is right off the bat, you got some problems girl. ^_^

    First I would like to get this out of my system and say: Awwwwwww!

    That was the cutest thing I think I have ever read. The Mega Mutent Lemon rocked! It was full of Waffy goodness and smut. Great combination. I have been meaning to ask you, if you ever read any book by Lori Foster. I was reading Say No to Joe? and this one part of the book just kind of reminded me of the first lemon you wrote for Inu and Kag. Joe Winston (he is now one of my favorite characters from a book, ever and he makes appearances in three of her book) said "Come for me, Luna." when he was having sex with the woman he ended up marring for the first time. I read that and automatically thought of this fic. If you haven't read any of her books, I highly suggest them. She is an amazingly, gifted writer. I finished two of her books already, am reading two more and have three waiting to be read yet. Shannon McKena is very good, too. The two of them wrote a few books together with another author.

    I have to go read the Epilouge so I'll review again. ^_^
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  • From ANON - ladykaa28 on March 16, 2004
    Beautiful!!! After all the heartaches and misunderstandings everyone is basically one big happy family. and the legend continues... the miko and the hanyou!
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  • From ANON - No One Knows on March 16, 2004
    NOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO!!!!!!! I can't be over!! I don't want it to be over!! That was the best fucking story ever written!! Hell, it's better then most books I've ever read! SO AWESOME!! I loved it! You should take this story down, make up your own characters, and publish this. I'd pay 20 bucks to read it, hell I'd pay 100 bucks to read it! Well if you don’t publish this one, tell me wheu dou do publish your first awesome novel. This story was just fan-freaking-tastic.
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  • From ANON - FaTaLfURy on March 16, 2004
    Hey, Sabi chan! Hope you still remember me. I just want to say
    CONGRATS for finishing your story and WOW!!! I mean, a great
    starting point, and a perfect ending. You never cease to amaze us!
    Thanx for sharing this one with us, and I know the next one will be
    just as wonderful-if not more so. Thanx a and and good luck! Hope
    to read another one of your "patent-pending" soon! hehehe.
    Love ya lots and more power!
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  • From ANON - KenYasha on March 16, 2004
    ... what can I say? I just spent some wonderful hours reading your story, and I just had the most wonderful time in doing so! Somehow, I am really sad that the story is finished by now. But still.. yes, what I wanted to tell you: Thanks a lot for sharing the story! You're the best!
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  • From ANON - Sera on March 16, 2004
    --sigh---
    what can I say?
    Et tht that this peice of writing is just perfect in any sense.
    I'm so out of words at the moment, I just can't express what i want to say (not even in my mother tongue;)))
    I must have read 1000s of fanfiction in at least 3 or 4 fandoms and I never ever read something that touched me so deeeply.
    I feel like this story speaks directly to me...
    ...sorry if I'm babbling, I'm just SO touched at the moment.
    With your permission, I'd like to that this piece to the copyshop and make a hard copy --just one for my self, so that I can read it over and over.
    This is not only the BEST Inuyasha fanfic I ever read, it's one of the best fanfics I read ever.
    I'm really really sad it's over now, but I wont beg for a sequel...just because I feel this perfect story is finished. It has come full circle (can you even say this in english??;)
    I hope I'm making sense here....;)
    Just let me tell you I'm amazed by this story.
    Please keep on writing, I really really can't wait for more.
    all the best
    sera
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  • From ANON - Soranji on March 15, 2004
    *cries* one chapter left
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  • From ANON - DRAKE220 on March 15, 2004
    inu loves kag and sess loves rin and miroku loves sango and I LOVE YOU SABI CHAN!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!(in a purely platonic way so you dont freak out)- you are amazing, this fic blows my mind!!! og, god i am literally crying when inu proposed. I was all 'AHHHHHHH!!!! YES YES!!!!' then i came to and realized that i had to read ke sae say yes. it was a nerve wracking second. BUt this fic is such a sheer pleasure to read. so well worded and well written adn fabulous and you have mega mutant lemons!!!!!!!!! i mean, CAN it get any better? HELL NO! though i would be impressed if your stories did get better. i am so upset this fic is over. it was probally one of my fav stories ever to read. I'm doing advertisments for this fic on other sites b/c anyone who does not read it is missing out.
    about that mega mutant lemon- wow. it was overall fabulous,l hot, steamy, poignant, cute, meaningful ect. but nothing NOTHING beat miroku's "my angel of afterglow." i laughed hysterically when i read that. it was brilliance, plain and simple. Miroku was GREAT, plain adn simple. His character is.........so.........WHAM on target, y'know? mind boggling how you accomplished that. I abase myself before you adn this fic. praise you! please put up the other fic soon. i'm gonna need my sabichan fix soon. oh crap there i go sounding like a stalker again. ::sighs:: sorry 'bout that. LOVE LOVE LOVE this fic
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  • From ANON - Shaid on March 15, 2004
    ::sniffsniff:: sabichan, you are amazing... What a sweet proposal! ::sighs:: and what a sweet chapter...

    I'm sad it's ending, but god is it a happy ending. Thank you, thank you, thank you for your hard work and incredible imagination. I have enjoyed this story so much!
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  • From ANON - ladykaa28 on March 15, 2004
    Sad that it ended, but happy thay everyone got back together.
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  • From ANON - ~A~ on March 15, 2004
    Wow, this is such a good fanfiction I'm sad it's ending, but I'm looking forward to another wonderful story by you soon. You're a wonderful writer, this is a great fic, and I can't wait for you to write more. Thanks! ^_^
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  • From ANON - ladykaa28 on March 15, 2004
    It was worth the wait. I was wondering how you were going to bring the couples together now that everyone was back. Well this should be a wedding to remember.
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  • From ANON - TheDreamMeIsReal on March 13, 2004
    *sighs happily* Your fic is one of my favorites. I think you write beautifully. My goodness you've made me cry more than I ever have reading any fic. Wait... actually your fic is the only one that has made me cry O.o Like a baby I might add. Your story means so much to me because I've had my heart utterly broken and then put back together too. It really does feel like you're dying. The way you described what Inuyasha was thinking and going through was very close to my own experience so I congratulate you on portraying it so realistically. Heh... but I still couldn't imagine him holding that pain for a year... yowie he is strong. Usually I don't like it when stories aren't inrd prd person but you do first person so well that I absolutely love it. I especially like Inuyasha's POV -- you're right in saying that he seems to tell the story best. But the occaisonal Kagome or other character POV is really nice too, and make the story really rounded. I'm so happy to have found such a wonderful fic as yours. Never stop writing cause you've got talent.
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  • From ANON - Soranji on March 05, 2004
    I want to be on the update list. My e-mail addy is: soranjichan@soranjihime.net

    *cries* I hate viruses.. They suck.
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  • From ANON - CybrEmly01 on March 05, 2004
    Total bummer Sabichan. A similar thing happened to me just a week or so ago. Had to reboot the
    entire system. I have nothing left. *stomps foot in indignation* And I had almost the entire first
    and second seasons of Slayers! on the hard drive.

    *muttering* Dam*ed computer problems.

    Yeah, Bathroy's fic is fantabulous. And I saw where it was dedicated to you. One of these days I'm
    going to start a "Mutual Appreciation Society" for authors and reviewers. We all just have so much
    affection for each other.

    Anyways, don't blow a fuse in your eagerness to wrap up this fic. We want you 'firing on all cylinders' so
    we can get more and more fics from you. Y'know, alive & healthy so we can bully you into entertaining
    us.

    Ja,
    CybrEmly
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