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Reviews for A Bus Stoirytirytale

By : Sabichan

From ANON - Soranji on February 26, 2004
*dances* ok I have stopped exploding
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From ANON - Doriimu Enzeru on February 25, 2004
I dow down to thee who writes the marvelous fic 'A Bus Stop Fairytale'. Flawless twists and turns within the plot keep me on the edge of my seat with each new chapter and update. You are a deity when it comes to updating and I love coming home to my computer with such a fabulous story with new chapters just waiting to be read. I do hope you continue with your wonderful updates and writing perfection.
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From ANON - drake220 on February 25, 2004
i love this story! its so great!! and i know i wasnt suppose to, but i was laughing during the big sessy/inuyasha bonding chapter. one line-i forget now what it was- made me crack up. but the greatest was sango adn miroku- my little sex dumpling- HAHAHA!!!! i cracked up at that one. really, i think one can use the phrase 'luaghed uproariously' adn i've never used that phrase before. honestly, i didnt even think it was possible! look at what you accomplished- not only great chapters but also freaky word usage! very impressive. (oh, adn that lemon tree? bring it on!!)
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From ANON - The Absent Element on February 25, 2004
I have but one thing to say to you.
*deep breath

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*deep breath

For the love of all that is HOLY I EMPLORE YOU TO UPDATE!!!!! PLEASE PLEASEPLEASEPLEASE PLEASE?!?!?!

This is by far my favorite Inuyasha fanfic EVER.
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From ANON - Soranji on February 25, 2004
lemon treee. Can belibelieve this time last year was the first time i ever read a fanfic and I didn't even know what a lemon was...
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From ANON - Draco on February 25, 2004
Excellent Story. I always look forward to reading the latest chapters every day and this story has been a awesome one from chapter 1. Keep up the great writing
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From ANON - LadyCatBailey on February 25, 2004
*bawls hysterically and throws myself on Sesshy* I WANT A BIG BROTHEEEEEEEEEEEEER! *snots on his fluffy* o.o

They're gonna be haaaaappy and have little Inu-s ans and ITS GONNA BE SO FREAKING SWEET!

I truly cannot WAIT for the next update...seriously...update...*whimper whimper* PLeaaaaase? I'm greedy. I need a lemon. LIke bad. Poor InuYasha...he's so...lonely...I STILL want to maim Kikyou. Stupid bitchnaz. *thumps her. Hard*

SOrry this so incoherent. Still on cold meds. Yay!

*Praying for the LEMON YEAH BABY!*

Much Love,
Cat
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From ANON - Soranji on February 24, 2004
hmmmmmmmmmmmm Sesshy
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From ANON - LadyCatBailey on February 24, 2004
Garg. Thats it. *runs away to find myself a musexy hanyou to have and to hold and to molessssst*....Ignore me, I'm eating chocolate. >.
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From ANON - Carrie on February 24, 2004
Hey! Don't blame me for them feeling left out! I don't want to die!

That's really freaky though, all the shit we have in common and I'm the evil twin! I'M the evil one. It's usually the other way around for me ^_^ Do youe nue nuns as much as I do? Everyone I know who went to catholic school, except my mother, seems to hate nuns. June, one of the people I work with, and I often swap horror stories. So much emotional scarring, but atleast they got rid of the whole corpural punishment thing becasue then we'd have emotinal as well as physical scarring. I met some guy who went to my school as d and and he had the same 6th grade teacher I did. He told me that this one time she walked up behind him when he was trying to figure out how to do a math problem he was having trouble with and slammed his head against the blackboard. I never understood how nuns and priest could go do stuff like that. I mean "Do unto other's as you would have done unto you" and all. The only good thing that came out of that hell hole was my best friend. Six years after graduation and we are still friends, but it's not all that suprising because we were all the other had. I helped her pass stuff more than a few times. I wrote a poem for her once and it got a 'B'. A 'B'! You know that if I had handed that in Sister Jenanna would have given it an 'A'. Stupid bitch never did like Katie -_-

Well, enouith ith the 'Little Catholic School of Horror' thing. I found another typo. "But I had been in such a state if shock that entire day..." It should be 'of' instead of 'if'. And you said you appreaciate this stuff so you can't get too mad!

For everyone who seems to enjoy my little random stories I am going to tell you one for no other reason than your enjoyment. I told one of my friends this and she made it an away message. I did alot ofatreatre stuff in high school and every saturday the student tech crew and the set dads (the fathers of some of the acotrs, our directors husband, and our tech director) would get together to build sets. During 'Little Shop of Horrors' me and my friend Lisa were out in the band hallway just outside the auditorium painting window seats and just being our regular insane selves, when she decided that she was going to paint her hand print on the back pocket of my jeans. So Lisa paints her hand and just when she touches my but one of the freshman (we called him hippity hop becasue of lastlast name) walks into the band hallway. So there I am standing up with Lisa neeling behind me with her hand on my ass, and we're just frozen. We all starred at eachother for a while before Hippity shook his head and walked away. One of the funnier moments of my techie days.

Now, to actually say something on the actual chapter, like I should be doing, I think it's so sweet how you made Hitomi, Shiori, and Faye friends. That's just so cute. I like this chapter because knowing how Kagome's mother feels about the whole thing is just adding that extra level to the whole story and we also got a bit of an impression of how the grandfather feesl about all this. What I want to know though is, where is Sota? Haven't heard anything about him lately. I know he's not a main character, but hearing something about him would be nice. ust ust kind of...dissappeared. How does he feel about his sister leaving? It kind of mirrors the Sess leaving thing, minus the complete wreck of a mother to take care of (that sentence ends with a preposition, but there is no way I am fixing it. It sounds too weird.). He's left at home, while his other sibling just up and leaves without a word. I think this is one of the longest reviews I have given to date and less of it than usual has to do with the actual fic lol

I think I'm going to cal it a day (until the next chapter anyway). Ja Ne!

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From ANON - LadyCatByW� y on February 23, 2004
OH...My...FREAKING....GOD....*jibbers like a freaking idiot and points while jumping up and down* DAMNIT! She LEFT! Whyyyyyy....noooooo.....*whimpers pathitically and curls up* I thought we would have an IY/K lemon...*lip trembles* Not to say I wasn't happy with the S/R lemon...*coughs and turns on a fan* Is it hot in here or is it just me? Eh...anywho....I mean...

Honestly, I can't wait for an update. This aganst is enough to kill a person. I mean, Gods, I have cramps from hell and then they're all being dumbasses and Kaggie is all...freaky. Damnit. The human mind is so fucked up. Serious to God, if YOU had Inu-chan banging on YOUR bedroom screaming he loved you, would YOU be all "GO 'way!" Hell naw! I'd be all jumping on him and going "Hell eyah! Ride that shit! WOOOHOOO YEAH, WHOSE YOUR DADDY!?"....*coughs* Man. I need to get laid and stop obsessing with anime bishies....

Sorry. I know I'm rambling. I'm on Midol and Pepsi and frankly...I'm insane. *giggles madly* Truely, I love this fic, and I'm faithfully awaiting an update. Be honored, you're the first person on aff.net I've reviewed. I'm lazy. Very lazy...and plus...I'm always out of it and I didn't know HOW to review...spent ten minutes looking for the review button...and finely found it at the bottom and went...DO'UH! *slaps forehead* Yes. I'm an idiot.

Meanwhile, could I possible borrow Kikyou and use her for target practice? *evil glint* Stupid bitch...*grumble grumble*....

Much love!
Cat
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From ANON - No One Knows on February 23, 2004
Amazing... Simply amazing
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From ANON - Carrie on February 22, 2004
This is completly random and has no importance at all, but I just realized how many typos are in my other reviews. I'm a typo prone typo nazi X_x;;
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From ANON - Carrie on February 22, 2004
*such

That's to fix the typo in my last review. ^_^;; I always do that. Maybe it's like a Feuadian (That's not spelled right, is it?) slip or something. *shrugs*

Oh and thanks a bunch to whoever it was that found it funny (took me less than a minute to forget. Jesus, you'd think I was 80 instead of 19 X_x;;) that I can't type at one o'clock in the morning. Makes me feel so much better. I said I knew grammer, not how to spell. (Please note sarcasm. It is meant to be funny. After all who can you laugh at if not yourself?) That was one thing from grade school that never stuck. I actually failed a spelling test once. That had to be the low point of 4th grade beside when I tripped in the hall way and my skirt flew up and everyone saw my underwear. That taught me a very valuable lesson though: Always wear shorts under your uniform. It also taught me to hate skirts. I am slowly starting to like them again. I wil say this. Even though I may have showed everyone my underwear, untentionally, atleast I never broke a window trying to get it open *coughANTHONYcough* or had a salad bag explode showering the room in lettuce (what is it with me and brining up lettuce in these reviews?).

So much for me not babbling and keeping my review short *laughs*
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From ANON - Carrie on February 22, 2004
Awww. Rin and Sesshie are so cute!

This review is going to be short. I'm being lazy today ^_^ Anyway I'm sure after reading my last review with my ramblings of lettuce throwing monkies you've had enough of me for a while. I found a couple typos in the Rin/Sess thing, but now I can't remember where they were exactly....Sorry >_>;;;

Ja Ne
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