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By : Sabichan

From ANON - Kawool on February 29, 2004
To put it in a nutshell, it's AWESOME !!!!
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From ANON - LadyCatBailey on February 29, 2004
*blinks* *opens mouth and then closes it* Uh. *blinks* Holy. SHit. Call me Kagome and spank me silly...XD XD Sorry, moment.

The lemons are most definatly ripe for picking, ne? XD Three lemon chapters in a row. You freaking ROCK! *worships* And you aren't the only one who seens Inu as a talker. I mean seriously. XD I need to shut up while I"m ahead. LMAO

I'm sorry this review isn't longer ore ore coherent...but, yeah...*cough* I'm goign to go take a cold shower now...XD XD

Much Love,
Cat
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From ANON - ladykaa28 on February 29, 2004
Oh my gosh!!! That is all I can say for the last few chatpers that I have read. I'm so happy that everyone has finally come home. Now Sess and Rin can get married. Will Inu stay in the mail room or will he take a job at least a little higher on the totem pole? Will Kagome continue to sing? Will Inuyasha start to sing with her, or help out in anyway as far as writing some of her songs with her or for her? Will Kouga come back? Things were not finished with him were they?
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From ANON - Carrie on February 28, 2004
I forgot to put my name on the last one -_-;;;
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From ANON - Anon on February 28, 2004
which she BLUSHED profusely about

It�s good that YOU two had this time apart.

When you get TO be our age

I nearly moaned aloud as her sweet taste flooded my senses. I had dreamed about THIS for so long

There, as your evil twin, I have fixed your typos. I have learned that I am a better evil twin than I thought before. You're a hopeless romantic. Well, soI! YI! You want to be a writer. I'm trying to write a book right now. How freaky is all this shit?

The whole reunion was SO CUTE! I would make this review longer, but I really need to shave my legs (bet you all needed to know that) and wash my hair so I can straighten it. Takes me like an hour. If I didn't love my hair so much....

Yay! Lemon soon! WAI!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

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From ANON - LadyCatBailey on February 28, 2004
*bawls in my corner* I'm so HAPPY! They're together, and that was SO romantic! I mean...*sniffles into a tissue* So sweet. So incredibly sweet, I can't even discribe how happy I was when he saw her. And I was flipping cracking up when The Momma's were telling Kagome about sex....BWHAHAHAHAHAHA....

The bad thing is...I've had that talk. XD XD It was so not right! It scarred me for life! LOL

RIn freaking rox. I luff Rin. She MUST have a baby damnit! *sniffles*

I can't wait till tonight...we get...LEMON....*cackles madly and bounces like a rabid hamster* LEMON LEMON LEMON! YEEEES...I'm so weird. I need a life. LOL

Much Love,
Cat
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From ANON - Soranji on February 28, 2004
*dies* need more *falls over*
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From ANON - Carrie on February 26, 2004
Okay, dude I just read CatBailey review. That's nothing. I had a dream a few monbackback where I had SEX with Inuyasha. If not for the part in the end where he changed into someone I will not speak the name of, it would have been perfect. Damn my subconscience. >_
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From ANON - Carrie on February 26, 2004
OMG you poor baby! If my mother did that I would kill her! I mean people can be funny when they are drunk, but not when they are throwing up and in public. I got sick once and it was not pretty, but it was in a hotel room and I wasn't really drunk. Never, and I mean this, NEVER mix screwdrivers and Colt 45. Oh my god, I look back at it now and it's really funny, but at the time it was nasty. It never would have happened if Phil hadn't have drank the rest of the damn vodka though. Damn you Phil!

It was New Years and Phil1, Phil2, Cindy, Katie, and me got a hotel room. That in it's self was something considering none of up was old eh toh to actually get a hotel room at the time. Besides me waking up at like 5 in the morning and puking all over the floor, I mean all over, thas tas the best night of my life! I feel kind of bad though becasue when we left we just put a towel over it. So we got to the hotel room around 10 or so on New Years Eve. The only person who wasn't drinking was Phil 2. Cindy and Phil 1 got drunk off their ass. Cindy kept falling off the bed and saying people pushed her off. We had to drag her off the floor and she had rug burn all over her back and her arms. Sometime after the ball dropped she fall asleep on Phil 2. She was tangled around him pretty well and he looked down her shirt and said, "She's wearing lingerie." Me and Katie just stared at him and said , "Of course she is. So are the both of us." and he said "No, I mean it's black." Men are idiots sometimes. So, Phil 2 had to go home, Cindy was still passed out, and Phil 1 was complaining about being hungry. Me and Katie left the hotel (there was no room service. Cheap bastards.), "borrowing" Cindy's car (I mean she was unconcious. She's not going to mind, right?), and drove to a gas station down the road. We bought like muffins and stuff. When we got back Phil 1 and Cindy were in the bathtub smoking. We had told Phil 1 not to smoke in bed becasue we didn't want him to burn down the place. So wer're all in the bathroom, The back of Cindy's shirt is wet, and then Katie went out in the hallway for ice of something. Phil for some reason though he flushed her down the toilet because she wasn't there. So he's yelling and hugging the toilet saying, "Katie, I'm so sorry!" and she comes back in and has no idea what's going on. It was so funny.

You actually met the Goo Goo Dolls? I want to meet the Goo Goo Dolls. I love them! And what's this about your mother and Keanu Reeves ass?

The thing with the toaster was so funny! I need to say this though. When Rin's cell rang and she yelled "I'm vibrating!" I had some very dirty thougths. I and I have to say everytime you say you're "virbating"....well just think about it. You can't say something like that around me without me getting bad mental pictures. I will leave you off with a little song from Les Miserables, which I saw at Truman High School, who I am quite certain was the first high school to ever get rights to that play...around these here partsway.way. I love the music fromthis play *listens to the CD*

There is a castle on a cloud
I like to go there in my sleep
Aren't any floor for me to sweep
Not in my castle on a cloud
There is a room that's full of toys
There are a hundred boys and girls
Nobody shouts or talks too loud
Not in my castle on a cloud
There is a lady all in white
Holds me and sings a lullaby
She's nice to see
And soft to touch
She says: 'Cosette I love you very much'
I know a place where no one's lost
I know a place where no once crys
Crying at all is not aloud
Not in my castle on a cloud
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From ANON - Carrie on February 26, 2004
I am the best evil twin ever! MUWAHAHAHAHAHAHAH-

And stop blaming me for stuff! I really like living.

Time for the visit from typotypo nazi. �You�ve grown up quite a bit, if you don�t me saying." There should be a 'mind' in the sentence. �Yes, Come one, we don�t have too much time." It should be 'on' instead of 'one'. �I do hope you aren�t going to gawk the entire way, It�s very unbecoming ou.� u.� The comma after 'way' should be a period, ne?

The heart to heart with Kagome and Sess, only one word to describe it. AWWWWWW! Okay, so that wasn't exactly a word so much as a sound. *waves hand dismissively* That's not the point. I almost cried again. When Sess found Inu in the cemetary, that was so sad. Ha, and I love Rin. Sess is so whipped lol.

On a personal note, I did technical theatre all four years of highschool, which was not catholic. I am very happy about that. I don't think I could have put up with four more years of nuns. It was bad enough that my mother forced me to go to church 'til I was 18. Is it just me or did you notice that doing theatade ade your mind that much more cememnted in the gutter? I was very innocent until my theatre friends got a hold of me. I was! Now, I have like the dirtiest mind of all my friends. I can turn almost anything into a sexual reference. There's this guy who works in Law Lawn and Garden section of the department store I work in. He's new, but it seems that despite the dress copde which states that you must where black or khaki pants, he wears gray. So June and I call him Gray Pants. We have nicknames for a lot of people at work, like the Shoe Nazi. That's another story. Anyway, I was clocking out and Gray Pants was at the Tool cashwrap and he said , "You leaving already?" I said yes. I had never talked to him before in my life and he say, "You suck." I had to bite my tounge to keep a very innapropriate, smartass comment of "You wish" from leaving my mouth. I just said "Whatever, I've been here since 8:00" and walked away. I kind of wish nhat hat I would have said that just to see what would have happened.

I was an International Thespian Society memeber, too. I went to Thespian convention my senior year of high school. My friends and me went insane. We were jumping around the hotle room and taking these incredably weird pictures, like the one of Lisa and Katie poking their head out of the bathroom with towels wrapped around them, so they looked like they were just coming out of the bathroom together. We use to joke about being MLLs (Mad Lesbian Lovers) and call eachother Penis. I don't remember how that got started.

I should gad tad the other chapters. OMG I love this fic! *huggles it* XD
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From ANON - RavenShadow on February 26, 2004
I have tell you I amost cried during this chapter and believe me that is very hard to do. You are a very talented writer and I am more then a little jealous about your style. This is truely a great story and I am both dreading and anticipating the ending. I think it is always a great compliment to a writer when you just don't want to the story to ever end. But as with all great stories their has to be an ending. But incase I am to tired or just plain lazy at the time I want to thank you for writing it. Ok, I think I feed your ego enought for momemoment, again thanks!
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From ANON - shaid on February 26, 2004
YAY!!!! KAGOME'S COMING HOME!!!!! I am rabid for more!!!
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From ANON - drake220 on February 26, 2004
my sympathies with the interesting situations you get into w/ your mom. i've been there too. many maany any many many many many times. you need to update b/c the big reunion chapter is coming up dn i need to know whats going to happen. and the miroku scene was hysterical. only miroku would compare freedom to toasted bread.
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From ANON - LadyCatBailey on February 26, 2004
*snort snicker snicker* "Its FREEDOM!"...Yes...Only Miroku! *cracks up* Highly, highly amusing. *snoooort*
ooOOoo Kagome is comin' home! *bounces* They're gonna see each other at the bus stop, am I right!? GYAH ITS SO SWEEEEEEEEEEEEET! *bounces harder*

Meanwhile, Rin was cracking my shit up. "Iot wot wearing panties." "*heavy breathing*" LOL Its like BWHAHAHAHAHAHA YOU'RE SCREWED!...Well, you're not, and its funny! :p :p :p...I'm so weird.

I can't wait for an update, and how is the lemon tree abearing? *winkwink, nudgenudge* I SERIOUSLY need to stop reading lemons...I'm starting to dream IY fics...>.< Serious to God, last night I dreampt that InuYasha was stripping at a bus stop and Kagome was waving five dollor bills. I blame you! :p LOL Meanwhile, he looks good in black boxers...XD

IEeeee, your mom grabbed KR's ASS? Not faiiiiir *whimpers* I wanna play with his tushy...*bawls*

Waiting faithfully for an update!
Much Love,
Cat
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From ANON - Soranji on February 26, 2004
I lied *explodes*
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