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By : Sabichan

From ANON - Carrie on February 20, 2004
AHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH!!!!!!

I only got to read like half of that chapter before I had to leave for classes. Do you even realize how much ass that sucked? I was seriously considering comeing home early just so I could finish reading, but I thought my mom would yell at me ('cause I still live at home 'cause I'm too poor to move out), but when I got home I found out that I could have come home early because SHE'S NOT HOME! I hate my life sometimes. -_-

Anywho, That was so Kawaii...the kiss and stuff not the thing at the end where Miroku yelled "OH SHIT!" and sped off. *sigh* Okay...going to go read the other chapters so I don't go crazy.

Oh wait....too late. I forgot. I already am. XD
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From ANON - Eyes of Chaos on February 20, 2004
Hi!
I usually don't review much, but I just couldn't help myself... I love this fic!!!!!!!!!!! I cried my heart out in these last few chapters (it was sooo sad when Sango handed the jewel back to Inuyasha *snif*). This fic is amazing, one of the few that I've read so far that actually makes sense, I mean you can really see why the characters react the way they do. Well, I actually had alot to say may it kind of slipped my mind now... anyway, I love the fic, and think you are an amazing writer. This story is turning out to be a real work of art :) Oh, by the way, could you e-mail me so I could know when you are going to update??? I really can't wait to find out what will happen next :) Thx
Oh, and bringing back Sesshomaru now -> genius!!!!

Love, Eyes of Chaos :) I really love this fic (in case you haven't noticed ;) )

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From ANON - Sera on February 20, 2004
1. This fanfic ist f!cking perfect. period.
2. I LOVE all of it. Your amazing talent, the pace, the emotions you can stir up... everything fits together perfectly. Either your EXTREMELY talented or you have spent years just writing this. trust me, everybody sees the effort you're making. Just...wow!
3. I wanted to stomp my feet like a spoiled bart when i heard you wanted to do less updates e-wre-write something. NOOOOO!!! However, I respect your perfectism (does this word even exsist??) It's what makes this story so special.
4. This whole thing is HEARTBREAKING! Every single character is utterly believable. You give so much insight in their heads, you can totally understand what's going on/ why someone makes certain decisions...One the one had, i wanted to shake some sense in Kagome to SEE who she is pushing away....one the other hand, i can somehow understand her. The only person I don't really know what to think of if Naraku. Is he good? Bad? In between? (and, one TINY bit of critisim...really teeny-tiny:) I don't believe he wouldn't interfere if Inuyasha threatens Kouga again....After all, he's Kouga's dad. I can understand that Naraku feels helpless, and ashamed, ang angry. but he loves his son, doesn't he?
But i love love love your story!!:))) I'm had a cracking smile on my face when Sess returned. Ya-HOOO! Can't wait what his story will be!!
All the best!
Sera

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From ANON - Soranji on February 20, 2004
*pieces self back together* im good now lol
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From ANON - Soranji on February 20, 2004
*dies*
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From ANON - Soranji on February 20, 2004
ok i exploded on chapter 26 now again on *ex *explodes*
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From ANON - shaid on February 20, 2004
Thank you for putting that little sango-miroku goodness in. I do love them as a couple. The only couple I love more is Sessh and Rin. Which considering their ages in the story is so wrong it's sick, but hey, my finace is 10 years older tme ame and I like the older guy thing. OH!! speaking of Sessh and Rin... Do you have any intention of using them in the story at all?? Please say yes....

and another thing... Didn't Inu say he hadn't even told Miroku about Kikyo? And how the hell is Inu gonna get himself out of this?? I mean, it's not really his fault, but DAMN, that was really the worst time for that to happen. I want to see a happily ever after here. I'd also like to find out waht really happened to Inu's dad. Do you know yet? Did Naraku really kill him? Will Kouga suddenly deveolp a phobia of anything white, like Inu's hair, and have to be sent to an institution run by a maniacal Hitten where he will become Manten's "bitch?"

ok. I'm not a kouga fan. And I'm now rambling because it's 3 am here and I've been up since... wait, I slept in this morning, nevermind... But I'm enjoying and consequently telling my fiance all about it and boring him to tears. He just has no clue as to why IY is so popular.
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From ANON - Kawool on February 19, 2004
OH MY GOD !
I've just discovereis sis story....
It is ABSOLUTELY AWESOME!!!
One of the greatest Inu/Kag fic I've ever read !!!
Oh and the plot is so exciting !!! No wonder I added you to my fav authors list ^o^
Oh and some chappies remind me so much of my own life...It's fu*king amazing !!!
To put it in a nutshell, I L O V E Y O U R F I C ! Woohoo!!!
I'm glad you finally post it on AFF, please update ASAP n keep up the good work ;)
Huggles
Kawool
(sorry probably murdered the spelling but first it isn't my 1st language, it's 4.00am and i'm too lazy to re-read it LOL)
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From ANON - drake220 on February 19, 2004
EVIL? EVIL DOESN"T BEGIN TO DESCRIBE YOU!!!!!!! i cannot believe you did that to them! stupid stupid stupid stupid stupid stupid moronic idiotic horrid terrible disgusting perverted annoying STUPID KIKYO! i just want to yell at her "Hey you- Ho Bag! GO BACK UNDER THAT ROCK FROM WHENCE YOU CAME!!!" seriously, i'm not a kikyo hater, i think she's a very poignant character but this was unexcusable! i mean, LET GO woman. the kicker was that after she figures out who inu is to her own neice, THEN she makes her move! i was yelling at the screen of my computer (i'm not joking. thank god noone was home. it would have been......embarrassing) "oooooohhh bitch you did NOT just do that! GET OFF HIM! NOW!!!"
ahem
now that that little rant is done, all i can say is that these chapters are great! absolutely amazing! inu kicking kouga's ass= YAY!! such a great scene! and the b-day party was ame ame adn so comfortable. youldould see the relaxastion, feel how happy they all were. adn the day off was funny adn perfect. but the crowning achievement was definitly the sad inu chapter, the last line especially. i mean, it really got to me. i was all faklempt if you know what i mean.
one question: why the hell is shiori liking naraku? ewww- he knocked off her husband! and if she does get with him (::shudders::) then i want to see the evidence naraku found that inu's dad and kagura ran away togather! and it hadbetter be pretty damn convincing. that's all
KUDOS TO YOU FOR AWESOME WRITING!!!! i give you.......an entire plate of krispy kreme for your consumptive pleasure! enjoy!
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From ANON - Carrie on February 19, 2004
I will not dissagree with that. You are indeed one evil person, but hey, everyone wouldn't be reading this story if they cared, now would they? I know I don't care. I have kno known on occasion to be quite evil myself.

This one time to get back at this guy who was being a dick to my friends I made a SN and pretended I saw him at one of his hockey games and decided I had to talk to him. I kept it going for like a month or something. Every morning I would come into school with the convo that I had with him and me and my friends would either read it before homeroom or at lunch and just laugh our asses off. When I finally told him, damn. Priceless is all I cay. Iy. It was priceless. A couple days after I told him, his skank of the week IMed me and kept calling me a cunt so I made fun or her and then the asshole IMed me and told me to stop upsetting his girlfriend. Pfft, she brought it on herself. I'm SO getting off topic, but you did say you like rambling so whatev'

Anyway, THIS STORY ROCKS! While I don't see myself blowing up anytime in theure,ure, I do jump up and down alot in my seat while I'm reading! Please oh please email me when you update. It will stop me from going to this site like every hour checking to see if you updated. I am such a pathetic loser. lol I really should go start trying to update my fics before people on ff/net start killing me. I already had one person threaten torture and another say they would stalk me. People these days they will do anything to- UPDATE OR I WILL HUNT YOU DOWN- to get someone to give then what they want ^_^ Bye Bye
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From ANON - Carrie on February 19, 2004
I FUCKING KNEW IT!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

I knew it! As soon as Kagome started talking about her aunt I knew it was Kikyo! OMG you evil evil person. *laughs* This is one hell of a plot twist. *screams* OMG OMG OMG! This just keeps getting better and better. *squeals and goes to read next chapter*
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From ANON - Carrie on February 19, 2004
It's about fucking time! I thought my friends were going to shot me yesterday because I kept whinning that the chapters weren't up! so so pathetic. >_> I was going crazy because A FANFICTION WAS NOT UPDATED! Is that normal? That can't be normal. I think I'm just a very obsessive peerson or something. *shrugs* Whatever.

I so didn't think the last few chapters were filler. I liked them. They were neccisary (I spelled that wrong didn't I? It looks wrong to me...) and shit. And of course I love you! This fic has sucked me in and won't let me go. I think I might cry when it's over, which I hope wonbe fbe for a very, VERY long time. ^_^ Okay well I'm going to go read the other chapters. Expect another review. Hell maybe I'll even leave two more. Who know.
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From ANON - Shaid on February 19, 2004
Sabichan you are so evil, throwing Kikyou in there! I knew you would. You had to. But it still makes me want to rip the bitch's hair out.

I am really loving this story! I wasn't sure I would, just reading the description, but wow. I mean Really WOW. I look forward to reading it. Can you e-mail me when there are updates??? Please please please?

Merci!!!

Shaid
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From ANON - ME on February 19, 2004
You ARE so evil!!!! Ack!!....cliffie.......killing....me.....DAMN KIKYOU---fucking slut--DIE!!!!!! okay, normally I'm not into Kikyou bashing, and I really don't think she's an evil character in general, but..........WHAT THE HELL IS THAT BITCH THINKING!!!!!!!!!!! man, you've made me not like her^_^ *breathe in, breathe out* I'm fine--REALLY!!! no, I mean...really^_O
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From ANON - kettricken on February 18, 2004
I realized tonight that I haven't reviewed your fic in a looong time, and I wanted to say, first off, that it's NOT because I haven't been enjoying it to no end. =7 No, no, it's because I have this terrible habit of reading just before I go to class (cause I can't wait till afterwards!) and then running out the door to make it there on time. It's official--this is my absolute favorite story that's currently in progress! I love, love, LOVE what you've been doing with Kagome--her wit-matches with Inuyasha are sparkling, and it's developing her character at the same time, that she uses it as a defense mechanism. And hey--just what exactly IS the Shikon noa ina in the story, anyway?! I was impressed by your description of the fight between Kouga and Inuyasha as well--enough detail to know what's going on, but no more than Inuyasha himself would've been aware of at the time. The whole thing is great...sorry, I'm gushing (I tend to ramble, could you tell?), but I have to say that this is one of the most well-written fanfics I've ever read, for creativity, flow, and hegramgrammar and spelling and all that junk too. But if you don't get them back together soon...nah, you will. I have faith. =) Keep 'em coming!
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