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Reviews for A Bus Stoirytirytale

By : Sabichan

From FaTaLfURy on March 05, 2004
ei, Sabi c it it's me again. I just finished reading this wonderful story of yours, and I want you to know that I was really amazed. I never really liked those AU fics, but oncreadread this one, it made me change my mind. :D Great story, the characters are refreshing, always full of surprises (you pulled a lot in this one! hehehe) and a beautiful way of interpreting it. Plus, it's kinda cute and makes me feel smug that Inuyasha was the one to wait this time... so keep up the good work, hope you finish this one soon so that you can start another one fast. Yay! looking forward to more. nd gnd good luck
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From ANON - kettricken on March 04, 2004
Sabichan, I'm so sorry. I know how it feels to lose a story that way--it's never quite the same when you rewrite it. =( I pine for you. I'll be waiting for you to continue, though--as patiently as possible, although that may not really BE all that patient... I know I haven't reviewed in awhile, but I HAVE been readiso pso promptly that I sometimes get to the list on AFF, see that your story isn't at the top with the updates, and just leave it up, refreshing the page every few minutes. Sad, aren't I? =)

Meanwhile, I took your advice and read Rider on a Pale Horse in its entirety. Thank you, thank you, you are now officially one of my heroes! I would've missed out on a great story if you hadn't pointed it out. Course...that doesn't mean I'm not still anxious for my Bus Stop. =7 Best of luck with this story--we're cheering for you!
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From redk1 on March 04, 2004
I am sorry to hear about your computer. But I do love this story!
This was the best two hours I have spent in a long time. And now
I am off to research my story. I await your update!!

youkai tsuki
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From ANON - trinity on March 04, 2004
sorry to hear that, weez all luv's you (GREAT BIG, BIG, BIG, HUG) i know me and all the other peep's who love your story understand that it will take sometime, so relax take a big breathe and let those wonderful creative juices flow, you haven't disappointed me and i'm quite sure anyone else!! and if anyone says differently then i'll curse them for all eternity to have REALLY REALLY AND I MEAN REALLY BAD TOE JAM!!EEEW!! so come on and give me a smile....come on...come on...there i knew you could do it!! happly waiting for your next chap(s) trinity.
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From ANON - drake220 on March 04, 2004
::winces:: yeesh, that sucks! my sympathies! take your time, do the story right! and that mega mutant lemon (hehe! very funny title) sounds great!
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From ANON - Carrie on March 04, 2004
Oh sweetheart, take all the time you need. You do know that as your evil twin if I ever find out who this fucker is that I will kill him...okay maybe I'll just maim him a bit, how's that? I should proabaly go save stuff on disks now...I'm just like you. I never back shit up. I'm so lazy, but I think I will take all the email addresses out of my address book. Goddamnit this sucks. *hugs* Feel better and don't worry about making people wait. They understand.

Ja Ne

P.S. that mutant lemon thi.sou.sounds good XD
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From ANON - shaid on March 04, 2004
Oh Sabichan!!! ::hugs:: I know exactly how you feel. When I was 15, I started work on a story and had it all saved on 3 and 1/4 inch floppies. My father decided to be nice and back up all my disks and inadvertantly copied over my 90 page masterpeice as well as 5 other 40 page works of art and nearly 100 poems that I'd written. I was devastated. And I never finished any of them.

I'm so glad you will be finishing this, though. What I've read of your work is amazing and I hope to be a devotee of your novels someday. Keep writing, please. I can't tell you how much I've loved what you've written. ope ope someday I have the courage to post my fics here. And thank you for waht you already have written. I've gained new perspective on things through it.

faithfully,

Shaid
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From ANON - Atropa on March 04, 2004
Ohhh you poor thing.. You have my greatest sympathy. *hugs*
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From ANON - Soranji on March 01, 2004
*blush*
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From ANON - Carrie on February 29, 2004
I just realized how many typos I have in my review.... ^_^;;; If you can't understand anything just ask me to explain.
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From ANON - Carrie on February 29, 2004
Forgot the typos.

I SET her down none to gently, my body still leaned over hers.

Her nails dug into the skin of my back, and I could HEAR the slapping of our skin each time I thrust into her.

�Not so INTO powerful now, are ya?�

Bye bye again

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From ANON - Carrie on February 29, 2004
You dirtyrty rty girl you. LOL That was so funny. You really need to find that link...fruity purple dress. *laughs*

One of my friends, Lisa actually, gave her boyfriend a suprise once and becasue of it I can no longer look at Altoids anymore without getting mental pictures. Anyway, you know that feeling you get in the back of your throat when you eat mints? Like that cold kind of feeling. Well, this will work better if you are a guy, imagine that feeling all over your dick. Apparently, it feels very good if Dan's reaction was any proof. She told this story at like two in the morning at Thespian convention a few years ago. It was kind of suprising. Apparently, he does sexual things like he play hockey, very aggressive. Not like bad aggressive, just...you know. That's what I was thinking about during the last little thing with Kagome going down on Inuyasha. Seriously, can't look at Altiods the same ever again....

I also can't look at turkey basters or large ballons without dirty thoughs either. A few years ago, I was mini-golfing with Lisa and Phil. It fun.fun. We stole a lot of golf balls. Not the point. Lisa took us to this church/cemetary place where her parents had gotten married to look at this thing called the Love Seat. So there we are, sitting on the Love Seat, when Phil like the stupid bitch he can be thinks he sees a ghost. He's freaking out and then Lisa starts freaking out so they get up and book it the car. Naturally I run after them not wanting to get left behind in their ghost induced panic and miss the curb. I . No. Not one of my better moments. I sprained my ankle. Lisa and Phil finally let me go home after dragging me to a PLAY GROUND and making me GET OUT OF THE CAR AND WALK. I limped my ass in the house at like 12 am and when I woke up the next morning, not wanting my mother to think I had insane friends, which I do, pretended I tripped down the stairs. Later that day, Lisa and Phil show up at my house carrying a from Shop Rite and a this enourmous bag of ice. Phil put the bag of ice on my ankle and Lisa handed me the bag. When I looked in it, let me tell you, funniest thing ever. They had picked up the radomest things ever and just threw them in a bag. I got a turkey baster, a long green ballon not blown up, a bottle of baby oil, and two boxes of Peeps. When my mom came back in the living room I shoved it under the ocffee table. I had to try not to laugh hysterically.

*sigh* The things my friends get me into...

Oh and the leg shaving went very well. They are nice and smooth XD

Lemons....what to say about them but HOT *giggles*

*fans self* I need to go take a cold shower now. Ja Ne ^_^
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From ANON - drake220 on February 29, 2004
that. was. the .best. lemon. i .have. EVER. EVER. read! that last one blew me away! absolutely fantastic! i think you are doing a faboo job of balancing the serious with the fucking. great great great. adn i agree and support the no marriage right off thing. and please get that link. sounds very amusing. and please please do the skirt/miroku thing. some ideas should not be ignored.
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From ANON - Carrie on February 29, 2004
It's getting hot, hot , hot! *dances*

........

o-o *clears throat* I found a typo.

"I was a more than a little surprised at how comfortable I felt around her."

He sounds Italian. The 'a' after shoushould not be there.

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From ANON - shaid on February 29, 2004
You are awesome. I agree with the way you did the lemons. It feels right for them to be so comfortable in their sexual relationship, even though they've been apart for so long. They're meant for each other.

And I do like the Idea of Miroku coming over and eating something that dropped on the table before inu gets a chance to clean it... hehehe, yeah. Reminds me of when I gave my former roomie, Brendan, a mattress from my parents' house (hauled all the way from Ohio to DC) 'cause he didn't have a bed. Then informed him that it was the mattress I'd lost my virginity on. He turned an odd color and mumbled something about that being just wonderful and my other roomie, the psycho-bitch and I laughed our asses off. She didn't laugh as hard though. It was also the mattress she'd slept on when visiting me in Ohio. hehehe

Please finish this soon! I want to re-read it in it's entirety! I re-read things alot, especially if they're well written with happy endings. And I love waht you're doing. I'm so happy you have Sessh with Rin. They have to be my favorite pairing, if only because she's so sweet and he's so harsh. That and there's usually an age difference and I have a thing for older men. ::grins:: obviously. My fiance is nearly a decade older than me.

But seriously, Sabichan, I am really really REALLY loveing this story. Can I print it out for easier reading when you're done? e-mail me and let me know.

Thanks for a wonderful read.

Shaid
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